VN Ren'Py The Better Deal [v0.5a] [Ze-gam-eZ]

[MrDL]

The Better Deal I'll hold out for My Best Deal.

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[SilentSevenStar]

Nice~

 

[fast79]

good luck in this new game

 

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

Fem MC looks good

 

[korochan48]

MC looks good, sexy and has a lovable attitude a total opposite of her brother. Good start from a game.

 

[kekasaurus]

Tried this one for the first time. Not bad at all. It could use an editor because of some typos and to make sure that the writing tries to say what it wants to say. For example, I think there is a joke in a scene where the MC is greeted by several secretaries using the company's slogan, then the CEO makes the same remark but exaggerates it, and I'm not sure whether he was joking, which would be charming, or he was acting like a douche corpo guy, head and toe into the corporate jingo. Quite plot and character driven story, and that usually makes a good VN in my book.

 

[1879]

Looks very good.

 

[darlic]

the genre list is disturbingly tame, knowing the dev. Will this stay like this or will things ramp up along the story?

 

[vs2011xyz]

 

[Fairlight0306]

Hi i have a question: which level on patreon is required for the 0.5a version? the 5$ will do? Thanks

 

[chris18911]

great game

 

[JNev]

I am tempted to give it a shot, because the visuals in Beauty & the Thug were top-notch, but christ that game had zero *real* choices (only lesbian route or Douche-McDouche-Face, and I didn't want either). Is this game any different, or are we forced to go along with the dev's pairing of choice?

The Better Deal is a story driven game, so choices are essential for the gameplay. Beauty and the Thug is a sandbox like game, which hasn't that priority.

Great new game !
The plot is very creative.
The character expressions are also wonderful.
One small comment:East Asian women don't have lips that thick.
(And DrChen's design is full of hostility to CN, but I'm not surprised anymore...)

Actually Riley isn't East Asian, only her mother is. Maybe her lips comes from her fathers bloodline.

the genre list is disturbingly tame, knowing the dev. Will this stay like this or will things ramp up along the story?

The genre list is designed to make the game appearing on Steam and fulfill the requirements of Patreon. I think if there were less restrictions, the game would have more tags / content options.

Hi i have a question: which level on patreon is required for the 0.5a version? the 5$ will do? Thanks

On Patreon zegamez speaks of 10 $ or higher.

 

[Fairlight0306]

On Patreon zegamez speaks of 10 $ or higher.

Ok thanks, well the story is so interesting that i'm going to pay i guess...

 

[geordie]

Only couple of hours from the bliss!

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[eightypercent]

Gorgeous.

 

[Juantazo]

Looks promising.

 

[Udayana]

Only couple of hours from the bliss!

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You mean a few hours to download?

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[geordie]

You mean a few hours to download?

Unfortunately yes

 

[HarveyD]

lol at the "I'll show you how to mess with me!" line. I assume it got lost in translation.

Also trained soldier my ass.