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Tyrranus

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May 4, 2017
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well.....college stupidity aside.... that was a hell of a place to end it.......
 

v1900

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He...HAS..to..go...to..COLLEGE???

A CENTURIES old TORTURED Angel has to turn in assignments and gets SCOLDED for missing fucking CLASSES??
WHERE is the option to use his ice ability to freeze the instructor or deans HEAD, then the shadow ability to cleanly sever it from the meat sack it was attached to since they should ONLY be absolute respect for the MC?

I thought it was bad enough for the Mother of CREATION to have her and her top angel Raphael hold down ridiculous JOBS (EVEN though hers was as a doctor, used to help and heal humanity, so perhaps that WOULD have been a good choice) because they.....sssiiiigggh, need to pay for particulars??
Are they having those horrible cramps from a heavy flow that month...YEAH see how REDICULOUS that even sounds??

We are not given a CHOICE to follow one path or another making this a KINETIC NOVEL (follow the leader in the direction HE wants to take you) rather than a VIRTUAL NOVEL (choose your OWN adventure or path, and have the story follow YOUR choices), we have to follow along with whatever STUPID idea the creator wants to send his bitch MC ON??

I want to play this as a forgiving angel, making peace with his estranged family that no longer follows the...PSYCHOTIC MALE parental figure, then burn the mother fucker DOWN on my second playthrough, witnessing every ounce of PAIN I inflict on those who caused my suffering and MISERY...for...say it WITH me now people....CENTURIES!

What's planned for Chapter 3 then, working 9 to fucking 5, what a way to make a goddamned LIVING??
"Well MAH, I gotsa to get to work, these bills aint gonna pay themselves y'all!"
He is going to end up working as a pool boy to pay the bills and buy them bikinis and grind points to get a foot job. oru2x.gif
 

SpyderArachnid

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Jul 31, 2017
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Okay, wtf even was this? First time even seeing this game and trying it out, and that was an absolute mess.

Started off interesting at first. Whole centuries tortured angel taking over hell, then he gets to earth and just wtf happened? Now he is living at home with his family that didn't do anything with all their amazing powers to save him? Going shopping and having goofy banter with the sister that dragged his ass to hell in the first place? Forgiving them, seriously? This turned into some slice of life crap instead of a tortured angel hellbent on revenge.

And wait wait wait. That's not even the worst. College! Are you kidding me right now? So not only did this go from revenge seeking tortured angel to a family living slice of life, now it is a college life game as well. Just wtf even is this?

I usually don't go down this hard on games, but I don't even know what is going on with this. How does this have such high reviews? This was just a disaster in my opinion. This needs to go back to the writing board. Best of luck with... whatever you're trying to do here, but this is just a big no.
 

Deleted member 4865569

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Okay, wtf even was this? First time even seeing this game and trying it out, and that was an absolute mess.

Started off interesting at first. Whole centuries tortured angel taking over hell, then he gets to earth and just wtf happened? Now he is living at home with his family that didn't do anything with all their amazing powers to save him? Going shopping and having goofy banter with the sister that dragged his ass to hell in the first place? Forgiving them, seriously? This turned into some slice of life crap instead of a tortured angel hellbent on revenge.

And wait wait wait. That's not even the worst. College! Are you kidding me right now? So not only did this go from revenge seeking tortured angel to a family living slice of life, now it is a college life game as well. Just wtf even is this?

I usually don't go down this hard on games, but I don't even know what is going on with this. How does this have such high reviews? This was just a disaster in my opinion. This needs to go back to the writing board. Best of luck with... whatever you're trying to do here, but this is just a big no.
also we learned the mom has the power to CONTROLL PEOPLE and you telling me she couldn't use that to try to help her son?

AHAHHAHAHAAHA
 

Simulacrum29

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Apr 20, 2018
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Okay, wtf even was this? First time even seeing this game and trying it out, and that was an absolute mess.

Started off interesting at first. Whole centuries tortured angel taking over hell, then he gets to earth and just wtf happened? Now he is living at home with his family that didn't do anything with all their amazing powers to save him? Going shopping and having goofy banter with the sister that dragged his ass to hell in the first place? Forgiving them, seriously? This turned into some slice of life crap instead of a tortured angel hellbent on revenge.

