Well now that you've confirmed she is indeed a prostitute ill go ahead and skip but benefit of the doubt, you did say you have future projects planned. Hopefully a more wholesome story is in the works, looking forward to seeing those 
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I do have more stories that I’ll be happy to share with you all once I finish this one. I like to think that all my stories have a wholesome foundation, including this one.Well now that you've confirmed she is indeed a prostitute ill go ahead and skip but benefit of the doubt, you did say you have future projects planned. Hopefully a more wholesome story is in the works, looking forward to seeing those
On a side note, I’d totally understand not trying it if this was a long game with a complex plot or if it required some effort on your side, but for what’s essentially an intro with two possible paths that you can fully play in 5-7 minutes, I’d be curious, personally.
You have said you plan on using the characters again in the future, I'd hate to have a skewed perspective of her cause I do like the model. I've have enough of a game with "non canon" other otherwise type deals with characters I like for lack of better term being ruined by the content in question or otherwise skewing my opinion of them or the game itself. It's easier to just skip and ignore, why waste my time on things I can't get invested/immersed in? I'm speaking more in general than in the case of this game but the point remains more or less the same.
Perfectly understandable. By the way, I’m glad you like the model. I worked really hard to give her that look.
NO denying she's super attractive and cute. I do want to offer one more piece of perspective if you will, you've raised many times the issue of someone looking like her and relative innocence and all that, I think something to consider is usually in VN's ALL women are insanely attractive and not just the LI's so suspending disbelief that the super milf or the hot sister or whomever are single or inexperienced is easy because they are attractive, but so is everyone else and so that crux is easily cast aside from a viewers perspective.
previous sexual experience is fine but not when its with a customer at least thats how i see it
Me, having debated whether or not to play, reading all the comments about the sister definitely and semi-regularly sleeping with clients
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It goes to show how well 'planned' the script really is. What's next she gave away free Bj in highschool so it would help cope with her depression or just because she had the body of a model and thought it was compulsory to do so.Yeah that's pretty much me aswell. I didn't realise the Virgin tag even applied to the MC until recently after finding this game But then shouldn't all the games with a beta cuck mc have it aswell? The dev is open to add ntr and other kinks if it gets enough demand, Wonder where this is headed
Wouldn't be suprised if the dev introduced a flashback or a dream to dodge the cursed tag while satisfying a few. A Virgin Mc and a sister that's a prostitute, knowing the dev the romance that's due is when she brings up her past night with the other 10 dudes and the Virgin Mc creaming his pants just from the thought of itI don't think the dev has a crowd to appeal in mind, He would be open to introduce kinks that might fall along the lines of his script or if there's $ involved
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Out of curiosity , which crowd are you trying to appeal?
I get it , this is your vision, and I respect it , but which crowd do you think this story will appeal to?
Out of curiosity , which crowd are you trying to appeal?
I get it , this is your vision, and I respect it , but which crowd do you think this story will appeal to?
Ok... Whatever I say, you're going to reinterpret it the way you want, so this is the last time I'm going to try and make sense of the comments (hey, a guy can dream...):
1. Again, this is a SHORT story. If people are very interested, it can be somewhat expanded a little (like a second, equally short chapter, always focusing on the two main characters), but that expansion doesn't have anything to do with introducing new kinks nor will it be based on people paying more or less. This is a free game and it always will be. Paying subscriptions are for supporting purposes only and I'll never add a poll to introduce new kinks or let anyone but me, decice what goes into the game being developed. If a poll is ever held in my SubscribeStar page, it will be so to decide between a number of defined stories, to see which project is more appealing to the subscribers. Never to customize the kinks.
2. This game will never EVER show Jen having any kind of intimate contact with anyone other than MC. The game depicts a turning point in the life of both characters, so please, calm yout tits about NTR and cucked MCs because that's not what this game is about.
3. The script was and is still fully written. Only two new lines have been altered since I uploaded the first release, but I'm not adapting the story based on anything discussed here.
4. And please, if you're truly interested in this discussion, take your time to read this: This game and ALL the games I'll ever get to work on will always be based on stories I would enjoy playing. That's the main reason why I started writing scripts. I wanted to make the games I would like to play, with the kind of scripts I found interesting and arousing. Does this particular story stand in the middleground between two different kinks? Maybe. I truly don't care. This thread has 9 pages already and 90% of it is people complaining that they can't fit the story into a main defined kink when most of them haven't even played it. My answer is simple: play it. It's only 5-7 minutes. If you suddenly realize it's different from the idea you had in mind based on the tags and you happen to like it, great! If you don't, you're more than welcome to use this thread to express yourself.
