Hello.
It was a nice short demo.
The worldbuilding is fine for a first release.
The characters are few and different. Some of them coud be described better.
The plot is simple and easy to follow.
The art is good, though the filter is awful with dark areas.
This first mission was really fast but good enough to have an idea of what to expect in the future. Two choices : one sexual and one about the ending.
The MC is a selfish and boorish person that is also able of sympathy. I just hope that the future missions will be influenced by previous decisions (some sort of reputation system but nothing too complicated). Otherwise, it'll be just a succession/series of different games.
The relationship between the human MC and the android is well thought.
The filter is good for making the game cartoonish but too horrible with the outlines and dark places.
I played with the french version. Thank you very much for it. It's unusual to have french as another language in an adult game.
There are some spelling error left (it's more serious for me than in english since it's my mother language but that's just me) but the real problem was having too many english words left ("next mission", "soon", "the end", "later", "king of Altar", "captain", "princess" or "In the next episode of captain Stretcher"). So please, don't stop in the middle.
You right, hairy body are already remove...
Pics from mission 2 :
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It's certainly better but the problem was due to the filter in my point of view (it doesn't work well with hair even with what's left on the head). Having characters with hair can be good for diversity. Also, I'm dumbstruck by that society in which men have to shave everything but keep their beard and mustache, totally absurd. Well, that's just my thoughts and it seems you found what you wanted to do.
Good continuation.