VN Ren'Py The Better Deal [v0.5a] [Ze-gam-eZ]

[zegamez]

• First of all - Fantastic opening. Immediately I was interested in the character and her problems.
• Also, fan-fucking-tastic renders & animation. There are a few minor hiccups (like the leg twitch during push-ups), but they're really minor. Solid character design, good use of lighting, etc. I'm not much of a graphics person, but this one stands out to me.
• I'm not usually a fan of manual save names, but I love the default inclusion of chapter titles, etc.

That said, I found a few minor issues that I'm going to point out behind a spoiler tag.

Thank you so much for so detailed bugs / typos report!

If there's a locker room at work, why does she wear her uniform to/from home?

Riley just takes a gun, a radio, and her bag with other stuff here.

What are "Hamadriles"? I even googled it - the entire google results are above.
bonus: Comparing a black man (especially having sex with a white woman) to a zoo animal is extremely racially problematic.

Thank you for pointing out. I meant only the terribly noisy behavior of these primates. It slipped off my mind that it may sound racist. I'll replace it with wild cats.

That's not a US electric socket. What is that? Type H, J, or N???

Well... That's a fiction story, okay?

This guy is in EVERY game.

It's cheap in terms of the resources required to render it. It's just a 2D image that can be changed to imitate the changing angle of view.

"wimp" seems like an odd insult. Then again, maybe that's the point.

It's an easter egg. If you play my first game "Beauty and the Thug", you will understand.

Stupid question. Riley's mom is in Japan. Riley's dad is in the Caribbean. Riley's dad didn't seem particularly Japanese. But her last name (generally speaking, her father's last name) is Ito. Ito is a Japanese last name. I guess her mom is in Japan and her dad is Japanese, even though her brother doesn't look Japanese at all and...? I dunno, I'm bad at identifying "races" and that sort of thing. Anyway, are both her parents supposed to be of Japanese descent?

Riley's mom is Japanese, and her dad is American. She and her brother took their mother's last name. I think there was an explanation in the initial version of the script, but it totally slipped my mind. Maybe JNev can remind us.

Thank you one more time. It seems like Chat GPT still can't replace a human in this field ))

 

[JNev]

Riley's mom is Japanese, and her dad is American. She and her brother took their mother's last name. I think there was an explanation in the initial version of the script, but it totally slipped my mind. Maybe @JNev can remind us.

There was a reason for that last name, but no place to bring this topic in the game. In short words: that was a condition that Riley's dad had to accept to get the permission to marry her mom. Japanese parents are really strict sometimes, especially when their daughter want to marry a foreign man
Nevertheless, that's a story that wasn't important enough to tell.

 

[JNev]

If they were in the same unit, why does she say/pretend that she is meeting him for the first time?

Actually she doesn't pretend that. Terry's hug just caught her by surprise.

Nevertheless, I'd like to read more of you in the future. These were quite interesting thoughts and I think when English isn't the native language, something like that helps the development to make the final product even better.

 

[zegamez]

Actually she doesn't pretend that. Terry's hug just caught her by surprise.

Nevertheless, I'd like to read more of you in the future. These were quite interesting thoughts and I think when English isn't the native language, something like that helps the development to make the final product even better.

I will replace it with "Ughh... Long time no see."

 

[Beckz]

Don't know why I keep hearing "You Suck" chant from this guy...

 

[slav1234]

Nice!

 

[darlic]

Is that what fame I have here?
In fact, this game was intended to be vanilla. After "Beauty and the Thug" was banned on Steam, I wanted to create the game that would be maximum Steam-friendly. However, it appeared that I just can't create a vanilla game. Still, it's tamer that BT, indeed.

It's more like I was hoping to not see yet another vanilla game. I wasn't aware of the Steam ban so I can understand your reluctance to add questionable content. But, afaik, Steam doesn't ban more niche sexual stuff BT had such as watersports, anal play, cum play and such, so I was hoping to see something in this game as well. With that said, I don't want to judge a book by its cover and I will give it a try in the future. Best of luck

 

[youraccount69]

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[Olivia_V]

Just a really minor nitpick... if the environment (such as the security card reader when you first come in to work, for example) is gonna keep calling the MC Riley Ito, might as well remove the name change option.

EDIT: Also, having a Christmas song for an instrumental in an adult game is a... choice, I guess, lol!

 

[DoceDoceComoMel]

THX

 

[Olivia_V]

That was pretty damn good, I must say. Great visuals, and while there are some grammatical errors, the writing is pretty decent.

 

[TyrantBinch]

Damn this is so hot!

 

[CutieLvr]

Ze-gam-eZ, it isn't very often that the story of a game captures me even more than the game itself. But, I am loving what I am reading and the artwork is terrific. The story is intriguing and I am looking forward to what is going to happen next. I assume that the whole story is Ms. Ito's relationship with her crew and others in the story.
But, seeing how she loves to tease her brother and it is evident that her brother often times sees her as more than a sister. Is there a possibility of something happening between the siblings? One just has to ask.
I am excited waiting for your next update and Ms. Ito is a real cutie and I love cuties. Thanks for the wonderful game.

Great new game !
The plot is very creative.
The character expressions are also wonderful.
One small comment:East Asian women don't have lips that thick.
(And DrChen's design is full of hostility to CN, but I'm not surprised anymore...)

Decent comment, but, don't you think that is a little nit-picking? Just a little?

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Ok, fellas, Haha! I asked for a bulletproof vest, not a bulletproof chest vest. Men are such children...

Thanks for the share. The game looks high quality.

Protecting the boobs at all costs, I love it.

 

[ices]

thx

 

[Prayforme]

It looks very dignified

 

[zegamez]

Ze-gam-eZ, it isn't very often that the story of a game captures me even more than the game itself. But, I am loving what I am reading and the artwork is terrific. The story is intriguing and I am looking forward to what is going to happen next. I assume that the whole story is Ms. Ito's relationship with her crew and others in the story.
But, seeing how she loves to tease her brother and it is evident that her brother often times sees her as more than a sister. Is there a possibility of something happening between the siblings? One just has to ask.
I am excited waiting for your next update and Ms. Ito is a real cutie and I love cuties. Thanks for the wonderful game.

It was like an option in the initial version, but I decided not to include it in the final version. As I mentioned earlier, the main goal was to create a Steam-friendly game after my first game was banned there. So, I decided to exclude all questionable content

 

[SD0083]

I love this art

 

[xXxNeospiritxXx]

is a lesbian playthrough possible like in your other game?

 

[zegamez]

is a lesbian playthrough possible like in your other game?

Yes, it’s possible.

 

[JNev]

Ze-gam-eZ, it isn't very often that the story of a game captures me even more than the game itself. But, I am loving what I am reading and the artwork is terrific. The story is intriguing and I am looking forward to what is going to happen next. I assume that the whole story is Ms. Ito's relationship with her crew and others in the story.
But, seeing how she loves to tease her brother and it is evident that her brother often times sees her as more than a sister. Is there a possibility of something happening between the siblings? One just has to ask.
I am excited waiting for your next update and Ms. Ito is a real cutie and I love cuties. Thanks for the wonderful game.

Well, the story isn't only about relationships, but they have a certain role in the game.
Riley and William are close siblings. They always were and Riley still looks at William as her little brother. She might act a little bit carefree around him, but she hasn't any desire for him. He adores her (secretly), but of course he wouldn't ask her for a date or something, knowing that she is his sister.