RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[The Jailer]

Yeah, it just kind of goes from 0 to 100 all of a sudden. Like I don't need to see every event that happened in the day, but like what happened to make her give him a blowjob again? And I guess overall what else were they doing for her to get all hot and bothered? It would have probably built up to be a little more interesting versus just cutting to them drinking wine bottles.

But also maybe to rewrite the scene, it would have probably been better if throughout the day Inoda was getting Asuna progressively more horny before they went at it.

hey he listened and will add some CG's before the fuck part it's a win for us

 

[4-kun]

e.g., Q&A
Q (No one asked this though): How is the world in this game different from the original anime work?
A: The "Fairy Dance" and "Phantom Bullet" stories did not happen. Since the SEED was not open-sourced by Kirito, there are no large numbers of VR games like in the original work. FOG is the best choice available to all players.
Q: Why is the CG action design so conservative this time?
A: Considering the particularity of Asuna and Inoda's first voluntary real-life sex, she may refuse some advanced sexual positions. As the plot develops, the interaction between the two will escalate. Please look forward to it.

That's what people want to know?

 

[Aniky Light]

That's what people want to know?

that's certainly not what I wanted to know

 

[kinglionheart]

That's what people want to know?

Apparently!
Funny he didn't mention how it was Asuna's father not Kirito that saved Asuna from Sugou. That should be a lot more important than there are less VR worlds.

Also he said Sinon is a well known player in GGO during the Council introduction scene. But GGO should not exist without the Seed being public. Guess Fujino should had a lore nerd like Alter check things before making the post.

hey he listened and will add some CG's before the fuck part it's a win for us

Yea maybe something to do with the anal plug during the Asuna yoga scene? That has just untapped gold right there.

 

[Aniky Light]

Does this mean we are getting new maps? FOG is offline again, Inoda and Asuna is still stuck in their hotel room with their all-they-can-fuck buffet. Maybe Kirito is going somewhere IRL? I can't imagine where.

he's going to her cousin xD

 

[kinglionheart]

he's going to her cousin xD

Suguha's home already has a map. There is a amusement park location on the map that was never used. If Kirito and Suguha does go on a date, it would be funny if we see Inoda and Asuna fucking interplaying during the date.

 

[The Jailer]

Does this mean we are getting new maps? FOG is offline again, Inoda and Asuna is still stuck in their hotel room with their all-they-can-fuck buffet. Maybe Kirito is going somewhere IRL? I can't imagine where.

FOG is offline but for how long ? maybe we will get a lot of days this time since it's a 2 month update and the content of those days will mostly be "Kirito's goes to work -> see's Inoda and her cousin fuck like rabbits on the computer at work" -> video call (they are still fucking of course) -> sleep" so maybe we will go to fog in the next update and that's why we have new maps

 

[mos555]

Apparently!
Funny he didn't mention how it was Asuna's father not Kirito that saved Asuna from Sugou. That should be a lot more important than there are less VR worlds.

Also he said Sinon is a well known player in GGO during the Council introduction scene. But GGO should not exist without the Seed being public. Guess Fujino should had a lore nerd like Alter check things before making the post.


Yea maybe something to do with the anal plug during the Asuna yoga scene? That has just untapped gold right there.

The "Fairy Dance" and "Phantom Bullet" stories did not happen. Since the SEED was not open-sourced by Kirito, there are no large numbers of VR games like in the original work.

That is, Fujino hints that there are no such games in the world of his interpretation at all, then how did Asuna get to Sugo in the first place. Did Sugo create a separate playground for himself to keep Asuna there? Another plot hole.

 

[Aniky Light]

Let's remember that Fujino also wants to give priority to other characters

 

[mos555]

Suguha's home already has a map. There is a amusement park location on the map that was never used. If Kirito and Suguha does go on a date, it would be funny if we see Inoda and Asuna fucking interplaying during the date.

If Kirito and Suguha FINALLY go on a date, it won't matter what Inoda and Asuna are doing there.

FOG is offline but for how long ? maybe we will get a lot of days this time since it's a 2 month update and the content of those days will mostly be "Kirito's goes to work -> see's Inoda and her cousin fuck like rabbits on the computer at work" -> video call (they are still fucking of course) -> sleep" so maybe we will go to fog in the next update and that's why we have new maps

If FOG goes offline for a week, then it would be better to just skip the time. Because going to work for 7 days and watching Asuna and Inoda fuck is very depressing content.

