VN Ren'Py Completed The Entrepreneur [Ep.4] [MisterMaya]

[MisterMaya]

Laura reminds me of Evangeline Lilly and that's good enough for me!

I totally agree with you !
When I went for this hair color that was exactly my thought too !

 

[MisterMaya]

The models on this game are very nice, good to not have a midget MC for a change, a bit more diversity on mc clothes would be nice, always the same plain clothes .

But I really didn't feel the plot and not a fan of all the girls background(from what i could get), every chick seems to have so much heavy baggage feels like I will need to play as a life jacket for the girls.

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Well mc has his good and bad moments not the worst not the best, just seems thinking isn't for him even if he had brains enough to be 2 years at a law course.
Dunno, I really liked the models but none draw me to her, personality and story wise.
All in all its just my opinion and don't take offense in my wording its not my main language and im always blunt talking/typing, I will still give it another go when next update drops to see if can get atached to any girl.
Again I will say I really liked the girl models, all are very beautiful.

Hope the best for you and your game maya, you seem a nice person here answering and talking with people.

Thanks for the review, I understand what you mean and I don't get offended, critics are here to help me improve !
I hope you'll like the next update when it comes out

 

[MisterMaya]

The quality of the renders is very good and I like the girl models.
The story seems ok but the dialogues are quite cringe, the english wording not helping. Not the worst I've seen though, far from it.
Quite some typos too, embarrassing/embarrassed takes 2 "r"
Overall a slighty better than average VN

I understand, I'm starting to think that I should hire someone to go over my english script to rework it before I release an update.
I will look into that!

 

[dougiehouser]

Dunno if anyone has mentioned it, but at least to me the font makes ! look like I.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I understand, I'm starting to think that I should hire someone to go over my english script to rework it before I release an update.
I will look into that!

well I have a reading disability and I cant read so the typos don't really bother me but I love the game and I love that not every girl wants to jump on your dick

the girls actually act like real people

I like that you can have a real boyfriend-girlfriend relationship with them and it's not just about sex

right now I'm playing my version of the MC as a guy who likes to be faithful to one girl and doesn't like to sleep around

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[kartolas]

well I have a reading disability and I cant read so the typos don't really bother me but I love the game and I love that not every girl wants to jump on your dick

the girls actually act like real people

I like that you can have a real boyfriend-girlfriend relationship with them and it's not just about sex

right now I'm playing my version of the MC as a guy who likes to be faithful to one girl and doesn't like to sleep around

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That should teach you a lesson: don't fall for the broken ones, It's a lot of work

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

That should teach you a lesson: don't fall for the broken ones, It's a lot of work

bro I think that was the worst car ride in the history of car rides

I kept hoping and praying for the option to jump out of the car

never open your heart to a girl and confess your feelings in a moving vehicle

 

[kartolas]

bro I think that was the worst car ride in the history of car rides

I kept hoping and praying for the option to jump out of the car

never open your heart to a girl and confess your feelings in a moving vehicle

Mate, if you're looking for a room and the only option is to live with 3 gorgeous woman, go live under a bridge

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Mate, if you're looking for a room and the only option is to live with 3 gorgeous woman, go live under a bridge

wise words my brother wise words but it's not all bad at least she knows how I feel about her now and my feelings are out in the open

and she cant go back to pretending that we're just friends

and we do live in the same house so hopefully, it means I will have multiple opportunities to convince her that there's something between us

 

[kartolas]

wise words my brother wise words but it's not all bad at least she knows how I feel about her now and my feelings are out in the open

and she cant go back to pretending that we're just friends

and we do live in the same house so hopefully, it means I will have multiple opportunities to convince her that there's something between us

You noticed there's a femdom tag right?! You should let that one go...

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

You noticed there's a femdom tag right?! You should let that one go...

femdom do you mind explaining to me exactly what that means

I mean I'm cool as long as it's not like NTR or a three-way

because like I said I love monogamy and I don't want to share her with anyone

 

[kartolas]

femdom do you mind explaining to me exactly what that means

I mean I'm cool as long as it's not like NTR or a three-way

because like I said I love monogamy and I don't want to share her with anyone

Female Domination.

 

[DIRTY Filthy RAT]

You noticed there's a femdom tag right?! You should let that one go...

Hey if Laura wants me to be her sex slave, sign me up! But I’m not wearing a cock cage

 

[Juju da moto]

Optional femdom? Why I don't like feeling like a dog

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Female Domination.

ooh okay I'm actually cool with that as long as we don't bring anybody into our bedroom and it stays between the two of us and it's nothing too extreme I don't mind pretending to be a dog

because I'm not into threeways and I don't want anybody else touching her

I know a lot of people fantasize about being with two girls but I'm not one of them

 

[Regis9]

love the design of the characters it looks high quality !! good luck with this

 

[DIRTY Filthy RAT]

The models on this game are very nice, good to not have a midget MC for a change, a bit more diversity on mc clothes would be nice, always the same plain clothes .

But I really didn't feel the plot and not a fan of all the girls background(from what i could get), every chick seems to have so much heavy baggage feels like I will need to play as a life jacket for the girls.

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Well mc has his good and bad moments not the worst not the best, just seems thinking isn't for him even if he had brains enough to be 2 years at a law course.
Dunno, I really liked the models but none draw me to her, personality and story wise.
All in all its just my opinion and don't take offense in my wording its not my main language and im always blunt talking/typing, I will still give it another go when next update drops to see if can get atached to any girl.
Again I will say I really liked the girl models, all are very beautiful.

Hope the best for you and your game maya, you seem a nice person here answering and talking with people.

I don’t give a shit what the MC wears, he could wear a trash bag everyday. Now for the girls, I want to see them in different outfits everyday. Especially tight low cut cleavage showing off all their curves

 

[Deleted member 748346]

I understand, I'm starting to think that I should hire someone to go over my english script to rework it before I release an update.
I will look into that!

huh i honestly hope the bad guys wont win or kill one of the Love Interests, my favorite is Valentine by the way But you are the dev so i will wait and see what happens. Its just Leap of Faith already hit me way too hard and i dont want to feel that sadness again its not healthy for somebody who used to have depression. But i will see how this goes.

 

[Silver]

Did you get the lewd scene with Valentine ?

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I really doubt it's a femdom scene. She asked some questions, and you have to answer, if you couldn't you have to take her pics, and she refers you as her own slave as a joke.

 

[MisterMaya]

I really doubt it's a femdom scene. She asked some questions, and you have to answer, if you couldn't you have to take her pics, and she refers you as her own slave as a joke.

I need to change it then my bad !