Thanks.
1. Again, this is a SHORT story. If people are very interested, it can be somewhat expanded a little (like a second, equally short chapter, always focusing on the two main characters), but that expansion doesn't have anything to do with introducing new kinks nor will it be based on people paying more or less. This is a free game and it always will be. Paying subscriptions are for supporting purposes only and I'll never add a poll to introduce new kinks or let anyone but me, decice what goes into the game being developed. If a poll is ever held in my SubscribeStar page, it will be so to decide between a number of defined stories, to see which project is more appealing to the subscribers. Never to customize the kinks.
2. This game will never EVER show Jen having any kind of intimate contact with anyone other than MC. The game depicts a turning point in the life of both characters, so please, calm yout tits about NTR and cucked MCs because that's not what this game is about.
3. The script was and is still fully written. Only two new lines have been altered since I uploaded the first release, but I'm not adapting the story based on anything discussed here.
4. And please, if you're truly interested in this discussion, take your time to read this: This game and ALL the games I'll ever get to work on will always be based on stories I would enjoy playing. That's the main reason why I started writing scripts. I wanted to make the games I would like to play, with the kind of scripts I found interesting and arousing. Does this particular story stand in the middleground between two different kinks? Maybe. I truly don't care. This thread has 9 pages already and 90% of it is people complaining that they can't fit the story into a main defined kink when most of them haven't even played it. My answer is simple: play it. It's only 5-7 minutes. If you suddenly realize it's different from the idea you had in mind based on the tags and you happen to like it, great! If you don't, you're more than welcome to use this thread to express yourself.
Thanks.
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a lot of words avoiding the question I asked
thanks for your time, I guess.
If you want to see it that way... I just wanted to explain that I wasn't thinking about a specific demographic when I wrote the story. Only something I would find interesting on a personal level. I can't be more specific than that without analizing my own work after the fact and deciding which kind of crowd could be interested in it, and that opinion is as valid as your own after playing the game.ngl
a lot of words avoiding the question I asked
thanks for your time, I guess.
I didn't start writing thinking "I'm going to write a story for XXX audience". I started writing thinking "Wouldn't it be interesting if this happened?" and then started adding elements that seemed fitting.
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yea , I can understand that
so .. in which group do you see yourself falling then?
romance?ntr?humiliation? etc (not gonna mention too many genres, there are quite a few of them )
since you can't say for which group this VN would appeal best , I reckon this is the next best thing.
If you ask that as a personal question, then I tend to love stories about two characters (not a huge fan of harems, although I do play that kind of games anyway) who have a previous established non romantic relationship and really have a special chemistry together (that's important) and how a specific event introduced early in the script changes all that to transform it into something more physical/romantic. If they start the story in a rather uncomfortable place in their lives and the whole plot helps them realize that they feel much better after everything has changed, even better. If you notice, Jen is already leaving hints that she doesn't particularly enjoy spending time with her customers and MC starts the whole story pretty lost, doing questionable stuff to get out of his current position in life.
Can that be encapsulated into the "Romance" tag? I suppose that's the closest thing ("wholesome romance"?), but on top of that, you can add a lot of nuances. "Making a Mark" comes to mind. That's a story I really enjoyed.
Now, I absolutely loathe Humilliation. It's a total mood killer for me. About NTR, I've played and enjoyed a couple of games with NTR in them, but it was under very specific circumstances. Like the whole thing was so full of sex everywhere, it didn't really matter much, because every character was an extremely horny caricature of a real person, but I don't really like the concept of sharing or cucking MC. Maybe if the MC is actually a woman and she goes around fucking left and right, but if the MC is a man, then NTR is a no no for me.
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Thank you. After all this is just for fun and because we're supposed to enjoy developing and playing games. That's why I do it, anyway. And I truly can't wait to share more stories with you.thanks for the time you took replying
and the reply itself of course
Hi Jitch. Unfortunately, just like hrimthyrs said, Patreon is very strict with certain kinks, being incest one of the most famous so, for now, I’m not considering joining.
Have you tried contacting SubscribeStar and asking why is your card being denied? If you don’t want to go through the hassle, it’s perfectly ok. I really appreciate the fact that you intended to subscribe anyway.
I wish you’d show the fmc in action with others as part of her job. It would add realism to the visual story and gratifying to us voyeurs. Because just an incest sis bro story is just another one on the heap on f95. Images look good tho.