- Aug 30, 2020
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Akifai said "Would I like for everything to be coherent, and make sense? Sure, but as long as it has decent, and overall competent writing, I'll come along for the ride."
Sure it should be written so we can follow i think everyone wants that, but if Dev wants me to play next game and the next after that created by the DEV will need better writing Coven is easy to fix to bring together and Dev was told it was loosing belief in the story line but was not rectified in chapter 2 or 3 so now the only logical fix is a flash back or away forward that truly gives the MC an obvious backbone over a short time. Dev might have problem here at this point do to story indicates last 20 male magic users were bad people and the MC is too good except he is a cheater and went to that easily. so how bad to make him? To me Dev is hiding something (i hope). and just maybe we will learn it soon or the story may just not have it who knows next couple chapters will tell.
Sure it should be written so we can follow i think everyone wants that, but if Dev wants me to play next game and the next after that created by the DEV will need better writing Coven is easy to fix to bring together and Dev was told it was loosing belief in the story line but was not rectified in chapter 2 or 3 so now the only logical fix is a flash back or away forward that truly gives the MC an obvious backbone over a short time. Dev might have problem here at this point do to story indicates last 20 male magic users were bad people and the MC is too good except he is a cheater and went to that easily. so how bad to make him? To me Dev is hiding something (i hope). and just maybe we will learn it soon or the story may just not have it who knows next couple chapters will tell.