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botc76

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Well, chapter 2 felt a bit short compared to 1, but overall I enjoy this game.
The mirrored family relations between MC and Eros and their moms and sisters is an interesting idea for a game like this, the renders while maybe not the best, are still good and I think the writing already improved a bit.

Overall a game I will continue to check out.
 

Look-see

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havent tried chapter two. lost interest after it said choices were removed :LOL:
take away the interaction and its basically just plain porn. no point calling it a game. might have to add kinetic novel tag

Edit: by the way i believe you should do the "game" the way you want. but i wont lie. if i ever download it later on i probably wont read the story if theres no choices involved and likely just end up CTRL my way through for the naughty bits. :sneaky:
 
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RoadWulf

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Alright so:
Removing the choices actually improved the game since I didn't really forsee this as being a "Choose your own path" game in the first place.

The God stuff was much better than the first go round, i love the introduction of the Angelica and Daimonia.

Little goof: In the Shower Scene of Chapter 2, the MC's name comes up as Eros, regardless of what name you chose at the beginning of Chapter 1. I figure that's probably just a tagging error on your part.

Overall the feel of the kinetic novel version was much better. Drawing the parallels between Eros and his sisters helps you figure out the personalities of the MC and his sisters. There was a slight mention of Kate having teased the MC before only to shut him down, but it still feels a little too "jump started" in his messing around with her. He clearly has no qualms about it, so they've either done stuff in the past or he has no conscience when it comes to Kate.

I do question how Patreon hasn't flagged you yet for incest content.
 
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Alorth

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Alright so:
Removing the choices actually improved the game since I didn't really forsee this as being a "Choose your own path" game in the first place.

The God stuff was much better than the first go round, i love the introduction of the Angelica and Daimonia.

Little goof: In the Shower Scene of Chapter 2, the MC's name comes up as Eros, regardless of what name you chose at the beginning of Chapter 1. I figure that's probably just a tagging error on your part.

Overall the feel of the kinetic novel version was much better. Drawing the parallels between Eros and his sisters helps you figure out the personalities of the MC and his sisters. There was a slight mention of Kate having teased the MC before only to shut him down, but it still feels a little too "jump started" in his messing around with her. He clearly has no qualms about it, so they've either done stuff in the past or he has no conscience when it comes to Kate.

I do question how Patreon hasn't flagged you yet for incest content.
Thanks for the info, the name appearing 'Eros in ch2 shower is indeed a tagging error, thanks for bringing it up, I will correct it on the next update.

I happy to hear that my game improved not only in my eyes but also in the eyes of others.

About patreon, well how can I be flagged if the game on my patreon page has no incest?
Well others shouldn't worry about that, but if something should happen I just have to spend more time then.
 
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batman666

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I enjoyed the first chapter albeit it being a bit short. Downloaded this just now and started with my save at chapter 2.

+ Girls are hot
+ Shower scene with Kate was nice

- Seriously? The second chapter was like... 3 minutes of playtime without any choices. Why is this put out as a new release? I mean, I can't be the only one who was looking forward to more of the game. But this was a literal joke. Had high praise for the first release, but this second one just seemed super lazy. I'll sit the next few releases out and check back, maybe at chapter 5 or 6. I'm disappointed, all the more because the quality of what's there is good.
 

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I enjoyed the first chapter albeit it being a bit short. Downloaded this just now and started with my save at chapter 2.

+ Girls are hot
+ Shower scene with Kate was nice

- Seriously? The second chapter was like... 3 minutes of playtime without any choices. Why is this put out as a new release? I mean, I can't be the only one who was looking forward to more of the game. But this was a literal joke. Had high praise for the first release, but this second one just seemed super lazy. I'll sit the next few releases out and check back, maybe at chapter 5 or 6. I'm disappointed, all the more because the quality of what's there is good.
You may feel it is short because you didn't play ch1 again, it was remade and you missed important content of story.
Chapter one even got extra content, that is why ch2 came a bit short
 
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batman666

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You may feel it is short because you didn't play ch1 again, it was remade and you missed important content of story.
Chapter one even got extra content, that is why ch2 came a bit short
I have to admit, I missed the part about the remade first chapter. How many new renders are there? If it's really a lot new stuff, I will totally play it again.
 
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I have to admit, I missed the part about the remade first chapter. How many new renders are there? If it's really a lot new stuff, I will totally play it again.
The major difference is at the start, you get to know about Angelica and Daimonia and every render from god path was remade, story is different too.
You have to understand that half the time was invested again into Ch1.
That is why Ch3 will be the biggest chapter, because I can work only on it then and because it will have a lot of story.
 

batman666

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Okay, I checked out chapter 1 again. The renders do look pretty nice now.

Alright then, I'm patiently waiting for the big third chapter. ;)
 
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fuckyouassholes

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Alorth hey there !

first off, i just wanna say that the girls are quite sexy, so well done on that !

secondly, i like the different take on the story

if you don't mind, can i ask how long is the game planned to be ?

or like, how many more chapters are planned in total ?

thank you so much for making this !
 
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Alorth

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Alorth hey there !

first off, i just wanna say that the girls are quite sexy, so well done on that !

secondly, i like the different take on the story

if you don't mind, can i ask how long is the game planned to be ?

or like, how many more chapters are planned in total ?

thank you so much for making this !
It is planned to be finished around Ch8 or Ch9 I guess, but I don't want to rush the story.
It is even possible that I'll make extra chapters if till then I get enough support and fans ask me for it.
I should also mention that the chapters after this one will be bigger so don't think that it is not much.
 

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It is planned to be finished around Ch8 or Ch9 I guess, but I don't want to rush the story.
It is even possible that I'll make extra chapters if till then I get enough support and fans ask me for it.
thank you for the reply

you got a good game going here, keep up the good work !
 
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Alorth

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thank you for the reply

you got a good game going here, keep up the good work !
I wish everyone would think like you, I'm working on this for 5 months now and the game has gone through a lot of changes. Getting any support is hard no matter how better I make the quality or the story till now.
 
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fuckyouassholes

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I wish everyone would think like you, I'm working on this for 5 months now and the game has gone through a lot of changes. Getting any support is hard no matter how better I make the quality or the story till now.
i'll tell you one thing ... this adult game market is tricky
in the sense that ... well, you know everyone pretty much plays these games for one reason ( to fap )

fapping in itself is a hurried and knee-jerk action/reaction.

so its natural that people who are your audience, will be VERY IMPATIENT to see the good stuff ( you know what i mean )

i used to be like that too, but i have somewhat restrained it.

i believe the audience should let the devs make a concrete and confident decision on the length and scope of the game.

and then wait for the good stuff to come with time.

its hard to be patient, but its never hard to be nice and appreciative for the people making the stuff.

i appreciate every content creator whose content i like. and i encourage them to keep working on their project to completion as well, so that they also feel an achievement when they complete the work, get support for their project. and the audience also gets what they want !

see how that's a win-win, instead of calling out the devs ?

my advice is to keep at it, you're making some stuff ( hey it got me feeling ... you know, good :p )

you will achieve some good results

Best of Luck !
 
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amiable34

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anyone else press h to make dialogue disappear and it doesn,t work.plus where are choices.this guy seems reluctant wimp.given choices he can say yes or no at least.just my opinion.
 
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