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Clearly incest wasn't the cure for his problems
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This game started with AMAZING potential but now it's just going downhill and it's getting worse lol
No wonder everything is filled with complaints again; they released the update. Otherwise, everyone would stay silent.
They complain as if they were Patreons...
Pathetic.
They complain as if they were Patreons...
Pathetic.
- Dec 4, 2017
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Not that he had the chance to try...who knows, maybe blue ball symptoms getting worseClearly incest wasn't the cure for his problems
- Sep 26, 2016
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You know if you eat food that tastes like shit, its flavor wont change the moment you pay for it. Free shit or paid shit, is still undeniably...shit.No wonder everything is filled with complaints again; they released the update. Otherwise, everyone would stay silent.
They complain as if they were Patreons...
Pathetic.
You know what's really pathetic? People complaining about other people complaining on a forum that was made for people to complain LOL. Are you a patron?No wonder everything is filled with complaints again; they released the update. Otherwise, everyone would stay silent.
They complain as if they were Patreons...
Pathetic.
- Jan 17, 2021
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Really disappointed, this is one of the few games i was thinking for buy a subscription in Patreon but after the chapter 5 and now this... hell no, i don´t want to spend my money in this now...
It is a pity, the game had many potential, with an original theme and interesting plot but now we have deformed girls and a story without conecctions with the Mc we saw in the first chapter. I was very intrigued with this specifically for the religious theme, all the names and characters have conecction with the Bible and exist in this religion, something very good and exceptional for me but now is a disaster.
I hope the dev can redeem himself with the futures chapters or eventually get back and remake the story with a change in the way...
It is a pity, the game had many potential, with an original theme and interesting plot but now we have deformed girls and a story without conecctions with the Mc we saw in the first chapter. I was very intrigued with this specifically for the religious theme, all the names and characters have conecction with the Bible and exist in this religion, something very good and exceptional for me but now is a disaster.
I hope the dev can redeem himself with the futures chapters or eventually get back and remake the story with a change in the way...
- May 4, 2017
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you do realize the dev wasnt the one to 'release' it on this site right? lolNo wonder everything is filled with complaints again; they released the update. Otherwise, everyone would stay silent.
They complain as if they were Patreons...
Pathetic.
- May 4, 2017
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Ill mention this post to whitebear in his discord but generally speaking he avoids this site according to him
- Dec 2, 2021
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That's generally a good approach to take, especially when developing your first project. Most people on this site are rather cruel and unhelpful with their disappointment in a project, but there are a rare few that point out legitimate issues that should be addressed to some extent.
The most likely scenario is that the dev doesn't have any kind of editor. Writing mistakes, plot inconsistencies, and grammar aren't the main priority for the writer - they're main priority is transcribing the story in their head into text. If you've ever seen rough/first drafts of any kind of literature it's fairly common to see these mistakes plaguing the story. The editor is the one who points out grammar/spelling mistakes, and provides feedback regarding the structure of the story (i.e. Does the plot make sense? Is this character behaving according to their character sheet? etc.)
If Whitebear does decide to browse this thread, I highly recommend taking advantage of MIT OpenCourseWare. There are several free classes that teach you the tools necessary to become a skillful writer. This should also be helpful in creating a workflow for the writing the script.
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The dev went crazy with the body sliders... again. If he continues like this, it won't be long till he won't be able to fit two characters in the same scene. It's just ridiculous.
so because we aren't subs to dev's patreon, we don't have the right to point out problems with the game? story goes from "exiled angel kills torturer" to "I wanna get drunk because the nice girl is gone". grammar is horrible, character models change every other update, MC has almost no growth, and if anyone makes even a single small complaint, guys like you say things like "you're getting it for free so stfu and enjoy"No wonder everything is filled with complaints again; they released the update. Otherwise, everyone would stay silent.
They complain as if they were Patreons...
Pathetic.
- Feb 16, 2023
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Constructive comments from any are fair; even comments about the story drifting/not making sense, quality of renders or animations suffering, etc.
The things that make me roll my eyes and shake my head are when people start demanding changes, bitching about release times, bitching about the length of a release, or screeding about not making something optional, not allowing certain relationships, having or not having incest/ntr or other bullshit and they are just pirates, not patrons. Patrons can bitch about those things; pirates should keep their pie-holes shut.
Your mileage may vary.
Seeth....SEEEETH!!!!
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- Sep 18, 2017
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I mean ... shouldn't you also follow your own example?
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I pretty much do.
Most of my bitching relates to other people being bitchy. I think there's only one or two VNs (out of about 100 followed) where I've expressed opinions about dumbfuckery by a Dev. I won't mention them here, but in one, the Dev keeps making retroactive changes causing replays to be required; in another, it was more about agreeing with the overwhelming majority of other interested parties that the Dev was dragging on and on and on and giving really stupid excuses for putting out updates 6-8 months later than initially promised. Although, I will confess to getting assed up over Devs changing the Ren'Py version in a well-developed VN and basically crashing saves that took twenty or so hours to get to the point they were - that's something that just pisses off everyone. But, as a rule, I don't give unsolicited opinions on what kind of relationships a Dev should put into his/her VN. If what they're doing annoys me enough, I'll just move on - this ain't an airport and there's no need to announce my departure.
Seeth, tiny-brained folk! SEEEEETH!!!!
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- Apr 25, 2020
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Yo, can you all just shut up? Don't bother discussing anything unless it's exactly what I'm in the mood (or not in the mood) for you guys to talk about, it's triggering me.
- Dec 24, 2019
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Well this has become trash.
Bad writing, terrible models now and worst of all, how the hell was this a whole chapter?
Spoiler: It wasn't. It was 2 minutes of nothing.
Bad writing, terrible models now and worst of all, how the hell was this a whole chapter?
Spoiler: It wasn't. It was 2 minutes of nothing.
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that makes no sense. you are telling pirates to shut up and deal with it while also saying only patrons have a right to criticize. my complaints are fair. the grammar is getting worst with each update, the character models constantly change for no reason, and story is almost non-existent because MC is such a fuck up, he can't decide what he wants. we're supposed to believe he might be a threat when we see him get subdued by words. at least Ghost is taking charge and doing things. this MC, at first, looked like a template for Lucifer but now he just looks like a typical annoying emo kid crying
- Sep 18, 2017
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