VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Falling Reloaded [Ch. 6] [WhiteBear]

[UnoriginalUserName]

Game plays the pronoun game by repeatedly calling girls "him", which, considering the context and sometimes not actually having seen if they have floppy bits or not, is a bit worrying. At this point I'm waiting for a supernatural hermaphrodite to "pop up". I know it's because the game is in Turkish, but still.
Also, there's no "Quit" button, you have to either window the game or tab out and right click it off the taskbar.

 

[eddie987]

it doesnt maybe need a proofreader. it majorly needs one. even the description is full of errors.

I literally started my post saying "The game needs some polishing"... I used the word "maybe", followed by two suggestions because I don't know the dev, so I have no idea if he can afford a proofreader or has any friends who can help him out.

 

[m4pII]

The game has a rather unique plot, and I managed to enjoy it even despite the terrible translation.
I will definitely wait for the continuation.

And I don't really want the game to turn into a boring harem.
But naturally, the author knows better.

 

[dajunk12]

Linux version, got this error:

X Error of failed request:  BadLength (poly request too large or internal Xlib length error)
  Major opcode of failed request:  18 (X_ChangeProperty)
  Serial number of failed request:  259
  Current serial number in output stream:  259

Was able to play other Ren'PY games, so unsure of what the real issue is. No Traceback.txt file to look at.

 

[The_Hybrid]

Love the new girl. Her model is being used by a lot of devs in their game, one of the most well-known is Jill from Being a dik

 

[michael1984]

Nice game so far

Feels alot like the tv series lucifer with the whole angel banished to hell

Will keep a eye on this

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Love the new girl. Her model is being used by a lot of devs in their game, one of the most well-known is Jill from Being a dik

Ok I'm sold. I'll give this a try.

 

[bruce555]

I tried this game and was pleasantly surprised, good start, I like where it's going.

 

[The_Hybrid]

Ok I'm sold. I'll give this a try.

Seem like you a Jill fan. So see for yourself

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[The_Hybrid]

Anyone know the 2 song name? I'm hooked with them

 

[bruce555]

Anyone know the 2 song name? I'm hooked with them

In the audio folder of the game you find all the mp3 audio tracks, if this is useful to you?

 

[xDestiny]

GJ Dude! I like that kind of narrative. Angels and Demons...

Keep going, GLHF.

 

[Qoo-Rilla]

Seems like a good start to Hell. Let’s hope DEV doesn’t ruin this with certain things that usually blow up the forum and ruin the game. Should it now be what it is now, then it will remain good.

 

[boraxkarloff]

Interesting story but everything is so dark you can barely make out the characters.

 

[int13]

Linux version, got this error:

X Error of failed request:  BadLength (poly request too large or internal Xlib length error)
  Major opcode of failed request:  18 (X_ChangeProperty)
  Serial number of failed request:  259
  Current serial number in output stream:  259

Was able to play other Ren'PY games, so unsure of what the real issue is. No Traceback.txt file to look at.

it looks like a corrupted image in the "game/gui" folder... you can replace this (gui) folder from another game

 

[bruce555]

love this game and I think that a sweet and beautiful succubus to cuddle cannot be missing in this game, after all we are in hell .

 

[ShadedWilderness]

Like others have said, the game needs someone fluent in English to make this story flow better. The mismatch of genders is such a dumb fuckup and yet we see it over and over. It's frustratingly simple and yet here we are.

Man/Male/Adam: He, His, Him
Woman/Female/Kadin: She, Hers, Her

I like this story, concept, women, and conflict, and I even like the MC (which is increasingly rare). It needs an English editor/translator. That said, this slag in the furnace has the makings to be enganging and dickhard steel sword of enjoyment.

Make it so, Turkish One.

 

[TONYNICHOLAS]

any animations in the game ?

 

[Telafoo]

enjoying the story so far and looking forward to future updates.

 

[The_Hybrid]

Like others have said, the game needs someone fluent in English to make this story flow better. The mismatch of genders is such a dumb fuckup and yet we see it over and over. It's frustratingly simple and yet here we are.

Man/Male/Adam: He, His, Him
Woman/Female/Kadin: She, Hers, Her

I like this story, concept, women, and conflict, and I even like the MC (which is increasingly rare). It needs an English editor/translator. That said, this slag in the furnace has the makings to be enganging and dickhard steel sword of enjoyment.

Make it so, Turkish One.

I can even volunteer myself to check his grammar for free if he needs cause this game has so much potential, but it's really frustrated to see the grammar/spell wrong so many times