Was it intentional removing Jessica calling you Daddy or whatever the player sets it to? Because the jesspov variable is still set to "Daddy" by default, but all but two instances of it are hidden behind a "if JessicaPetname == True" which never gets set anymore.
Also looks like you did a find/replace for show->scene, because a bunch of dialogue got caught in the crossfire. I doubt I found all instances of it, but I think this is most of them: Lines 1625, 2965, 3874, 5926, 6891, 6899, 7416, 8208, 10112, 10832, 11778, 15505, 15609, 16229, 17990, 18875, 19414, 20391, 21186, 21356, 21939.
Also in the line "Shower sex?" on lines 19674/19732, 'shower' got lowercased (also from find/replace I'm guessing).
Edit: Put together a regular expression search and found another instance of show->scene on line 1625, so that should be all of them.