lostraven

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So... i played this game for 5 hours straight, and basically finished all of it (having something around 97% of cgi's completed) and what can i say about it?

Well, it's bad. Like, almost everything besides art in this game sucks, and even art in some scenes are just so much worse than in other scenes (for example french teacher buttjob, she just looks fucking weird in it).

As of now, there's only something like 5 actual sex scenes in the game (and that's after a year of development, yikes) 2 of which are with Gerda, and 3 or so with Clara, which when you think about it from story perspective doesn't make any sense, since there's are much better girls that they could've started with, for example Becca basically starts the story (since saving her leads to mc's trauma) yet she doesn't have a sex scene even after a year of development.

And actually even those scenes that we have are mostly bad, for example Gerda's first scene should've been hot, but her husband sits in front of a bed on a chair and jerks off looking at mc fucking his wife and it's her first sex scene, it's not optional since if you want to fuck her, you HAVE to sit through 1 scene of cuckolding (even though YOU cuckold her husband, he still sits there and jerks off which honestly kind of a big turn off for me). And the sex scene? Holy fuck, what a disappointment... The point of view in this scene are from ceiling, with mc's lying ON Gerda so you don't see her body, only ass of mc. And this scene are without any animation, so this whole event are just you reading text and looking at mc's ass, what a great fucking idea.

Actually, basically most sex scenes in this game are like this, you don't get to see them from mc's POV (and when you get to, it's just too close to the bottom of the screen, so you have to remove textbox to see what's going on down there).

What i genuinely don't understand is that scene where you get to see mc fuck Gerda from behind from his POV are amazing, and her husband isn't there, so what was the problem to make a cuckolding optional? I understand that it was for story, but story is the worst thing in this game, so what's the point? I think that if this game had a lot more content like this, it would've been amazing, since you know... it's a PORN GAME and not a book.

So why is this story so bad? Well, let's start from the stupidest thing, this whole story doesn't make any sense. For example, when mc talks with Becca, he acts as if he's THE dumbest person on this planet, not understanding that she obviously likes him even when his split personality tells him that, practically screaming at him that he's dumb. And i would've been perfectly fine with that, since maybe it's because mc was bullied and has a very low self esteem, and maybe he's just a little bit dumb, but if you go and romance someone else and not Becca, mc acts perfectly fine. Maybe a little too meek, but he actually acts like a normal human being. So what's the point?

There's so much stupid stuff in this story that if i'll try to talk about all of it, it will take me a hour. For example, why would you french teacher give you money for your cum, when she's addicted to drugs, so even if there's explanation, where would she get money from? Why the fuck Darnell can do whatever he want? It's not like he has money, or any influence, so why the fuck after so much harassment and probably rape no one ever tried to get him kicked out of the school? For fucks sake, he's even in the same class as daughter of biggest contributors of this school, and you even get told repeatedly that if you harass her you will be kicked out of school, and will have to go to shittiest public school in this city, and he harasses her, so why the fuck is he still in school? What was the point of taking Harry's photos and then blackmailing him? Or what was the point of placing cams in Gerda's house? And why the fuck is there a lady neighbor that gets trained for sex by her mistress that has no content other than that, when game has almost no content?

And besides all of that even dialogues are bad. The dialogues between mc an his second personality are amazing, but other than that? Everything is really bad.

And what's with these cockblocking situations that happen in the game? There are so many of them that at some point i started imagining that artist was just tired of drawing this scene, so he shouts to the writers that he won't be finishing it, and after being asked what the fuck they were supposed to do with it, he just shouts back that they are the writers and should do their work.

And what a cool coincidence that every woman in mc's city is a submissive BDSM loving slut and mc's second personality are a BDSM loving domination freak with gigantic penis (they say in game that he is as long as horse's, but in art it looks even bigger, what the fuck). Even your ingame mother, or well, Mary, is a slut, and licks semi-dry cum from mc's underwear while masturbating. And you ingame sister, or well, Tiffany, is so submissive that when your ingame almost-comical bully Darnell tells her to show her ass to you and him in school, she does it.

