VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Falling Reloaded [Ch. 6] [WhiteBear]

[Content_Consumer]

Well this has become trash.
Bad writing, terrible models now and worst of all, how the hell was this a whole chapter?
Spoiler: It wasn't. It was 2 minutes of nothing.

 

[ThorinKing]

Yo, can you all just shut up? Don't bother discussing anything unless it's exactly what I'm in the mood (or not in the mood) for you guys to talk about, it's triggering me.

(If you aren't from the US, you might not get the reference.)

 

[drifter139]

Constructive comments from any are fair; even comments about the story drifting/not making sense, quality of renders or animations suffering, etc.

The things that make me roll my eyes and shake my head are when people start demanding changes, bitching about release times, bitching about the length of a release, or screeding about not making something optional, not allowing certain relationships, having or not having incest/ntr or other bullshit and they are just pirates, not patrons. Patrons can bitch about those things; pirates should keep their pie-holes shut.

Your mileage may vary.

that makes no sense. you are telling pirates to shut up and deal with it while also saying only patrons have a right to criticize. my complaints are fair. the grammar is getting worst with each update, the character models constantly change for no reason, and story is almost non-existent because MC is such a fuck up, he can't decide what he wants. we're supposed to believe he might be a threat when we see him get subdued by words. at least Ghost is taking charge and doing things. this MC, at first, looked like a template for Lucifer but now he just looks like a typical annoying emo kid crying

 

[BTLD]

that makes no sense. you are telling pirates to shut up and deal with it while also saying only patrons have a right to criticize. my complaints are fair. the grammar is getting worst with each update, the character models constantly change for no reason, and story is almost non-existent because MC is such a fuck up, he can't decide what he wants. we're supposed to believe he might be a threat when we see him get subdued by words. at least Ghost is taking charge and doing things. this MC, at first, looked like a template for Lucifer but now he just looks like a typical annoying emo kid crying

but are you paying?

 

[djmastamine]

I like this game... wish there was an updated mac verison

 

[TanyaC]

Genre:

There's a little bit of everything except sex

 

[rai1230]

hi
can someone please explain about the femdom stuff is it between the MC and the family?
thanks

 

[Raziel_8]

hi
can someone please explain about the femdom stuff is it between the MC and the family?
thanks

There really aren't any femdom scenes, there are also no sex scenes with the MC's ''family''...no wait, i think there is a single thighjob with Emma.

 

[rai1230]

There really aren't any femdom scenes, there are also no sex scenes with the MC's ''family''...no wait, i think there is a single thighjob with Emma.

ohh i see that kind of sad tbh
thanks for answering

 

[fridaynightatdaves]

What is the premise of the story in this game, you get left in hell and tortured for centuries to all of a sudden be able to overpower the king? then get forced to the human realm only for your mom and sisters to pop back into your life as if you just went out for weekend and completely forget that you have just escaped centuries of torture an expect you to just forget and welcome them into your arms like nothing happened? do we get to go back to hell or have a chance at revenge on your family?

 

[nitkonikic]

What is the premise of the story in this game, you get left in hell and tortured for centuries to all of a sudden be able to overpower the king? then get forced to the human realm only for your mom and sisters to pop back into your life as if you just went out for weekend and completely forget that you have just escaped centuries of torture an expect you to just forget and welcome them into your arms like nothing happened?

You are seriously misrepresenting the story of the game, it's ludicrous the way you're explaining it.

Family never asks you to forget hundreds of years of torture. They expect you to go to school and get over it. Duh!

 

[drifter139]

What is the premise of the story in this game, you get left in hell and tortured for centuries to all of a sudden be able to overpower the king? then get forced to the human realm only for your mom and sisters to pop back into your life as if you just went out for weekend and completely forget that you have just escaped centuries of torture an expect you to just forget and welcome them into your arms like nothing happened? do we get to go back to hell or have a chance at revenge on your family?

that's about the gist of it. what started off as potentially a good game has turned into a shit pile. honestly the dev cannot be consistent with anything in this game. originally I considered MC to be similar to Lucifer except Lucifer isn't a little bitch and would actually do whatever he wanted while laughing when weak angels tried to act tougher than they are

 

[Accurate_Gazelle]

damn this game is good

 

[christophe]

Android version please ☺☺

 

[Ramses]

It's not only writing which is getting worse (and full of inconsistencies) just look at the renders, the models were once a good point of the game...now, not so much.

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Completely agree the new models look bad. I can get past the MC not looking as sharp.
But the female models look horrible. Everything that was unique about them is gone.

 

[fridaynightatdaves]

You are seriously misrepresenting the story of the game, it's ludicrous the way you're explaining it.

Family never asks you to forget hundreds of years of torture. They expect you to go to school and get over it. Duh!

that's exactly what they are asking you to forget, they are literal gods and angels with enough of them having enough power to come and free you yet they don't then expect you to just forgive and move on instantly. its a fucking shit show it started of great but got dramatically worse and i only played for like 15 mins before i couldn't anymore after the mom said (she would do anything for you) and like the mc said or thought (but you couldn't save me from hell).

 

[GutsherrAkrobat]

current ver definitly needs some text check, a lot of times a female character is called "he" for no reason.

 

[Tyrranus]

You know what? Let me throw my hat into the ring.

welp I mentioned it, and he got mad about the link to this site, he said he knows he needs a writer and that he'll "deal with it later"

 

[Pif paf]

(accident in the family).

I hope all will be well for the persons involved, KoGa3 !
Be safe

 

[RonaldGrand6969]

welp I mentioned it, and he got mad about the link to this site, he said he knows he needs a writer and that he'll "deal with it later"

I could've been nicer, and I apologize for not doing so in the first place. But I had to say SOMETHING. This is the REMAKE of the original game, we shouldn't still have these problems when it is clearly a story first, sex later type of game anyway. With that in mind you NEED not only a solid storyline, but meaningful characters and the logical directions that come with that.

So far I hate damn near everyone on screen, MC included. Due to how incredibly vague the Dev is on the reason they react to certain things. One minute I'm given the option to (justifiably) be angry with the family, but the next moment the MC cuddling up to Mom, acting willy nilly with his Sister that literally threw him into Hell, chumy with the Angel that literally just warned him to fuck off from Earth, the list is endless in inconsistencies no rational person can look back on and not see.

And this wouldn't even really be an issue if there was a SOLID explanation for WHY these things happened the way they did, but we don't really get that, instead we get a half ass, plot hole filled explanation. Mainly the justification for why the Family didn't know the MC was being TORTURED in H E L L. Ya you dumb bitch, of course your ex husband (God) lied to you about the MC being safe, it's not exactly a vacation hot spot, did you think he was joking around when he on SEVERAL OCCASIONS says he was tortured? Why can Demons travel between Hell but Angels can't? They said they sent spies but nothing came out of it? God closed off the "channels" which is so vague I can't even wrap my head around what it actually fucking means; communication? traversal? Comon!

And it sucks, because I really want the game to succeed. Even the main goal (killing God?) seems so far out of reach now due to how inconsistent the MC is with his actions. One minute he HATES school the next (in this update) he's whining about how Azrael gets to go but he doesn't? Fuck off, it cannot, no it IS NOT this hard even for a non writer, and putting off the CRUCIAL work you need to do to make this specific game you've mapped out work is only hindering bringing in new Supporters to join like myself and others, or current Supporters who are probably questioning where their money is going into if this is the result?