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Tepito rules

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Could become a good story. The English dialogue needs some tweaking and too many people introduced at the start, it's hard to keep up with who's who. :)
the way the story will be told is unconventional, I'll do it as follows:
The game is called tepito saga, and there it gives us the way to tell it that is through sagas. The idea is this, the first saga is that of Pedro, we will go along with him 10 days, in those ten days we will see Pedro's perfect life. woman who meets woman who fucks, the male in all its definition. In those ten days we will see him jumping from stage to stage and the story will seem meaningless, but it will be on the tenth day a terrible event will happen to him, suddenly Pedro's pink and flat life will turn dark, it will take on a thousand nuances. and just at that moment the viewer will wonder, but how? It makes no sense, nothing warned of such a cruel descent, so in order to understand what happened we are going to return to day one but not with Pedro, with another character and we will see his day to day until we reach the bloody day ten but it will not be of course, then we will have to make use of another saga to understand it. This will be like our daily life, we always see it from our perspective and from there we judge, what do you think when someone tells our story from their own vision? everything changes, the faithful friend was no longer so, the accidental collision is no longer so. that will basically be tepito saga. oh, and there will be no decisions to be made until 10 ten each way,
final all the decisions made will be added to give us a different ending.
From the dialogues it happens that I am not an English speaker, I translate everything with Google, the idea is that once I have a little money I can pay for a translator so that the reading is as correct as possible.

The number of characters is because the game has a second objective, which is to present the small universes of the great universe of tepito saga. at the end of this game I am going to start a series of more closed games, because tepito saga contains about 5 or 7 games inside, in them I plan to make a couple of tributes to the two games that I liked the most on the forum, the tyrant and big brother, both unfinished but to my liking with the greatest potential of the forum. eye, they are tributes not the same story, in the case of the tribute to big brother I would like to approach it from the perspective of eric.
 
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RedPillBlues

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in them I plan to make a couple of tributes to the two games that I liked the most on the forum, the tyrant and big brother, both unfinished but to my liking with the greatest potential of the forum. eye, they are tributes not the same story, in the case of the tribute to big brother I would like to approach it from the perspective of eric.
Well that's all I need to know to not play this.
 

KissKissStudio

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You are missing the whole point of Tarantino movies. They are confusing but they explain themself in the end. But here ppl see your content once a month. So like they have already seen 30% of the story and I can understand that you trying hard to do it there is no way people here will understand wtf is going. Like I introduced one mystery char into the game and I already got hate comments that they don't understand what that girl is for. I will explain it in the next update, but from your perspective, your whole game will probably explain itself in like 8 months. So keep in mind that people will hate it. And btw 1000 Euro goal is really stupid. You need a proofreader. So put first goal 10-20 euros for a proofreader. Because you can upgrade your pc with 100 200 300 euros per month. Also are you really a photographer? Cuz you go a lot of noisy pictures and I think photographer know how to deal with it or remove it.

And btw the models are a really strange dude, no offense but they are really strange. It feel like that girl that tried looking like Angelina Jolie


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I'm firein muh laz0rs

Sorry lol, the game sounds interesting, I'll probably wait for the first "saga" to finish before trying it out. best of luck.
 
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Ursus4321

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it's funny about this game. It does not have ntr and yet, at Margarita's birthday party (I think she's called like that) while the mc fiddles with several women, she is seen what seems to be flirting with her husband's black friend and another black man. Moving the dress so that they can see the panties well. It surely has no significance in the story and is just filler for the scene, but it gives a very strong vibe to ntr. Is it done on purpose or is it just by chance?

I kept playing. there is indeed ntr. it's the wife fucking another, other guys. something similar to another game in which the mc gets drunk and they take the opportunity to fuck his wifeAnd here stop, go out and erase
 
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lostraven

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I see the Dev here is pushing for something more artistic, but doesn't feel he's getting genuine criticism he can work on.
Here. Here is some genuine criticism.

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For starters, the game opens up to listing off every single character in the story, why? It feels incredibly forced and un-organic. Just naturally introduce and weave them into the Narrative. It feels like you watched Goodfellas, liked the scenes where all the characters were introduced quickly but failed to understand how it worked there, and doesn't work here. Whereas Goodfellas purposely overwhelmed you with characters to show how spiraling the network of crime really was, this just feels like a long list being dryly read. P.s, there's so many characters you will never remember them all in this very forced way.


The MC's dick look weirdly disproportionate, as does other general body parts. No, I'm not just talking about size, it generally looks like some genetic mutation hybrid formed in a lab.


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This kind of cock looks like it belongs more on a Resident Evil monster than a human being.


Never mind broken English, never mind 'Engrish,' this is broken Engrish. Hire a writer, a proof reader, an editor. Literally anything or at the very least find a volunteer to check your stuff. I.e, lines like these are incredibly jarring. Especially given the project's supposed to have a dark, serious feel to it.

It's hard to take your dark serious crime epic seriously when you have lines like this:

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The lack of backgrounds and much of the posing either seems cheap, making everything have a very 'floaty' feeling to it. Nothing hardly feels grounded or it just looks outright 'odd.' I.e What's with this face? 1610217995556.png

Is he literally strolling to his car Leonardo DiCaprio style?

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Next: The faces, you've said before you want to know why they look unappealing? Okay,
They look like something out of a late Hapsburg family Tree

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Notice any comparisons? They don't look human, never mind attractive. Either out-source the work to someone else or go back to the drawing board completely and practice, practice, practice...

Look at LewdLabs work or the Devs of Timestamps to see better done 3D for comparison.


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Mother of god...It looks like something crossed over between 'The Thing' getting caught and having to abort mid-Assimilation and Years of in-breeding.


Look, here is the most honest advice I can give you.
Scrap this game, start fresh surrounding yourself with competent, skilled people who can help you do it properly.
Save up and earn some money to help fund the game.
Go off and practice/learn your own skills more yourself, maybe in 6 months time with enough practice come back, have people review some of your models/artwork somewhere on the forum in the meanwhile and go from there.
 

Warlan

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While I do not have any knowledge of DAZ ( I assume you are using DAZ) I have studied some 3d modeling. When it come to art in general, real life study is important. As the character models you are using are "realistic" I would recommend looking at pictures/video of women you find attractive to see what features they have.
A common beginner mistake for modeling (and i assume in DAZ as well, even though you only use sliders I think?) is to neglect the 3/4 angle. Look at the characters face from the side and turn the angle of the camera another quarter back.
As for the renders themself, they look awful. I would change up the setting to achieve less noise. If there still is a tiny bit of noise, you would use photoshop or an alternative to fix it.
You could try to share some of your mood boards/inspiration for some of your characters, maybe you just have an unorthodox view on beauty that does not follow the norm. Like the pink haired girl looks like she has downsyndrome. Most people would not find this attractive.
 

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Here is some genuine criticism.
Me: hmm let's see what he has to say...

No, I'm not just talking about size, it generally looks like some genetic mutation hybrid formed in a lab.
Never mind broken English, never mind 'Engrish,' this is broken Engrish.
They don't look human, never mind attractive.
Mother of god...It looks like something crossed over between 'The Thing' getting caught and having to abort mid-Assimilation and Years of in-breeding.
Me:
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KissKissStudio

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Okay, I played it. Dude..... I don't know how to say it.... but I am one of those people who play games for porn and ctrl every dialog. But man the sex scenes are like 90 percent of the game... Dude. please... I know you want to do something out of the box, but man... y ou have to rework every model.. The penis needs to be reworked... And even for me it feels that there is too much porn in your game
 
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