As for gameplay, it's a mess too. Stats are useless, strength are just for Gerda's quest line, and other stat just grows from seeing events i guess, and does nothing. There's only few locations in this game, that open when you get to a specific point in someones quest line (for example i had quest for looking around Darnell's house, but i didn't know where his house were because i didn't get to a specific point in french teacher quest line), while actually useful ones are you home, school and shop. You don't get to choose a lot in dialogues, so mostly you just choose whichever character you want to pursue now, and just read text (and this doesn't work sometimes because you didn't get to some other character specific point in quest line, so you can't even really romance a single character)

This whole game are actually a buggy mess. I've had so many bugs that it's crazy. Sometimes choice buttons had no text on them, so i had to blindly guess, sometimes quests just disappeared and then appeared again. I even had Tiffany quest line break, or maybe it was intended, but after throwing Tiffany's ball with Beccy she threw it away, and i had to go look for in at Gerda's house, but the thing is that i had quest before this event that told me to get a rope and get Tiffany's ball, but you get Tiffany's ball by just climbing a tree, so what was the point of that rope?
Hi, sorry you didn't like our game.

A few points,
The main story is not even in the game yet, I had many many[i/] issues to work through with the main developer from the previous writer/state the game was left in. Hence many of the previous weird scenes such as the teacher selling your cum, (that I intend to try remove with Uber down the line and replace with a more logical job).

I was faced with a choice between tearing the whole game down and starting again with Uber, (which would take months), or to actually add content and try work-around and alter the content in the meanwhile, I choice the latter.

Many of the stats an RPG elements are going to be hugely expanded upon soon.

We're going to be producing content pretty much faster than most of the devs on here thought possible, and we're only going to be able to produce it faster and higher quality with time. This is a two-man production currently.

As a side note, If you truly hate this game, investing over 5 hours in it is truly insane and masochistic.

This game is going to be very plot-heavy, and as you've stated you don't like reading so much, you're probably better off elsewhere.
 

jaydem

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Nobody is going to be forced to play the trap route, it's optional and you'll get an alternative 'straight' scene with a different character instead.
lostraven
While I love the fact that there will be an alt route for trap, I do have a questions though.

1) Isn't the whole point in a trap, the fact that no one knows that the chick is really a guy until sexual situation reveals it?
In this case everyone knows Danny is a boy.....everyone at school, the neighborhood, and yes (even his Mother).

2) With the above, Wouldn't it then be more Trappy (as it were) if Danny....with a Y...is indeed a trap (but a reverse one) and is really Danny....with an I??
Through a sexual encounter with Danni, the MC will be pleasantly surprised to find out that Danni is just an under developed girl.....then can add to the MC's harem......or......to Darnel's list of NTR bitches he takes from MC...Lol!!

I'm not trying to start nothing, not even spitballing………if it sounds that way, I apologize, as is not my intention.
Just curious.....and would that be something that maybe you guys would consider??

It's not that big of a deal, but would be awesome...…..Anyways you guys are doing good work, and I'm looking forward to the MEGA update!!………...……...…………..Peace!!
 

lostraven

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lostraven
While I love the fact that there will be an alt route for trap, I do have a questions though.

1) Isn't the whole point in a trap, the fact that no one knows that the chick is really a guy until sexual situation reveals it?
In this case everyone knows Danny is a boy.....everyone at school, the neighborhood, and yes (even his Mother).

2) With the above, Wouldn't it then be more Trappy (as it were) if Danny....with a Y...is indeed a trap (but a reverse one) and is really Danny....with an I??
Through a sexual encounter with Danni, the MC will be pleasantly surprised to find out that Danni is just an under developed girl.....then can add to the MC's harem......or......to Darnel's list of NTR bitches he takes from MC...Lol!!

I'm not trying to start nothing, not even spitballing………if it sounds that way, I apologize, as is not my intention.
Just curious.....and would that be something that maybe you guys would consider??

