eddie987

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The artwork is really good but the writting needs some work. For instance I don't see why the MC would treat the landlady like a slut. The roomate I get it, she is a bitch, but the landlady seems to be kind with him.
I'm not a big fan of mind control/corruption games, because they usually turn the girls into mindless whores who'll fuck anyone and the MC is a douche, but after reading some of the dev's comments, I guess it could be an interesting game. Only time will tell.
Edit: Also, it's a little annoying that you can't hide the text.
 

Morah SDG

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What I'm gathering is that a lot of people's personal complaints, as opposed to issues, seem to be the pacing and or writing so far. So WhiteLeaf Studios has hired me on to take a look at the script, and rework a good bit, in order to make it hopefully sound a bit more natural and flow better. Characters and situations should be a little easier to read and kinda help to get into the story, which is good, considering the kind of on-rails game this is. If the characters aren't fun to read, it's not as enjoyable when they cum inside each other. (y)
 

Whiteleaf Studio

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Hey guys, our frist poll is open to 5$+ Patrons only. This poll is to decide which character should get some attention in the next update, Mary (Landlady) or Anna (Roommate).
 
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I dont see a animation tag. But that usually doesnt mean there's animations in the games. So my question is if this one got animations or not?
PS. Awsome artwork gg wp.
 
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