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JaredFogal

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but if you want a story to read you know there is something called a book ;) :unsure:
They still waste paper printing those? I know e-books are now a thing but unless it's a tech book I don't read those anymore and haven't for the last 10 years or so. I prefer seeing the author's imagination with his own visuals, not be forced to use my own imagination while reading a paperback porno like it's still 1990 or something (incest novels based on true stories made for fascinating reading back then, kinda boring these days compared to an AVN version). It's like comparing D&D ca 1970 with pen and paper and a 20-sided die to a modern video game version of it.
 

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If I do decide to add anything like that. The player will be presented a choice of free-roam for that section, or menu based. And it won't be hard to navigate at all, especially if playing with my built-in walkthrough, which i intend to add once i have some actual choices implemented. it will also be small things like who to visit first if at home, and the girls are in different places. But again, I still haven't decided whether I will implement anything like that yet.
i Personally dont mind sandbox and there is some great on here but you do need do alot work to make it good i dont think its easy to make sandboxe game
 

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They still waste paper printing those? I know e-books are now a thing but unless it's a tech book I don't read those anymore and haven't for the last 10 years or so. I prefer seeing the author's imagination with his own visuals, not be forced to use my own imagination while reading a paperback porno like it's still 1990 or something (incest novels based on true stories made for fascinating reading back then, kinda boring these days compared to an AVN version). It's like comparing D&D ca 1970 with pen and paper and a 20-sided die to a modern video game version of it.
you just said you want a story to read and i just want to let you know that there is books you can read if you want a story ;)
 

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thumbs up... but... i personally dont think, this game will last long... either abandoned or banned... we all know f95 ;)
 

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Ah I see. I'm using italics for both Thinking and Whispering, so it kind of needs to be there so there's no confusion as to what perspective is being used.
I imagine you could simply use smaller font size for whispers, instead of italics? It'd match the early scene in the game between the eldest daughter and the MC, where the small font is used for quietly spoken part of sentence.
 

JaredFogal

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you just said you want a story to read and i just want to let you know that there is books you can read if you want a story ;)
Yeah but I want Daz renders with it too. Ideally showing more than telling. Better still if there's more animations than renders (still rare for now in AVNs, Heather's Home and Dad's Dead does that, but the story/plot is kinda weird/lame even by porno standards).
 

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This might be a minor issue, but you might want to adjust Miss Mitchell's age and/or how long it has been since she last saw the MC. With the default age of the twins being 18, it would mean they were six while you and wife (then girlfriend) last saw her, babysat her. Ex) Twins are 18, Miss Mitchell said she was 24 and you hadn't seen her in 12 years.

It is not game breaking, just a little odd you were babysitting a 12yr old with your wife/girlfriend while you had 4 kids at home.

Edit: Miss Mitchell being Rose (for those who might not get what I mean.)
 

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This might be a minor issue, but you might want to adjust Miss Mitchell's age and/or how long it has been since she last saw the MC. With the default age of the twins being 18, it would mean they were six while you and wife (then girlfriend) last saw her, babysat her. Ex) Twins are 18, Miss Mitchell said she was 24 and you hadn't seen her in 12 years.
The timeline is pretty odd in general, since it also means MC and his wife (but then girlfriend) had 4 kids long before they actually got married. Which is well, not out of a question, but it makes both of them look a bit like a pair of irresponsible, bumbling idiots.
 

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Yeah but I want Daz renders with it too. Ideally showing more than telling. Better still if there's more animations than renders (still rare for now in AVNs, Heather's Home and Dad's Dead does that, but the story/plot is kinda weird/lame even by porno standards).
yeah i like when story games got fun choices and not me clicking away and not do anything thats why i like sandboxes abit more cos you got stuff to do
 

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The timeline is pretty odd in general, since it also means MC and his wife (but then girlfriend) had 4 kids long before they actually got married. Which is well, not out of a question, but it makes both of them look a bit like a pair of irresponsible, bumbling idiots.
Maybe he will go into further explanation later on, which will help. But yes, as of right now, makes the pair (MC, gf/wife) seem irresponsible.
 

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This might be a minor issue, but you might want to adjust Miss Mitchell's age and/or how long it has been since she last saw the MC. With the default age of the twins being 18, it would mean they were six while you and wife (then girlfriend) last saw her, babysat her. Ex) Twins are 18, Miss Mitchell said she was 24 and you hadn't seen her in 12 years.

It is not game breaking, just a little odd you were babysitting a 12yr old with your wife/girlfriend while you had 4 kids at home.

Edit: Miss Mitchell being Rose (for those who might not get what I mean.)
Who keeps default 18 ages if they are easily changable? In mine the twins are 12 (and I'm assuming just really smart to be HS freshmen at that age, plausible with having a dad that's also a school teacher). Izzy is defaulted to 14 (mentioned in dialog) and she's the oldest so the rest are younger than that by logic, unless her age is set by adding to whatever age the twins are set at (probably, far simpler for the player to do it that way rather than manually setting ages/relationships for a dozen characters individually like some AVNs do). Granted that still has the issue of babysitting a 12yo with 2x 1-2yo babies at home (twins not born yet) but meh, I try not to think that deep on it, it reminds me too much of math word problems that I hated in school. Maybe they simply brought their kids with them when they babysat?
 
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If I do decide to add anything like that. The player will be presented a choice of free-roam for that section, or menu based. And it won't be hard to navigate at all, especially if playing with my built-in walkthrough, which i intend to add once i have some actual choices implemented. it will also be small things like who to visit first if at home, and the girls are in different places. But again, I still haven't decided whether I will implement anything like that yet.
I like sandbox as long as it is easy to use and goes with the story.
 
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This might be a minor issue, but you might want to adjust Miss Mitchell's age and/or how long it has been since she last saw the MC. With the default age of the twins being 18, it would mean they were six while you and wife (then girlfriend) last saw her, babysat her. Ex) Twins are 18, Miss Mitchell said she was 24 and you hadn't seen her in 12 years.

It is not game breaking, just a little odd you were babysitting a 12yr old with your wife/girlfriend while you had 4 kids at home.

Edit: Miss Mitchell being Rose (for those who might not get what I mean.)
Who says they didn't get married until after they had the girls. And speaking from experience. My ex-wife, an I used to babysit my niece and nephews all the time even though we had 2 of our own, and they were all very close in ages. only 4 years between the oldest and youngest of 5.
 
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Who says they didn't get married until after they had the girls.
Err, you do? No matter what age the player sets for them, all 4 girls are already born when MC babysits Rose, and it's said explicitly MC's wife wasn't his wife yet then, but his girlfriend.
 

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Err, you do? No matter what age the player sets for them, all 4 girls are already born when MC babysits Rose, and it's said explicitly MC's wife wasn't his wife yet then, but his girlfriend.
Yeah. I was being sarcastic. lol
 
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That was fun. Hope it continues on. Only issue I found was a minor technical one. When you go into the More Info screen, the menu buttons no longer work, and you have to hit esc to get back to the main menu. The links seem to work, though. Not a big deal, but I rarely use the keyboard with these games.
 

DasUber

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I will be, once I start delving into more of her story, mostly via flashbacks, but i also don't want to delve too far into it and have my game littered with flashbacks. I want the core to be present time. What I will say is, blame the wife and her upbringing. Whcih is inspired from the relationship dynamics of a family I knew growing up whom where close friends of ours. ;)
Awesome! Good to see you won't gloss over it, but use it to continually build the story. Keep up the good work!
 
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