It's not that big of a deal, but would be awesome...…..Anyways you guys are doing good work, and I'm looking forward to the MEGA update!!………...……...…………..Peace!!
I have to admit, the terminology with 'Trap' I'm using a little loose...But you will have the powers in-game to make him even more feminine.

There is also a hint *cough* with the bunk beds for players who wished Danny was indeed, a straight up girl.
 

Onloup

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Speaking of the plot why do I get the feeling that Darnel's sister is like the big bitch of the town and runs a lot of the shady things that go around it, that or the principal.

To me at least it'd make sense because Darnel's scared of her yet Darnel likes to bully and control everyone else. We've also already seen the MC's neighbor with the large dildo/eggplant [can't remember] was talking to someone presumably Darnel's sister about a sub and dom relationship.


Idk just a little theory I have in mind
 

L1Wei

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I know that everything i say now will be mean and douchey, but i just want to say everything i have on my mind about this game, cause i honestly feel that it has a lot of potential and could be very good, but it's current state makes me kinda angry.

The main story is not even in the game yet, I had many many[i/] issues to work through with the main developer from the previous writer/state the game was left in. Hence many of the previous weird scenes such as the teacher selling your cum, (that I intend to try remove with Uber down the line and replace with a more logical job).

I was faced with a choice between tearing the whole game down and starting again with Uber, (which would take months), or to actually add content and try work-around and alter the content in the meanwhile, I choice the latter.
I honestly don't even understand how you would make a main story for this game, cause it's premise is just a bullied dude getting split personality that wants to fuck, and a lot of beautiful horny women that are completely fine with being dominated and humiliated around him. He even has a GIGANTIC cock, which apparently doesn't scare or weird out women, but actually makes them even hornier. Fuck, that's your typical porn game plot if i have ever seen one, and there's no fucking way you could make this game have a meaningful story without revamping it completely, which leads to a point - why would you take this game if you want to change it completely? It would be completely fine if it was just a porn-based game with story and not a story-based game with porn, it's not like there's a lot of good porn games, and you definitely could make an amazing porn game with that premise, but you just have to change it to a completely new game.

Many of the stats an RPG elements are going to be hugely expanded upon soon.
But why though? It's not like there's a lot of content that could be stat-gated. Or maybe you're going to change a lot of scenes?

We're going to be producing content pretty much faster than most of the devs on here thought possible, and we're only going to be able to produce it faster and higher quality with time. This is a two-man production currently.
That's sounds nice, but i feel kinda bad because i know that even if you will change or add a lot of content i still won't really love this game, just because it heavily leans on BDSM and domination, which i honestly think could be good, but it's not good in this game.

I have no idea how every woman in this game could enjoy being around mc when he nonstop humiliates them. And holy shit, even if somehow every woman in this city is a complete masochist and loves to be humiliated, i don't understand how could they enjoy having sex with him when his dick are so massive. Like what the fuck. At the start of a game when mc stands naked before mirror his dick are completely fine. Yes, it's big, but it looks like a penis and not like a barrel. So why would you go with this gigantic thing? And at some arts it's even bigger, holy fuck.

As a side note, If you truly hate this game, investing over 5 hours in it is truly insane and masochistic.
It sounds... kinda mean i guess? But i didn't outright hate this game, at the start i even quite liked it even with all of these rapey/NTR vibes scenes. But the more i played it, the more i was disappointed. When i got to the first sex scene (and yes i don't count blowjobs and buttjobs as sex) i was already tired and just wanted to finish it and see how much content there is after a year of development, and there was basically none. Just a few sex scenes, like what the fuck?

This game is going to be very plot-heavy, and as you've stated you don't like reading so much, you're probably better off elsewhere.
Uhm... i don't think i ever stated that i disliked reading. I actually love it, and i've read most of the text/dialogues in game, which is why i can tell you that story sucks and doesn't make any sense. Characters say one thing and do another. Some things were said or happened once, and was never mentioned again. And even some characters don't make any sense, because this game has a pitifully small amount of content, so why would you try to add a few meaningless characters?
 

