Ren'Py Abandoned The Family Business: Parallel Universe | MiniGame - TechDemo [v1.11 FINAL] [Nemesia Productions]

[PPLayer]

Nemesia
After reading everthing here I must say I´m impressed ... very impressed ... 30+ hour without sleep just to get everthing up and clear ... even implementing changes because of some minor complaints ... Only a hand full of the dev´s (out of the thousands here) would show this passion and would do this at all.
Honestly, somehow I regret my reaction to your first uploaded game (1.0 - the one with the data collecting). Now I can see that you are one of the good ones ... seriously.
I hope you keep your passion up for your future projects ... BUT dont forget to sleep
Burn-out is an sadly common "sickness" here and I wish that you dont get caught with this one ... really wanna see your next projects ^^

Best wishes and success for you both

 

[raileg]

Anyone get the Kiera scenes?

I've made it - after seeing Keira at pool don't go to sleep, go to living room (watch tv), then check bathroom and your phone.

 

[Kyril87]

English is not my native language - I'm still learning

Jesus Christ! Your English is better that that of a whole lot of monolingual anglophones on this site. Don't deprecate yourself.

 

[Lynx Christler]

A dev that fixes every problem people throw at them within 12 hours of release is already amazing, let alone on a site where you can wait 2-3 months just for bug fixes. I'll try this later, but honestly now that the single (1) event with NTR has a skip button on it (Hopefully saying "SKIP - NTR") you don't need to bother with the NTR tag.

 

[Paapi]

Got android port (120 mb).
By the by, feels like this game is an alternative of "the family venture"

 

[ilikechong]

How redeem code?plz

 

[uhhhok]

Actually this is randomly selected events from the main game all happening in different times, mostly not connected to each other. We are planning a very ambitious game right after this which will start from the arrival of Alex and will go even further down the story with tons of different environments, side characters and many innovative game mechanics. With this release our intention was provide a spoiler-free technology demo to showcase what we are capable of. Such as render quality (which will vastly improve), custom interface design and mechanics like fully working in-game phone and dice system to add flavor to somewhat repetitive events. We weren't planning to make it this big to be honest but as the development process progressed further we wanted to add more and more features. There are still tons of thing we wished to include but there were simply not enough time.

TLDR: You will most definitely see more from Alex, Alice, Kiera, Nicole and Raven in the future for sure.

That is a very clever strategy to showoff your skills.

And I have seen sandbox tag for the game, I mean I am not against it when it used in a good way. But a few Devs add many variables and complicated stuff and some events will accessible only on particular time and day and also a lot of grind. Please make it less complex sandbox mechanics.
Cuz most people like me play porn games for fun and relaxation.

I am downloading the game and by previews I can say that your render skills are amazing. If possible make a walkthrough or hint system(inside the game).
Thanks a lot for your work DEV and Good luck with your project.

Edit: Also don't add NTR . People are talking abt Mom and BBC in a dream of MC. But I know this is a demo. So please don't add NTR in your Real game release.

 

[Danyboy]

Why does the dev need to? if people dont like it dont play it. Problem solved.

Because, you know, devs are usually trying to earn some money and attract as many players as posiible. An overwhelming majority dont like ntr, especially unskippable. Unless you want to make pure ntr game(which is fine), it should be avoidable.

 

[arms99]

Awesome start, absolutely love it . The story was interesting, the writing was good and the renders where excellent. The only thing, the animations could use some improvement. Loved the scene with the sis.

Great job dev

 

[Fzoner95]

I'd also like a working Text Speed slider.

 

[GODZILLA2000]

Code doesn't work.

 

[arms99]

Out of curiosity, I was checking the images to see if I missed something and I could see some lewd content with the aunt, but for the life of me I can't find it in the game. What am I missing?

 

[raileg]

Code doesn't work.

You should remove "CODE:" - it works fine.

 

[Stiven525i]

The lips (or maybe eyes (or combination of these things)) are too cartoonish, while everything is realistic, and this is the only thing I don't like, everyone else can be really proud=)

 

[raileg]

Out of curiosity, I was checking the images to see if I missed something and I could see some lewd content with the aunt, but for the life of me I can't find it in the game. What am I missing?

try to look here: post #167

 

[arms99]

try to look here: post #167

Thanks

 

[Deleted member 15555]

About the NTR stuff I am pretty shocked about the backlash thats been going on here actually. There is no ''actual'' NTR in the game and frankly we are not thinking about including any however there is one scene, a dream sequence, where MC imagines a scenario thanks to a previous conversation with a character. Its purely made to enhance narrative but I will most definitely add the NTR tag for this release after the F95 Staff clears us since its been a problem for some people. To be honest, we didn't even think about that sequence that much and didn't think that it would be enough to include NTR tag.

I don't think that enhances the narrative, in fact that is a way to piss off people and make people believe that the mc is a cuck, that will lose you more support than anything else. Unless you planned on adding ntr in the future I don't suggest you going that route if you intend for this game to be a non-ntr game because it will give (already kind of did) the wrong impression.
I usually ignore all games with ntr even those that have it avoidable and some people think this way too, so my 2 cents to you is to think what kind of content you want to make and go with it but make sure to be honest and warn people of what fetishes can they expect in the future.
Best of luck with the game.

Maybe will give this a go in the future when you know what kind of content you want to make.

 

[lesil]

why doesn't the visual novel label wait? at first the first thing he says is that it's a visual novel

 

[Androsduran]

Great work!
Looking forward to anything else you are Devs for.

 

[jaredhsieh65]

Alright .. it's v1.1 bugfix version...

1. Why can't turn off cell phone ?
2. Why can't go back raven's room ?
3. Why still has major issue need to fix ??