VN Ren'Py Tales Of Sanctaris Arcane [v0.1.2] [Gladerine]

[Simpgor]

one of the really real reviews (pushmybuttons) mentions this being in their top 3 considering that they 95% of their rated games are 5/5 it seems unlikely that this one (with 0 reasons given) is "top 3" especially considering this is a first release and more concerning it looks like a good portion of their reviews are "ai made", inconsistent grammar, often right around 200 characters, tons of werid copy paste errors like reviews ending in the middle of a word thats just a random one in the sentence, and NONE of them mention any characters by names, any events in partifuclar, why any of the graphics are good/bad etc..... considering the fact that multiple of them have been removed? (or cant be found by looking through the games reviews despite having them on his profile) im kind of suprised they are even allowed to keep reviewing?

oh boy the other one (Kitiuuu).... not only do they suffer from just about all the reasons previously mentioned about the reviews feeling AI but they interact with almost the exact same posts in the exact same way as pushmybuttons....down to the same exact ratings (in stars) fo the exact same unclear, vauge, cant name a single charaacter type of review.

Im suuuuure theres nothing sus going on here but hey on the upside the one "good" reivew that seems real is just someone overrating a game despite having a fair bit to complain about

 

[EnTeeArrr]

Wait no NTR? Why the fuck does it have the tag then? Girls kissing? God that is so pressed, as a NTR enjoyer please don't waste my time with that vanilla level shit.

 

[DevinHesi]

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Due to feedback from many people across various platforms, I decided to change a particular scene in the game that seemed to cause a lot of discomfort.

I'll start working on version 0.2 as soon as possible.

Thank you for all your comments—I’ll keep reading them.
And remember, if you have any questions, want clarification, or anything you'd like to share, we can chat on Discord.

Have a nice day!

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[Bobber Tail]

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Due to feedback from many people across various platforms, I decided to change a particular scene in the game that seemed to cause a lot of discomfort.

I'll start working on version 0.2 as soon as possible.

Thank you for all your comments—I’ll keep reading them.
And remember, if you have any questions, want clarification, or anything you'd like to share, we can chat on Discord.

Have a nice day!

You must be registered to see the links

Not letting us save at the end sucked. Knowing it will require a full restart makes it not so bad as long as skip works.

 

[fajiker145]

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Due to feedback from many people across various platforms, I decided to change a particular scene in the game that seemed to cause a lot of discomfort.

I'll start working on version 0.2 as soon as possible.

Thank you for all your comments—I’ll keep reading them.
And remember, if you have any questions, want clarification, or anything you'd like to share, we can chat on Discord.

Have a nice day!

You must be registered to see the links

Bro should just make a ntr game, there's no way someone that thought shit like that was even remotely ok could deliver a game a non cuck would enjoy.
There's a whole lot of other problems even outside that particular scene, honestly, he should have just double down on it .

 

[nighthawk1275]

I think the mc lost his balls hope he finds them soon and he needs new friends they shit on him and he is like yup I'm an idiot is there a hidden sign that says treat me like trash, please on the mc's forehead.

 

[Bobber Tail]

I think the mc lost his balls hope he finds them soon and he needs new friends they shit on him and he is like yup I'm an idiot is there a hidden sign that says treat me like trash, please on the mc's forehead.

Dude fucks his goddess while his exes kiss...poor guy.

 

[nighthawk1275]

Also forgetting a femdom tag, too bad stuff is not avoidable kinda feels too kinetic.

 

[Golzd]

Fucking hell, wtf happened to harem devs and games, no ntr but its got lez ntr also sounds like they are up for adding more

 

[BTungsteno]

Maybe the Dev. is trying to make an story of "weak to strong" like those korean stories where the MC get a power-up and goes from doormat to so edgy and powerful that his breath cut through the plot?

This initial released show us how much of a spinless and weak person the MC is and make us hate certain characters.
If by 0.2-3 the MC doesn't get a "god gift/help" then i said the story could be doomed with a rewrite/fix

 

[Juerhullycin]

Maybe the Dev. is trying to make an story of "weak to strong" like those korean stories where the MC get a power-up and goes from doormat to so edgy and powerful that his breath cut through the plot?

This initial released show us how much of a spinless and weak person the MC is and make us hate certain characters.
If by 0.2-3 the MC doesn't get a "god gift/help" then i said the story could be doomed with a rewrite/fix

MC gets his upgrade at the end of the update, but we hate half the fucking LIs and the MC is a total gober, so much so that i prey he would simple stay dead and we can play as his friend Nath.

Even after the scene was cut, the "Main" Li that's Bisexual because of Plot, is a disgusting creature and nobody irl would bother with her. She's simple a shitty human being without redeeming Qualitys every thing she does is 100% fueled by selfishness nothing else and dev wants to sell it to us like its something good.

 

[BTungsteno]

MC gets his upgrade at the end of the update, but we hate half the fucking LIs and the MC is a total gober, so much so that i prey he would simple stay dead and we can play as his friend Nath.

Even after the scene was cut, the "Main" Li that's Bisexual because of Plot, is a disgusting creature and nobody irl would bother with her. She's simple a shitty human being without redeeming Qualitys every thing she does is 100% fueled by selfishness nothing else and dev wants to sell it to us like its something good.

Just saw it in Itch what you said...

 

[Gladerine]

MC gets his upgrade at the end of the update, but we hate half the fucking LIs and the MC is a total gober, so much so that i prey he would simple stay dead and we can play as his friend Nath.

Even after the scene was cut, the "Main" Li that's Bisexual because of Plot, is a disgusting creature and nobody irl would bother with her. She's simple a shitty human being without redeeming Qualitys every thing she does is 100% fueled by selfishness nothing else and dev wants to sell it to us like its something good.

