Ren'Py The Awakening [v0.4.4a] [SLim Games]

[PeggyBlackett]

I have no frigging idea why anybody would defend patreon over this, unless he's working for them.

There are legal aspects as well - while they might win in court if someone tried to make something of it, it would cost lotsnlotsa money.

Check out, say, PornHub, where you will find that almost every "incest" video says in it's title that it's fake.

Why the fuck is incest such a big deal here anyway? Might be in the minority who likes the fact the MC isn't trying to fuck his family in every game

Because Patreon says they can't have it.

"Forbidden fruit" and all that.

in the flashback of when he got in a accident i think i saw a fairy or something in the light im figuring thats how he got his naughty powers

I'm betting on UFOs.

I'm still working on the fine tooning

Hsss

EEEEKKK Needles, I hate needles.

Bump

 

[King Monkey Mon]

I'm betting on UFOs.

when you play the recent update content let me know

 

[PeggyBlackett]

what's that APK file in the OP?

Android version.

Download to Android device.

{You have to go to "Security" in settings and turn on "Allow Installation of apps from unknown sources"- i recommend turning it back off after you do the install.}

Find the .APK file, click on it.

That should install it.

 

[Rythan25]

Chapter 2 ? Is there a chapter 1 somewhere else ? Or does this include both chapters, and its called chapter 2 to show us up to what chapter its been developed ?

 

[Uwe Furtmustal]

Chapter 2 ? Is there a chapter 1 somewhere else ? Or does this include both chapters, and its called chapter 2 to show us up to what chapter its been developed ?

Yep, both chapters are included

 

[Aeron saat]

Cant wait for ch 3..

 

[maybes4]

Cant wait for ch 3..

excuse me what is this game in ur avatar?

 

[pot123]

excuse me what the game in ur avatar?

This game lol

 

[nln0]

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[Irischan]

can someone post the ch 3 news?
would be nice

 

[KiGa]

can someone post the ch 3 news?
would be nice

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[supermanz95]

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Oh noo

 

[RoryTate]

Great story, animations, and sexual content so far! Only a couple of minor things that detracted from the overall positive experience. The first is a problem that occurs when text speed is set at maximum (instant). Some transitions from dialogue to images in the game are programmed to happen automatically, which means on instant text speed there are multiple lines of text that are impossible to read. Also, having two "sentences" in one dialogue box, which happens at about half a dozen or so points in the game, where you have to click the mouse twice or press Enter twice is a bit of a no-no stylistically. There's nothing horribly wrong about it per se, but it does break immersion for those of us who enjoy experiencing the story more like we're reading a book.

The other minor issue is with the X-Ray vision, where it's hard to tell if it's just a hover activated feature, or something you must click to semi-permanently activate, or both. Using it felt a little clunky and frustrating at times.

Edit: Sorry, wrong game for the "opening" bug.

 

[FrenchXConnection]

any incest patch ?

 

[Shozib]

where is chapter 1 for pc ? -_-
cant play chapter 2 b4 1 , now can i ?

 

[filochard]

@Shozib if you just take a look at the posts above yours (at the middle of the page) you'll have the answer !

 

[Corpp]

Android version is ruined by the patron link activating every time you try to click anything in Prefs/save menu. Anyone with a solution to this? (Only tried chapter 1) . Doesn't help that the game crashes when the browser opens to go the patron. In other words no saving, no continuing where you left off .

 

[SLim_Games]

Android version is ruined by the patron link activating every time you try to click anything in Prefs/save menu. Anyone with a solution to this? (Only tried chapter 1) . Doesn't help that the game crashes when the browser opens to go the patron. In other words no saving, no continuing where you left off .

yep, I noticed that and I fixed it.. but you will have to wait for chapter 3 sorry -> 2 more days

 

[SLim_Games]

Great story, animations, and sexual content so far! Only a couple of minor things that detracted from the overall positive experience. The first is a problem that occurs when text speed is set at maximum (instant). Some transitions from dialogue to images in the game are programmed to happen automatically, which means on instant text speed there are multiple lines of text that are impossible to read. Also, having two "sentences" in one dialogue box, which happens at about half a dozen or so points in the game, where you have to click the mouse twice or press Enter twice is a bit of a no-no stylistically. There's nothing horribly wrong about it per se, but it does break immersion for those of us who enjoy experiencing the story more like we're reading a book.

The other minor issue is with the X-Ray vision, where it's hard to tell if it's just a hover activated feature, or something you must click to semi-permanently activate, or both. Using it felt a little clunky and frustrating at times.

Edit: Sorry, wrong game for the "opening" bug.

I removed the auto next transition of text for the next chapter and also the text will now hide with x-ray. I don't really get the 2 sentences in one dialogue box.. do you mean that you want 1 sentence for each slide? I will look into the text-speed now. thx for the report!

 

[RoryTate]

I don't really get the 2 sentences in one dialogue box.. do you mean that you want 1 sentence for each slide? I will look into the text-speed now. thx for the report!

For example, the second slide of the game shows "(Where.." then transitions to "(Where..where am I)" upon pressing Enter. I can see that there is an auto-transition that shows the full slide/sentence after about a half second, but that mechanic can be quite annoying for people who are just starting to press Enter because they've quickly read the "(Where..", and then suddenly find they have to click Back because they missed the rest of the text that unexpectedly appeared.

I get that you are trying to solidly establish the disorientation of your character, but if you just showed the full thought of "(Where..where am I?)" all at once, this is already being accomplished in the mind of the reader through the ellipses and short, repeated words/thoughts, plus the content of the sentence. The additional forced transition through a gameplay/interface mechanism actually takes away from that particular reader immersion IMO. Kind of like you're trying too hard to drive a message home, when it's actually better to just do less and trust the reader.

Hope that helps you out! What you are doing looks quite promising and has some novel/interesting ideas that nicely set it apart from other VNs. Definitely worth keeping an eye on.

Oh, and I just noticed that the "(Did his dick just got bigger?)" line should read "(Did his dick just get bigger)". How's that for a strange grammar correction?