And wait wait wait. That's not even the worst. College! Are you kidding me right now? So not only did this go from revenge seeking tortured angel to a family living slice of life, now it is a college life game as well. Just wtf even is this?

I usually don't go down this hard on games, but I don't even know what is going on with this. How does this have such high reviews? This was just a disaster in my opinion. This needs to go back to the writing board. Best of luck with... whatever you're trying to do here, but this is just a big no.
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:ROFLMAO:
The threat is even better than the game.
 

Azsouth

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Mar 1, 2021
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so Innessa and Nyks are basically just gone, did he kill the ice queen when he destroyed Hell? never got to have fun w/ her. also the shadow demon warrior chick didn't show up this episode.
 

7empest5teele

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Dec 23, 2019
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OH WAIT now I know what that reminds me of, an EON old IMMORTAL being attending a learning facility to pick up little girls, yeah thats the premise for TWILIGHT!!
Gooooo PEDOBEAR!
 

7empest5teele

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Dec 23, 2019
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so Innessa and Nyks are basically just gone, did he kill the ice queen when he destroyed Hell? never got to have fun w/ her. also the shadow demon warrior chick didn't show up this episode.
YEAH, in the first chapter of this dumpster fire, his mother...or whatever told him she has a surprise for him and he will like HER>
I WAS fully expecting that she resurrected Innessa and was bringing her over?|!
AND where the heill is his Shadow that will NEVER leave him...did the Dev just forget he made her a CHARACTER??
 

Macgamer

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Oct 10, 2018
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Yeah like i said this game became a shit show with the new update

Went from bad ass MC finally breaking free from hell ... Getting some revenge at certain people

To now becoming a beta boy nsync looking boy band member that forgives everything caus of some lame ass exuse forgettoing the pain of the LI dieing and the centuries of torture and no one helped him

To the dev i would wanna ask why even bother with a dark revenge path were u can choose to be cold and then not implement it in this new update is beyond me

The dev should just rewrite this thing and get rid of the revenge path choices caus they have no meaning when u play this new update
Hundreds of years of torture left by your family to suffer. Destroys hell in a fit of rage and escapes only to return home to forgive these same bastards? Then go's to school like a good little boy? WTF??? I'd enslave every one of them and burn their world around them and make them watch. I'd turn the place into my personal play ground then i'd have my revenge on dear old Dad. See how he likes the return of his son and what he's made him into. But coming back from hell to join a boy band????? screw that.
 

Simulacrum29

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Apr 20, 2018
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YEAH, in the first chapter of this dumpster fire, his mother...or whatever told him she has a surprise for him and he will like HER>
I WAS fully expecting that she resurrected Innessa and was bringing her over?|!
AND where the heill is his Shadow that will NEVER leave him...did the Dev just forget he made her a CHARACTER??
Maybe the Lizardpeople got the Dev and replaced him with one of their own, thats why the game seems like it's made by two different people. Damn Lizardpeople
 

MrBenny

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Jul 20, 2021
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Well I just finished, and I really like this story so far. Many of the complaints are that MC is soft, but he's a total mess from being mutilated and alone for centuries in pits of Hell. But I find it odd that none of his family are asking details of his treatment.

I also here is a tool I use to see what points are behind the story choices. Just extract it and drop it into your game folder, and run your game.
 

Thedude715

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Nov 6, 2017
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Yeah.... to ape most other comments promising start but weak follow up.
Guy got left by his family to be tortured for centuries and when reunited with them his only reaction is to be a bit moody about it, and it really seems a waste to turn a story about angels and demons into yet another "young" guy goes college story but maybe that element will be minor who knows.
 

operamini

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Burn the Harddrive just to be on the safe side
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That's my thought!


The first chapter was quite good is is one of the biggest disappointments in the last 2 years i have been on this site, having read most of the VNs, a simple bad VN is one thing but this is like Game of Thrones season 8.
imo from the moment the Elders arrive onward delete everything start again and this time say the plot out loud at the very least because a bird would write a better plot than this.
 
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