Hello!
First of all thank you for all the suggestions and opinions written.
The mission with the pool and the trash cleanup is working. It's a minigame, you have to move fast to make it all go away. As time goes by the trash appears harder and harder. Being a minigame there has to be a challenge, if it was simple you'd do it in 3 seconds and it's over.
The mission when you have to collect your father's items also works. Check absolutely everything in that room, including the desk. I guarantee it works.
Also the mission where you have to buy the yoga mat or any other object works.
The game has several hours of gameplay depending on how fast you play. Also all missions are functional in this demo. If you can't move on to a mission it means you skipped something. At the end you have two hot scenes, one with blowjob and one with sex.
The animations are done by hand. I also posted on Patreon, we want to buy a costume for the animations, this is the next investment. We are aware that we need to improve the animations and other features of the game, but we are just starting.
Unfortunately I see mostly negative feedback and I'm starting to realize that the adult game market doesn't know how ready it is for a AAA standard 3D game. It seems that mostly consumers are looking for visual novel type games made in Renpy, which actually can't be called games, but comics. I would have at least liked to see more encouraging posts. It's a project with a big team that is funding itself. A lot of money, time and resources went into this game. I have nothing against games made in Renpy, but I think we need to raise the standards of this porn game industry, otherwise in the future few companies will have the courage to invest. I'm not saying that this game should be glorified, but at least the initiative should be appreciated and supported. Who has no knowledge in what it means to develop a 3D game in Unity, can not realize the work behind a project of such perspective.
You have to consider that everything in this game is custom. From characters, to design objects, lights, animations, code written by the developer, absolutely everything. I don't remember an adult game coming with a demo like that. Most of them start with assets bought from the store and that's about it.
Thank you!
Hello Global Games,
I tried your demo and wanted to give some honest and hopefully constructive feedback, in addition to some observations on your reaction to the responses in this thread.
I understand making a game is extremely difficult. It takes many talented people with different skillsets hundreds of hours to build some pretty pixels, bring them to life, and create an experience for the player. You seem to have an abundance of enthusiasm, but you are going to need to stop and think about what you are trying to make and how best to realize it. In no particular order here are my comments after playing your demo:
1) The adult game market does not owe you anything. Not recognition, not encouragement, not appreciation, and not support. It is up to you to make a good product to fit the market. If you want to push the standard of adult games further your product needs to be that much better to do it.
2) You will not be judged on how hard you work, only on the result. Nobody will see how much effort you put into the game, and even fewer will care. You can spend as many hundreds of hours as you want, but if the end result is not good to the player they will not support you.
3) Your demo is showcasing bad game design right from the start.
3a) Having a fixed name, fully voiced MC makes it extremely difficult for the player to immerse themselves.
3b) The pool minigame is an exercise in frustration, not entertainment. Minigames should feel tied to the progression and not like they were added just to pad playtime. The Yoga minigame was much better and fit well with the scene it was a part of.
3c) The "sleep to save" mechanic is poorly thought out, especially since the game limits you from sleeping until some flag has been set by a quest that day. I was able to break a quest and it would not let me progress or sleep.
3d) The quest design needs to be better than "go here click this", or you have just made a visual novel with extra steps. Cleaning the fathers room was unintuitive, there was no indication of the safe code being in the room and it was possible to complete that quest without opening the safe.
3e) The stat system seems to be underdeveloped, in which case it should not be part of the demo. The stat-checks on fixing the car were arbitrary and pointless. Also, you could get infinite stat points by repeatedly failing the car repair.
4) The writing is juvenile and low quality. The dialogue reads like it was written by a pubescent teenager who has never spoken to a woman before, and the mother/sister's dialogue is even more obnoxious. The voiced MC makes this worse. Hearing "my" character voice the cringe inducing dialogue is an extremely unpleasant experience.
5) The entire sister yoga quest arc could have been copied from a bad literotica story. Suspension of disbelief and immersion means characters have to at least somewhat behave like people. There needs to be some building of relationships with them and a progression of intimacy and tension. You will need a very good writer to craft a compelling first-person interactive story.
Whether you agree with my comments or not, good luck with your game. I wish you and your team success.