Pal... you’re really upset. I understand that it bothered you. I messed up with the scene, it’s true, I don’t know what I was thinking—a bad day, I guess. But could you just make some suggestions or observations?

I’m still in time to make adjustments to the story; that’s why I read the feedback. You don’t need to act like I attacked you personally—it’s just the first version.

Are the characters flawed? Maybe, they probably are, honestly. But let me develop them. This is just the prologue. I can’t start with a character that’s super smart, super strong, and super skilled right away. He’s clumsy for a reason; something needs to happen for the characters to 'wake up.' A loss, a tragedy.

Again, I get that it wasn’t your favorite, but it’s just the first version. The characters need to grow, and they’ll do that with a dose of reality, just like people do in real life.

If I can’t fix it after version 0.2, then we’ll have a real problem…

 

[Juerhullycin]

Pal... you’re really upset. I understand that it bothered you. I messed up with the scene, it’s true, I don’t know what I was thinking—a bad day, I guess. But could you just make some suggestions or observations?

I’m still in time to make adjustments to the story; that’s why I read the feedback. You don’t need to act like I attacked you personally—it’s just the first version.

Are the characters flawed? Maybe, they probably are, honestly. But let me develop them. This is just the prologue. I can’t start with a character that’s super smart, super strong, and super skilled right away. He’s clumsy for a reason; something needs to happen for the characters to 'wake up.' A loss, a tragedy.

Again, I get that it wasn’t your favorite, but it’s just the first version. The characters need to grow, and they’ll do that with a dose of reality, just like people do in real life.

If I can’t fix it after version 0.2, then we’ll have a real problem…

Aria is straight up abusive every thing she does its because it benefits her, nobody would want to be with her for a prolonged time, i understand why Bella left her i would have too if we got the chance maybe she dies in 0.2 and we get her sister instead

don't you find it strange that nobody not a single soul on here is defending Aria? There is nothing on her that makes her likable MC is just a Security blanket/ATM/Pet/emotional punching bag for her why should anybody hang around with such a shitty person?

Every person in game acts like she's constantly at the point of blowing up but at the same time she's the nicest person ever, one that demeans her friends punches and slaps them, tells them how inadequate they are etc etc. I would need pages to write down all the shit she did just in the Prolog.

 

[ewewewewew]

no ntr no party!

 

[Diegoz]

thank you

 

[Gladerine]

Aria is straight up abusive every thing she does its because it benefits her, nobody would want to be with her for a prolonged time, i understand why Bella left her i would have too if we got the chance maybe she dies in 0.2 and we get her sister instead

So, Aria is the problem, then?

Would you be okay if I rewrote the scenes, rewrote the character, and gave her a more 'ideal' attitude? Because you mentioned you didn’t like half of the characters, but they actually don’t appear that much—definitely not enough to cause real dislike.

They don’t even do anything wrong to deserve hate, so I think you’re just really upset with Aria. I’ll work on that.

 

[Gladerine]

Please get an editor. Or at least use the spellchecker. Or, at the very least, use periods at the end of the sentences.

I am poor af, can't afford an editor
Also, English is not my mother tongue.
but thanks for the feedback!
I will try to fix it

 

[Juerhullycin]

So, Aria is the problem, then?

Would you be okay if I rewrote the scenes, rewrote the character, and gave her a more 'ideal' attitude? Because you mentioned you didn’t like half of the characters, but they actually don’t appear that much—definitely not enough to cause real dislike.

They don’t even do anything wrong to deserve hate, so I think you’re just really upset with Aria. I’ll work on that.

half the characters was a hyperbole but Aria and Bella as team members are probably the most prominent LIs in the story with the Goddess out of the way for now. So Aria being an insufferable asshole is really, really bad.

Bella without the Kiss is fine she vanished MC is understandably pissed about it and can tell her that he is glad that she is back but that he's not ready to forgive her at this point. Even her killing him is in the new light a clear accident. So she is (now) fine in my book. (maybe give her some more thought that defend MC while she reads his file to Nath.

The others we didnt see enough to form a honest opinion about them but i liked what i saw so far.

Aria first interaction he get she uses MC to get carried around all while insulting him in front of their teacher. She Uses him for money/labor, attacks him with magic for fun etc etc.

you have scenes here she wants to show MC that she loves him but to be honest at that point she is already a 100% self-centred asshole.

their whole interactions boil down to this meme


reworking Aria would elevate the game to a whole other level, Aria is tanking the game like a burning Electrical Bus shackled to your feet while taking a swim

 

[Gladerine]

half the characters was a hyperbole but Aria and Bella as team members are probably the most prominent LIs in the story with the Goddess out of the way for now. So Aria being an insufferable asshole is really, really bad.

Bella without the Kiss is fine she vanished MC is understandably pissed about it and can tell her that he is glad that she is back but that he's not ready to forgive her at this point. Even her killing him is in the new light a clear accident. So she is (now) fine in my book. (maybe give her some more thought that defend MC while she reads his file to Nath.

The others we didnt see enough to form a honest opinion about them but i liked what i saw so far.

Aria first interaction he get she uses MC to get carried around all while insulting him in front of their teacher. She Uses him for money/labor, attacks him with magic for fun etc etc.

you have scenes here she wants to show MC that she loves him but to be honest at that point she is already a 100% self-centred asshole.

their whole interactions boil down to this meme
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reworking Aria would elevate the game to a whole other level, Aria is tanking the game like a burning Electrical Bus shackled to your feet while taking a swim

HAHAHHAHHAHAHAH nice meme