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I know that everything i say now will be mean and douchey, but i just want to say everything i have on my mind about this game, cause i honestly feel that it has a lot of potential and could be very good, but it's current state makes me kinda angry.


I honestly don't even understand how you would make a main story for this game, cause it's premise is just a bullied dude getting split personality that wants to fuck, and a lot of beautiful horny women that are completely fine with being dominated and humiliated around him. He even has a GIGANTIC cock, which apparently doesn't scare or weird out women, but actually makes them even hornier. Fuck, that's your typical porn game plot if i have ever seen one, and there's no fucking way you could make this game have a meaningful story without revamping it completely, which leads to a point - why would you take this game if you want to change it completely? It would be completely fine if it was just a porn-based game with story and not a story-based game with porn, it's not like there's a lot of good porn games, and you definitely could make an amazing porn game with that premise, but you just have to change it to a completely new game.
Every story at it's foundation is utterly basic to it's genre, and this game's narrative seems basic now, because it's just the foundation. I'm now going to start adding blocks to it to make it more complex.
and as much as I'd love to reveal more about the plot but honestly I can't, it's a total lock and key as far as I'm concerned.
All I can say is it will be very VERY different than a lot of people are expecting. It's not about changing 'everything', it's about structure and understanding your audience. This game was dead in the water for fundamentally misunderstanding it's audience. You can totally disagree with my methods, but this game is starting to thrive.


But why though? It's not like there's a lot of content that could be stat-gated. Or maybe you're going to change a lot of scenes?
Split paths, various decisions made in-game etc etc.

That's sounds nice, but i feel kinda bad because i know that even if you will change or add a lot of content i still won't really love this game, just because it heavily leans on BDSM and domination, which i honestly think could be good, but it's not good in this game.

I have no idea how every woman in this game could enjoy being around mc when he nonstop humiliates them. And holy shit, even if somehow every woman in this city is a complete masochist and loves to be humiliated, i don't understand how could they enjoy having sex with him when his dick are so massive. Like what the fuck. At the start of a game when mc stands naked before mirror his dick are completely fine. Yes, it's big, but it looks like a penis and not like a barrel. So why would you go with this gigantic thing? And at some arts it's even bigger, holy fuck.
I mean, by that same token you must dislike pretty much 90% of every MC ever, the huge dick thing is just a trope, a glorified power fantasy at it's most primitive. Much like the actual scenarios of ANY porn (Because let's face it, reality would probably drag in a lot more lawyers, police, criminal cases and psychiatrists for the amount of weird shit in porn) relies totally on suspension of disbelief.


It sounds... kinda mean i guess? But i didn't outright hate this game, at the start i even quite liked it even with all of these rapey/NTR vibes scenes. But the more i played it, the more i was disappointed. When i got to the first sex scene (and yes i don't count blowjobs and buttjobs as sex) i was already tired and just wanted to finish it and see how much content there is after a year of development, and there was basically none. Just a few sex scenes, like what the fuck?
The amount of sex scenes are about to increase drastically with the Mega updates. Like a crazy amount of content is going to be added.

A lot of the issues go down to the previous 'problems' before I arrived and teamed up with Uber. There was a lot of uncertainty etc etc, and the early scenes that blurred the lines with rape and NTR nearly killed the game dead in it's track, I can safely say you are the minority for actually liking it, (no offence).


Uhm... i don't think i ever stated that i disliked reading. I actually love it, and i've read most of the text/dialogues in game, which is why i can tell you that story sucks and doesn't make any sense. Characters say one thing and do another. Some things were said or happened once, and was never mentioned again. And even some characters don't make any sense, because this game has a pitifully small amount of content, so why would you try to add a few meaningless characters?
I won't lie, that probably come across as harsher than I mean't it. I'm not generally in the best mood tonight, so I'm normally a lot more friendly.

Every character is going to have content that's either relevant to the main story, or their own individual side quest.
 
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