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Deleted member 4865569

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Is the MC seriously ok with everything that happened to him in the past and what these characters did to him? And he essentially "forgave" all of them just like that? Considering how big of a badass he's supposed to be, he's the biggest pussy. It's actually infuriating to play this. These characters give you a bullshit explanation why they're a piece of shit and the MC is just like "Yea, I guess it's not their faul anyways". Like come on...

Well this game is clearly not for me after this update, just needed to get this of my chest.
I agree.

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Matt_88

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Sorry, I won't go on a rand to many people went before.

But a family path in this game is not done. Someone that literally drops you off in hell, there's no coming back from that!
Sorry def you lost me. Rework and using the models as demons would work (and no family tie!! they are dead to like 99% off the people)
 

michael1984

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Dec 9, 2017
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Yeah like i said this game became a shit show with the new update

Went from bad ass MC finally breaking free from hell ... Getting some revenge at certain people

To now becoming a beta boy nsync looking boy band member that forgives everything caus of some lame ass exuse forgettoing the pain of the LI dieing and the centuries of torture and no one helped him

To the dev i would wanna ask why even bother with a dark revenge path were u can choose to be cold and then not implement it in this new update is beyond me

The dev should just rewrite this thing and get rid of the revenge path choices caus they have no meaning when u play this new update
 

Larry2000

Dev/Head Writer of Unexpected Opportunity
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May 9, 2017
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seriously characters hundred of years old are virgin? i will never understand the obsession with virginity in these games
I don't think there is anyone that understands Virginity in 100 year old characters, not even the hundreds of years old characters. Now regular virgins, that I can stand by! ;)
 
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Duke4515

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Overall I did like this but I do have some things that irk me.

I have to agree with a lot of similar sentiment that all the LI's ( I think they are) are all kind of unlikeable. Aside from the fact we don't know why the MC's family left him to suffer, they all showed little atonement, remorse, or regret for allowing the MC to be tortured for centuries as a child and eventually killed. It doesn't matter that they could not hear his prayers; they all knew he was in hell, a place not known for its friendly cuddles. The whole family needs to act more in line with how severe it was. They as of now act as if it was boot camp at worst in many instances. The girls trying to flirt with the MC despite their lack of remorse also just comes off as cold imo.

Nyks without a doubt is on everyone's kill list. Her whole purpose when the MC left the castle was to take care of it, failed to do that, left Inessa to die, and then stopped him for trying to help. Her reasoning for stopping the MC didnt even make sense. She was afraid of him being killed but later he massacred everyone anyhow. The only way it would be fine is if she somehow saved Inessa, but so far we have no indication of that.
 
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Adoringfan

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Ok. Started with an interesting plot and nice renders ... and now? we have a fucking school setting? Are you for real? lost your brain? For me this is the most disappointing VN i ever came across. deleted and burried
Are you saying it went full anime mode? I wonder which anime this was modelled off of?
 
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Simulacrum29

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now he can't do shit because of some bullshit "balance" so he can't even get revenge as or now.
I mean if we strife for balance shouldn't we Kill 3/4 of Haven like we did in Hell?

If Dev is searching for a new Title : "How to kill your game online Fast " Or "Killing your Game in two easy steps" are Both not in use right now at least i found non via Goolge :ROFLMAO:
 
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joryh

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Well. Good thing I waited on this for a while. Seems like the MC is being made a tool. I sure as sweet living fuck wouldn't be all smiles and cuddles to the ppl who sent/left me to centuries of torment. I'd be collaring, branding, and giving them a taste of what they 'gifted' me.
 

Maevos

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I think we can all agree that the story in this game has gone to shit without any rhyme or reason.

There is no emotional payoff. MC needs catharsis but it doesn't happen. His family acts like nothing has happened and he just goes with the flow. It's all extremely underwhelming.
 

Deleted member 4865569

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Well, that's a serious left turn at the end.

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whitebear You wrote yourself into a heck of a corner this time, I really hope you can write yourself back out of it.
bro the amount of plot holes is fucking comedy. and shit don't make any sense.

the mc turned into the biggest bitch and idiot ever.

"I would have did the same if I was in azel place"
LOL

Azel appearenly not afraid of the father but she still threw the mc in hell on his orders? SHE ALSO didn't try to save him or go against the father's order.
 

Cirdon

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THEY TALKING LIKE IT'S ANY OTHER DAY. THIS IS NOT HOW YOU WRITE CHARACTERS, THIS IS NOT HOW PEOPLE SHOULD ACT WHEN GETTING BETRAYED BY PEOPLE YOU LOVE THE MOST.

in his mind the mc should be saying " i can't wait to make them suffer like I had too"
now saying "it's not there fault, it's my father" like fuck off.
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Larry2000

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Ok. Started with an interesting plot and nice renders ... and now? we have a fucking school setting? Are you for real? lost your brain? For me this is the most disappointing VN i ever came across. deleted and burried
I don't know... City of Promise had a LOT of Promise to reach that point. Not anime at all, but coincidentally enough, it ALSO had family betrayal! Read my review, I wasn't angry in the slightest :)
 

7empest5teele

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He...HAS..to..go...to..COLLEGE???

A CENTURIES old TORTURED Angel has to turn in assignments and gets SCOLDED for missing fucking CLASSES??
WHERE is the option to use his ice ability to freeze the instructor or deans HEAD, then the shadow ability to cleanly sever it from the meat sack it was attached to since they should ONLY be absolute respect for the MC?

I thought it was bad enough for the Mother of CREATION to have her and her top angel Raphael hold down ridiculous JOBS (EVEN though hers was as a doctor, used to help and heal humanity, so perhaps that WOULD have been a good choice) because they.....sssiiiigggh, need to pay for particulars??
Are they having those horrible cramps from a heavy flow that month...YEAH see how REDICULOUS that even sounds??

We are not given a CHOICE to follow one path or another making this a KINETIC NOVEL (follow the leader in the direction HE wants to take you) rather than a VIRTUAL NOVEL (choose your OWN adventure or path, and have the story follow YOUR choices), we have to follow along with whatever STUPID idea the creator wants to send his bitch MC ON??

I want to play this as a forgiving angel, making peace with his estranged family that no longer follows the...PSYCHOTIC MALE parental figure, then burn the mother fucker DOWN on my second playthrough, witnessing every ounce of PAIN I inflict on those who caused my suffering and MISERY...for...say it WITH me now people....CENTURIES!

What's planned for Chapter 3 then, working 9 to fucking 5, what a way to make a goddamned LIVING??
"Well MAH, I gotsa to get to work, these bills aint gonna pay themselves y'all!"
 
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