I LOVE the skip scene dialogue though, since there's only 4 save slots I can't spam save like I usually do. Even if only for restarting the game or reloading from before a scene.
Thanks for the feedback on that. I've only done away with the skip option thus far for the scenes with Rosevynne at the start of the game. I'll reconsider keeping it in there. I hadn't had any feedback on it thus far and just thought most people were only annoyed with the long repetitive scenes in The Tower.
Also, I just finished proofreading and changed Nasira's last lines (thus far) of dialogue a bit.
I'm happy with it now. ^_^
Now for Pawlita, Bebe, and Anna.
The dialogue I am concerned with is all in Kendra's House of Pleasure, aside from Pawlita's initial dialogue, which is elsewhere.
Bebe's and Anna's dialogue, where you first encounter them, I'm happy with already. There's actually a lot of dialogue I need to write for the girls in the House of Pleasure, not to mention quests and turning things in to them (including one item you can currently get, but can't turn in yet because I haven't fixed it up yet).
Anyway I just want to fix the bit of dialogue that's already been written. I hate awkward dialogue, and I feel like a lot of it is awkward or doesn't match the characters' personalilties well enough. Almost there though!
.. but I'm gonna take a nap for now. xP