Claims its a game with a more 'linear format'. By this it means there are two choices in the game, and one is a glorified options menu. One choice that affects the story... for like 3 paragraphs. Should really be advertising itself as a kinetic novel. Or maybe it'll be a VN when there's a lot more content.
Right now it pretty much has two parts to it:
Art
Writing
I want to talk about the art first.
There really isn't much of it; the gallery shows this off well. One page of the gallery is 6 pictures... 6 of the same picture zoomed in or out with incredibly minor changes (like the dick being 1 inch higher). Padding to make the gallery look bigger, yet the gallery is till only 5 pages long.
The art itself is like... very average western porn game. But unlike most similar games, I've yet to see anyone who has 'bimbo' proportions'. And the characters themselves just have really pleasent designs.
Its nothing outstanding or anything, but, blatant gallery padding aside, I think its a refreshing change from the 50 foot asses and tits 3 times the size of peoples heads that are the norms for these kinds of games.
I really like the designs of the women, in particular the nerdy lesbian. Its a shame they barely have any content
The writing is... weird. The MC is initially written to be, far as I can tell, a nerdy stay-at-home loser. He tries to hypnotize his not-sister on a whim for no apparent reason. And it works.
And he does it to someone he hates, so him getting all pervy and power tripping fits.
But then he does it to his 'landlady'. Who its already established is a good person he loves.
It feels a bit jarring for him to go from normal wimpy guy to apparently having no morals in the span of maybe 5 minutes.
Now the final part that matters for a game like this: The sex.
If you are looking for actual, full on, penetrative sex, skip this. There's like one scene of that. And if you want that, save at that scene, because its strangely not in the gallery.
Most of what you do have is blowjobs. Like 3 of them. 2 groping scenes. 1 lesbian bdsm. 3 blows, including one where the chick is blindfolded and sucking random objects.
A pretty confusing scene when you have literal mind-control powers but apparently still need to blindfold her.
The scenes are... okay. Functional. This is more or less a power tripping game about a power tripping nerd but you don't really feel particularly powerful in these scenes.
This aspect I imagine getting better later, since right now it ends at the vaginal scene.