 

[kinglionheart]

FOG is offline but for how long ? maybe we will get a lot of days this time since it's a 2 month update and the content of those days will mostly be "Kirito's goes to work -> see's Inoda and her cousin fuck like rabbits on the computer at work" -> video call (they are still fucking of course) -> sleep" so maybe we will go to fog in the next update and that's why we have new maps

Inoda only has one week to turn Asuna from a temporary sefure to permanent sex slave. So at least for the following week he will need to lock her up in endless cycle of carnal desires IRL. Seems like a lot of work even for a two month development cycle to include more FOG stuff.

The "Fairy Dance" and "Phantom Bullet" stories did not happen. Since the SEED was not open-sourced by Kirito, there are no large numbers of VR games like in the original work.

That is, Fujino hints that there are no such games in the world of his interpretation at all, then how did Asuna get to Sugo in the first place. Did Sugo create a separate playground for himself to keep Asuna there? Another plot hole.

Good point. Those scenes with Titania and Oberon should not have happened then.

 

[Aniky Light]

Suguha's home already has a map. There is a amusement park location on the map that was never used. If Kirito and Suguha does go on a date, it would be funny if we see Inoda and Asuna fucking interplaying during the date.

are you saying that while the Kirigayas go out together, on the other side appears what Asuna and Inoda do? (remember that they are still stuck in the hotel), I prefer to see what Kirito and Suguha will do, if there will be space for them

 

[kinglionheart]

If Kirito and Suguha FINALLY go on a date, it won't matter what Inoda and Asuna are doing there.

are you saying that while the Kirigayas go out together, on the other side appears what Asuna and Inoda do? (remember that they are still stuck in the hotel), I prefer to see what Kirito and Suguha will do, if there will be space for them

Just like how we know other times Inoda is fucking Asuna, while Kirito and Suguha is on their date, we only see brief censored images of what they are doing in their hotel room. Then we have to go to recollection room to see the full scene.

It would be fair since both couple is having fun with other people without the other couple knowing about it. Everyone is happy with cheating!

 

[mos555]

"After careful consideration, and since many people want me to add 1 or 2 scenes before AF in event of 7/12, I will spend some time to make that."

During sex on 7/11, Asuna completely fallen. Asuna, during the internal monologue, refused to resist for herself or for Kirito's sake. Based on this, it's even interesting what Fujino will do. Perhaps on 7/12 in the morning, Asuna will have a relapse again and she will start to resist again and talks about ending everything after quarantine. Or maybe in the morning Asuna will become completely obedient and will do whatever Inoda wants. Was there a point in all the conversations about ending a relationship, or was it just another shot into the void?

 

[Aniky Light]

my reaction when I see Inoda and Asuna fucking, of course if you always see them fucking, eventually your balls fall to the ground xD

 

[mos555]

Just like how we know other times Inoda is fucking Asuna, while Kirito and Suguha is on their date, we only see brief censored images of what they are doing in their hotel room. Then we have to go to recollection room to see the full scene.

It would be fair since both couple is having fun with other people without the other couple knowing about it. Everyone is happy with cheating!

In any case, we can assume that Kirito and Suguha may have a normal relationship, but thanks to Inoda's blog and generally knowing what kind of person he is, Asuna and Inoda definitely won't have a normal relationship. So, all in all, it would be a small revenge from Kirito. Moreover, Suguha knows that Asuna is cheating, and will try to surround Kirito with maximum care.

 

[Aniky Light]

have you noticed that lately Fujino does not say what he added but only relies on percentages

 

[Aniky Light]

In any case, we can assume that Kirito and Suguha may have a normal relationship, but thanks to Inoda's blog and generally knowing what kind of person he is, Asuna and Inoda definitely won't have a normal relationship. So, all in all, it would be a small revenge from Kirito. Moreover, Suguha knows that Asuna is cheating, and will try to surround Kirito with maximum care.
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Inoda won't give her a break, Asuna won't even have time to go to the bathroom xD

 

[mos555]

have you noticed that lately Fujino does not say what he added but only relies on percentages

Because people are always shouting in the comments.: "Where's Suguha? Where's Liz? Where's Sinon?" Fujino decided that it was better to let the amount of content and the events of the characters remain a surprise than to constantly read these comments.

Inoda won't give her a break, Asuna won't even have time to go to the bathroom xD

To hell with it. After POV 7\11, I believe, that the corruption and Asuna's story in this game is over. Nothing else interesting will happen to her. Sex without a condom, pregnancy - it's all just content for jerking off. Maybe she'll really piss in bed, that'll be funny. Her's just getting used to living in a pigsty.

 

[Queen_Nothing]

have you noticed that lately Fujino does not say what he added but only relies on percentages

Yeah, he said he was going to be more vague about update content now that we're near the end of the chapter.