The dialogue with the IC patch needs to be corrected, it's fine if you're not using the patch. But with the patch everything feels forced and unnatural. Right from the start the MC is crushing and perving on his Mom and she's returning that favor, now if there's some backstory presented that shows that they both have been developing an incestous relationship then this may work, but when it's out of nowhere then some of the dialogue just be tweaked and dialed back, the same with Ashley scenes, it works if there's no incest involved. Lastly, a grown man calling his father "Daddy" is odd to me, I did it when I was a child, sure, but as I gotten older it was always Dad or Pops.