Hello.
This update expanded the worldbuilding with some explainations. The possibility to try our new powers (not sure if it's too early for it or not). And a damn cliff hanger as the end.
Some remarks :
When we click on "Any question?", we always come back to this choice
. It can continue infinitely until we click on "Alright, take me to her". The easier way would be to only have "Alright, take me to her" once we got the 2 answers. Also, the previous one shouldn't appear anymore when we try second one, whatever order we decide to do it.
There's a problem with some stats : some aren't indicated but are increasing (the first 2 dominance points), some have the wrong number (blessings : +2 after sex, +1 when we come back, +1 with the test on Lana leading to +4 and not +3). Also, after sleeping, energy is back to only 99, not 100 (well, it's corrected with the shower but still).
At the end, whether we pick the phone immediately or not, the answer is always that we took a long time.
There should be a default name for the MC (a blank space is always strange).
This remark is also valid for the new ones (relationship and name).
Good continuation.