Deadmanvs1

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Hey Dev! Are there any actual safe download sites you can offer us here? GoFile (for me) leads only to a sign-in screen and while I'm jumping through reroute hoops, my Norton is working flat out blocking all kinds of nasty attacks from the other three.

In my experience, and purely from this side of the fence, whether you like them or hate them, paying peanuts a month to either Mega or Pixeldrain is the safest, most reliable download source around for regular downloaders to use and creators (who I'm sure, to be fair, probably have to pay more, I wouldn't know) to offer their downloads.
Your first problem is norton, it's known to block even safe stuff and it's a resource hog and spyware it's self.
But other than go file all the links worked fine for me and I'm not a fan of zippy.
 
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Kitchentable

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The good:

Crisp and clear renders. Character models look nice.
I like ambient background sounds and sound effects like
doors or someone slamming on the table and stuff liek that.

Fun stuff like the last scene where the main protagonist gets
knocked out by the ripped amazonian.

Oh and the sounds when hovering over the buttons in the main menu.
I like attention to little things like that.
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The bad:

Not sure what to put here maybe...It is bad that you can not make
an educated enough comment about the story since it's only an intro
and thus not much story revealed yet.
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The ugly:

The Engrish. It really needs a proofreading and editing.

Overall it's intriguing and I am looking forward to future updates.
 

Dripping

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Undecided for now. The writing is okayish, but has several spelling mistakes. The models are nice, but I'm personally not a fan of using photographs for backgrounds. They just clash with the less realistic character models, no matter how much effort is put into making a model look realistic, technology just isn't there yet.
Oh, and a port is usually filled with ships, not houseboats, and if the place is filled with houseboats today, then it probably has been filled with houseboats for the past few years as well. Those things are not really meant to be moved around.
 

Nitroxyde

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Just to save anyone else the trouble - every one of those Download sites are absolute shit except for (and just barely) Go file. Mixdrop is a hard lock before you continue download adobe hotmess, zippyshare is a here you are you can download at the speed of your parents old AOL account, and uploadhaven is a miasma of hotlink overlays that is a nightmare to deal with.
Guess it depends on your country/ISP ?

I personally have no problem with GoFile, Mixdrop or Zippyshare. No ads, no download speed restriction, they're pretty great.
 

Cartageno

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Guess it depends on your country/ISP ?

I personally have no problem with GoFile, Mixdrop or Zippyshare. No ads, no download speed restriction, they're pretty great.
Can only copy that. With Mixdrop of course you have to know the click-3 seconds-click issue. GoFile sometimes reverts to the main page, see solutions above. And all can have some slow speed at times but usually are okay-ish. Nothing compared to the late Nopy in its heyday, but free riders shouldn't complain too much.

One of these days developer will realize sandbox is a shit mechanic for porn games.
One of these days people will realize that different folks have different likings and not every game is made for everybody. If you so urgently dislike the sandbox style, do as others said they have done, ignore games having it, there's enough classic VNs out there.
 
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Nitroxyde

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Thank you SpyderArachnid and kauthor. That certainly worked and has no doubt solved this problem for me in the future too. Thank you both for you help. I truly appreciate it!
Even simpler is that you can just go back (even though you just used the link). That's how I do it personally, I guess the link makes you go on the download page and for some reason GoFile then redirect you to the main page (which is a "bug" that I only been seeing since recently) but yeah easy workaround is to either click the link twice, or just click once and "rewind" the tab (don't know how it's called in English o_O)
 

paust.alex

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It looks like NTR. This blonde girl meets some random guy in the street and then she sucks his dick. Isn't she a bit too easy-going? If someone else had been in the MC's shoes, would she have sucked him off too? Even if it was some cocky BBC. So far she seems like a BIG slut, be with her is too dangerous and disturbing, she could create a "It's not what you think, this guy just happened to be nice and suave enough!" situation at any moment.

Besides, it doesn't look like she was a virgin. So it's became an NTR the moment she decided not to wait for MC to be her first and only man in life, and she gave her one and only precious virginity to someone else, other then the MC, other then you. And you will live with this fact your whole life.
 
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GoFile is weird, that when you click the link sometimes it just redirects you to the main page. Just close the tab, and click the link again and it will take you to the actual download page.
well as always I hate Force relationships and force sex scenes but it was the beginning of the game

I was willing to ignore it for now but that sandbox part of the game is a nightmare I always get lost in the sandbox

and this one was really bad
 

MisterNephilim

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I can see the potential and I have my sights on 2 girls already (the black buff lady and the one that "takes care of you" while you are asleep).

Looking forward for more.
 
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Rannell

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GoFile is weird, that when you click the link sometimes it just redirects you to the main page. Just close the tab, and click the link again and it will take you to the actual download page.
Ever since I registered for an account I have zero problems with them. One click and I'm good. Of course yours is just three so either way.
 
