- Feb 25, 2020
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- Nov 9, 2020
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Ok, now I'm definitely intrigued, I look forward to seeing where that goes.I'll just say this: Julia's not one of the main girls, but I have... plans for her
- Dec 25, 2017
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this a crazy plot of a story .... i love it .... keep it up .... wow
Tiffany is 10,000x better with her other hair styles rather than that ridiculous twin tails she had going on when we first meet her lmfao. Also best girl. Best looking too. Luna is giving her a run for her money though, we need a lot more content with her.
Great story so far.
Great story so far.
- Apr 25, 2020
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Damn... i think this was one of the best updates i've played in any VN so far, every character got some kind of development, the story moved smoothly forward, a lot of content.
I liked this game from the beginning but with this update, it instantly got to my top5.
I liked this game from the beginning but with this update, it instantly got to my top5.
- Mar 25, 2018
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Just started playing this with v0.5.1 and I have to say it is one of the best written and thought out games on this site. The plot is tight and coherent. Choices that the characters make, make sense. The dev does not use a stupid MC or others to force the plot along. It's so so refreshing.
Take out the sex, and I would STILL play this game to see how the plot plays out.
But don't actually take out the sex because it's really really good.
Eagerly awaiting the next update!
Take out the sex, and I would STILL play this game to see how the plot plays out.
But don't actually take out the sex because it's really really good.
Eagerly awaiting the next update!
- Nov 22, 2018
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Great game. I don't have a lot of complaints... but I do have some.
When talking with Julia at the bureau, there was a weird skip in the conversation, like there was something missing. Seems like there are multiple options on what she might say, and none of them fit. So she says, "While we're at it...", about to bring up Bailey, and the next thing I get is a one-way choice leading the MC to say he'll think about it. All I did with her, was to decline going on a date with her from the start...
After the bureau stuff, during the "freeroam", while talking to Tiffany, if you try talking about how she feels, there's potentially an error if you didn't kiss her.
In the scene where the MC is busy counting ammo, there's a variable that fails to be reassigned, so the following scene with Jessica plays out as if you've been doing stuff with her and Sydney, even if you haven't. Gotta use just a single '='.
I guess the only other thing that bothers me a bit is how Sydney (and to some extent, Jessica) doesn't actually seem to care whether the MC calls her or not, since she just doesn't mention anything about it. Even though she made a big deal out of him not calling her before he even had her number...
Anyway. This one's definitely going on my list. Looking forward to reading it when it's all done. Keep up the good work (but don't forget to take breaks).
When talking with Julia at the bureau, there was a weird skip in the conversation, like there was something missing. Seems like there are multiple options on what she might say, and none of them fit. So she says, "While we're at it...", about to bring up Bailey, and the next thing I get is a one-way choice leading the MC to say he'll think about it. All I did with her, was to decline going on a date with her from the start...
After the bureau stuff, during the "freeroam", while talking to Tiffany, if you try talking about how she feels, there's potentially an error if you didn't kiss her.
In the scene where the MC is busy counting ammo, there's a variable that fails to be reassigned, so the following scene with Jessica plays out as if you've been doing stuff with her and Sydney, even if you haven't. Gotta use just a single '='.
I guess the only other thing that bothers me a bit is how Sydney (and to some extent, Jessica) doesn't actually seem to care whether the MC calls her or not, since she just doesn't mention anything about it. Even though she made a big deal out of him not calling her before he even had her number...
Anyway. This one's definitely going on my list. Looking forward to reading it when it's all done. Keep up the good work (but don't forget to take breaks).
- Jul 8, 2018
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my choices don't really seem to matter, so why include them? are you scared of making this a kinetic novel? there's nothing wrong with that if it's written well. but giving the illusion of choice only for it not to matter is considerably worse.
i would strongly suggest making the game a kinetic novel instead, so at least that way everything feels contiguous and without plot related dissonance. after all, the whole point of a visual novel is the story--if a VN can't stand on it's story, then it's just a pack of images, some of which are hentai/pornographic. and the images and chars in this game are pretty generic.
i would strongly suggest making the game a kinetic novel instead, so at least that way everything feels contiguous and without plot related dissonance. after all, the whole point of a visual novel is the story--if a VN can't stand on it's story, then it's just a pack of images, some of which are hentai/pornographic. and the images and chars in this game are pretty generic.
Actually, every choice you make matters in the game and leads to whether or not you unlock a specific scene or not even to the point of someone's life being at risk. I'm not sure how you couldn't tell before, but it's pretty straight to the point on a good bit of the gallery and even more so on how it really shows in this latest update build. The story in itself stands on its own, it's the reason we're here right now and why you typed this post demanding and taunting even the dev into changing it into a full-on kinetic novel.
You are probably refering to the fact that the primary story remains the same.
And yet, you can gain a variety on moments because of how you chose earlier.
Simplest example: The way you save Alice from the two thugs within the first Chapter. Do you go for the shotgun? Or do you take the gun you got from Kenny if you actually overwhelmed him? Can't use the later if you didn't overwhelm him, tho. This is a huge difference in storytelling. And later on, previous choices form a clearer picture. Not to mention choices on "who you visit" differ the information you get earlier. Changing dialogue later.
So I disagree with your assessment.
- Nov 9, 2020
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It's a scene with Alice in the bedroom shortly after returning from the Bureau in Chapter V just after you've talked to everybody I believe.
After I talked to everyone, I got the scene on the next page, which is this. That is why I wonder what I should do to get the scene I mentioned
In the attached image, the scene I got was the top left after talking to everyone
- Nov 9, 2020
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Hmmm, I can't say for certain, I don't have that BJ gallery one unlocked, are you on a love or corruption route with Alice? maybe that gives you a different scene.
I just reruned my save and found out that was love route scene that I missed. Now I wanna know how to get this final gallery scene. I have both tried virgin Syd and non-virgin Syd but they both gave the same scene. Tks in advanced.
- Jun 18, 2020
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The final one you are missing is Sydney's virgin scene (I checked the script file).