Good start so far, but the dialog after you have the choice on how to handle Amber seems to assume a particular choice. It doesn't make sense. Hopefully this can be fixed soon and other writing issues avoided in the future. Choices should affect the dialog if you are trying to give us choices, otherwise it is a Kinetic Novel. That is fine if it is how you want to tell the story, but the choices get annoying in that case.
Seems that the writing is pretty good otherwise, just need to pay attention to where the branches should be.