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MrBenny

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Fuck I really hate puzzles...especially without the choice to skip them (It's a waste of time trying to find those damn mags that don't even look like magazines, and are not visible when you mouse over them). And then the dreaded sandbox feature, which most will also voice their hate.

And why have white text without noticeable dark outlines, or a choice to add an adjustable text box?

The story seemed fine so far, but not knowing the future kinks (NTR, sharing, cheating, etc.)… I'll pass and wait and see, as most will also comment on the same issues I mentioned. Good luck though. screenshot0001.png
 

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Fuck I really hate puzzles...especially without the choice to skip them (It's a waste of time trying to find those damn mags that don't even look like magazines, and are not visible when you mouse over them). And then the dreaded sandbox feature, which most will also voice their hate.

And why have white text without noticeable dark outlines, or a choice to add an adjustable text box?

The story seemed fine so far, but not knowing the future kinks (NTR, sharing, cheating, etc.)… I'll pass and wait and see, as most will also comment on the same issues I mentioned. Good luck though. View attachment 1963521
I was gonna make the same answer, a dark semi-transparent textbox would be really nice, white text on white background doesn't really help lisibility ^^'
 
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It looks like NTR. This blonde girl meets some random guy in the street and then she sucks his dick. Isn't she a bit too easy-going? If someone else had been in the MC's shoes, would she have sucked him off too? Even if it was some cocky BBC. So far she seems like a BIG slut, be with her is too dangerous and disturbing, she could create a "It's not what you think, this guy just happened to be nice and suave enough!" situation at any moment.

Besides, it doesn't look like she was a virgin. So it's became an NTR the moment she decided not to wait for MC to be her first and only man in life, and she gave her one and only precious virginity to someone else, other then the MC, other then you. And you will live with this fact your whole life.
well me personally I don't care if she's not a virgin

just as long as she does not have a boyfriend or girlfriend or she was in a relationship when we met but yeah

I am also not into girls that want to sleep or suck the dick of a guy they just met
 

SpyderArachnid

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well me personally I don't care if she's not a virgin

just as long as she does not have a boyfriend or girlfriend or she was in a relationship when we met but yeah

I am also not into girls that want to sleep or suck the dick of a guy they just met
Agreed. Not a fan of the whole "Hey stranger that I just met and know absolutely nothing about. Let's go bang in a dirty shady alley.". Just not something I'm into lol. Seriously screams slut material, and that's a no go.
 
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Agreed. Not a fan of the whole "Hey stranger that I just met and know absolutely nothing about. Let's go bang in a dirty shady alley.". Just not something I'm into lol. Seriously screams slut material, and that's a no go.
Exactly my brother, I was more into her sister that killed us

the Sister seems smart and cautious

And not the type of girl to fall for the first guy she met
 

Crowangel

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hmmm interesting looking females.. interesting title.. lets see how the writing and prospects are like...... clicks download
Ok... Well i'm a little underwhelmed.. after such a GOOD description of the story that was to unfold i was expecting much more but it looks more like your giving way to the story in favor of cheap thrills... Get back to the roots of what you promised the story to be about, work on the visuals a bit as there a little sub-par atm and if those things are met you might be able to pull of a great STORY...... I'll admit i'm one who loves the use of music in a title too but the song playing in the opening scenes was really the wrong tone choice.. Id love to see this STORY do well as it had my immediate interest from the description.. BUT it needs a LOT of work to get to a level where it is ready to tell such a epic tale in Quality visuals and storytelling

Also if your going to build a relationship with a LI for something like this.. dont just throw her to the wolves as a cheap slut right from the beginning.. you have a good story idea why the hell are your blowing your load right from the off.. build your story.. develop your characters, (Make us CARE about them ffs) build upon the chemistry of the couples interactions.. dont rush just to fulfill the need to fap

Also work on your render angles.. The coffee shop scene with Anya has he looking at the ceiling instead of shown from the mc's eyeline (so her eyes find his line of sight) instead of looking like she is bored out of her mind looking at the roof

Ask someone who understands the english language to do a proof read over your work and if possible to correct the dialogue to enable it to be read correctly.. there is A LOT of spelling mistakes, lines of dialogue that dont read right and could have been better structured in a different way to make sense to the reader

MC needs his posing fixing.. half the time he walks almost as if he is one step shy of being in a T pose... lower his arms or use some render poses via daz/renderosity or take a mirror while posing your characters and mirror how a non robotic human would stand, sit, walk, and the pose that actually goes with it.. Similar goes for the facial poses.. Nobody in reality goes that over board unless on purpose on facial expressions.. Tone it down to feel more in tone with the scene.. a simple playful wink shouldnt look like she just used all her facial energy and muscles just to do it
 
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