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I just was thinking the MC is cheating so easily after being scared that he did something bad to his GF, then i realized we were not told how the others handled the reason she left for collage and why MC did not see her off. did they make her forget him. i don't remember him calling her yet! is his love now loving another?
Good point. There was mention that her memory was altered about the event, but not sure if she was also to forget him or not.
As for the GF/Anna she's going to be off having her own college experience. She and the MC are broken up with no hard feelings. I'll look at clarifying that and there will be an option to bring her back in the story later on.
The Intro was their Farewell Sex.
 
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Is the MC eventually going to grow a pair or remain being a pansy? There have been really good games which have been spoilt because of this. Plus, its still early in the writing, so try to fill the gaps in the story which have been created.
 

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hello ...... Former Flame ... 1 dev or 2 ? i found out how to run these 7.4.4 games and i tried yours 1st ...... runs great ..... and i gotta say i really enjoy playing this game .... you had me interested from the start ... a few things had me puzzled ... but hey you worked thru my puzzlement and showed me what was what as the game progressed .... and the babes are so hot jeezz ...
and something thats not seen in many games .. a story that makes sense .. well from a witches point of view ... :LOL:
now if i could only figure out how i can get some other games to play now .. i'll be all set :)
yeah i know unrelated to your game ... sorry
just thought i'd post a little something to say how much i enjoyed your game (y)(y)(y)(y)(y)
 

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hello ...... Former Flame ... 1 dev or 2 ? i found out how to run these 7.4.4 games and i tried yours 1st ...... runs great ..... and i gotta say i really enjoy playing this game .... you had me interested from the start ... a few things had me puzzled ... but hey you worked thru my puzzlement and showed me what was what as the game progressed .... and the babes are so hot jeezz ...
and something thats not seen in many games .. a story that makes sense .. well from a witches point of view ... :LOL:
now if i could only figure out how i can get some other games to play now .. i'll be all set :)
yeah i know unrelated to your game ... sorry
just thought i'd post a little something to say how much i enjoyed your game (y)(y)(y)(y)(y)
I agree 100% Imperial, great renders, story is good, runs smooth, awesome work by the Dev/s ! 5 stars from me (y) (that doesn't happen very often) if say its good its real good !
 

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This reminds me of a series of books I have read
Ah,the twin brother of Eric Vall:)



 
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I would like to say I've changed my opinion of the game, but really I was hoping that the beginning had had a rework.

The start of the game has not changed beyond what presume are 2 grammar wording changes, so the beginning the MC's reactions are all the same, I know the dev has stated that the MC's relationship was ending at their last encounter, and I was led to believe that this was going to be clarified, I could not find it, perhaps the dev just has not had the time or felt that after having said it it was clear enough. That would be his right I guess.

There are a heap of issues around seeing the "maybe" future, and risking the MC's life, and the whole "test" to see if the MC is the chosen one(?) has some real logic flaws, I mean hmm I cant win this fight, against magic girl with fire, perhaps she'll fuck me instead??? I'm not sure how one reaches this conclusion, sure lets say the future reading dryads are planning this from the start, they knew this was likely to occur so go along with it, what the hell is the MC thinking to make it happen??? and then afterwards being told told your now somehow bonded to the girl you fucked?? Guess that was the plan huh, ugh.

The MC does express some frustration now in the new scenes to/at his mother, but.. honestly as it's written or in the order it appears it's too little too late, and then the sister comes in and well... ugh..

Ok so I think the problem here is me, I wanted something more than the dev is delivering.
 
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I mean hmm I cant win this fight, against magic girl with fire, perhaps she'll fuck me instead???
Yep, I really did not see the logic in this, despite it being a porn game. This really bothered me.
and then afterwards being told told your now somehow bonded to the girl you fucked??
Magic cummies. This doesn't bother me as much.
The MC does express some frustration now in the new scenes to/at his mother, but.. honestly as it's written or in the order it appears it's too little too late, and then the sister comes in and well... ugh..
I'm a little more understanding with the mother situation. I can see why things are as they are. It's the folks at the coven and dryads that bother me. Like, this guy just found out he's magic. He didn't ask for it. And now they're dictating his very existence. I'd kindly tell them suck my left, right, and if I had one, middle testicle.
 

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I just was thinking the MC is cheating so easily after being scared that he did something bad to his GF, then i realized we were not told how the others handled the reason she left for collage and why MC did not see her off. did they make her forget him. i don't remember him calling her yet! is his love now loving another?
as far as I've seen they didn't break up and they didn't erase him from her memory either, so yeah just some very big logical flaws, but hey whatever, I know if I keep pointing those out someone will say something to lines of "Is just a game, it doesn't matter."
 
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as far as I've seen they didn't break up and they didn't erase him from her memory either, so yeah just some very big logical flaws, but hey whatever, I know if I keep pointing those out someone will say something to lines of "Is just a game, it doesn't matter."
A few people have, including myself, and it seems dev is aware and will hopefully clarify better.
 
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As someone said the MC is just a tool, he has no real personality for the moment. It's an empty shell, in such a game it can be good if the player can build him by making choices but now we just have a totally passive MC who looks like a spectator watching a story.
Now it's time to make him grow a pair, make choices or at least giving him the possibility to go away from this by dying killed by a wicked witch! A gameover would be better than going on playing the puppet, you know, the kind you put your hand in their butt!:ROFLMAO:
 

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I just found this and really enjoyed the story. There are a few things in the narrative which I would do different but I firmly believe in letting the Dev doing their thing and tell their own story. I will address some comments in general.

1. Those that are harping on the MC as a wimp, gotta remember he lived in a house with all girls, who knows if he had a male role model, and is still late teens or early twenty. Without a strong male role model in his life, there is very little chance he will become an overbearing alpha like several are suggesting. This is fully in line with a young adult male with only female role models.

2. The "fucking" thing as his power. I mean it is the story - let it go. That is how the dev is getting sex into a story. If it is not how you want it .. move on. I personally think it is funny and enjoy a hot scene.

3. The dialog. Dear lord, have you seen what texts and chats teenagers and early adults have? I have 2 and let me tell you this is exactly what they fucking talk like.

So Dev - you do you and i'll enjoy the show.
 
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