I don't understand how a Dev can be so smart in making incredible Models and Renders yet so dumbed down to push out the garbage I just read, both in dialogue and in the MC's decision making.
And I'm not referring to the spelling errors, I mean the actual socially inept words being vomited from character to character. These are not individuals, this is the same person translated 4 different ways with little to no difference in amount of words or wording.
It cannot be that hard...you already have the hardest part done (Rendering, Coding, etc.), all you had to do was play the fucking game yourself and ask yourself, "Would I read this? Is this worth paying real money for? Is it even worth my time?" and the immediate answer should be NO! Absofuckinglutely NOT! An AI has more character than these characters.
All of which is a shame, because again, everything else is fine from a development standpoint. It's just that no sane individual can get behind the dialogue or plot direction, choices or bipolar behavior and say, "Yeah! That's worth $10 a month! 5 stars!"
Edit: You know what? Let me throw my hat into the ring. I have 2 examples of my writing here; those that are willing to read it, I want you to tell me if you'd prefer my very nonprofessional free writing, or a Developer that spends several months with payments that made the game you just yawned through. Be honest, I'm genuinely curious if it's just me that sees this issue.
Example A
Example B
Both were made in less than 3 hours on the spot.