ok so right off the bat the intro makes me worried that whatever naughty highjinks the MC gets up to, that all of it will be pointless cause it's all some "Total Recall" type world. the text box doesnt help alleviate that worry as the design makes it looks like he's dreaming the entire time. but to be fair thats just me speculating.
Needs incest patch.
the first time we see emily her body seems ok but her face seems like it out of focus. but it doesnt seem to last for the whole game so eh.
sandbox....
Kylie ....nose ring
the kylie scene in general when she tries to get you wasnt bad. up until if you try to reject her she blackmails you soooo... it's a fake choice if we did have a choice i would prefer MC to take charge. also apparently she's pretty slutty. i didnt mind her reason for being interested in MC but i could go without the knowledge of her having a reputation of being the town bicycle.
but yeah you have multiple options to avoid her. and no matter when you try to avoid her you're shit out of luck cause it always ends the same. if this is how its going to go honestly just put the
kinetic tag on it and make it a Kinetic novel if choices dont mean jack.
the good news is the animation was alright.
the sister doing the webcam shtick is being used again huh? the bitchy sister thing isnt bad but her doing webcam isnt something im interested in. at least not when it comes to the MC's family members but eh thats just me.
and as others have said. Dev clearly has a body type. curvy and busty. so yeah would be nice to see something else for variety sake.
all in all not bad but defintely has some issues. either way good luck dev.