VN HTML Completed The Goblin's Pet [CYOA v1.0] [Aphrodite]

[fzonedout]

I'm about to crack into The Goblin's Pet 1.1, which is essentially going to be an enhancement of existing content, with new branches, lore and stuff. Also the writing at the beginning is a bit rough. I'm getting feedback from subscribers on endings / branches etc they'd like to see, and will use that as a guide for going through the game. It's not going to turn the linear story into a huge massive branching web, but I do want to add like 10 more bad ends ideally, and some realistic choices at key points, as well as generally improving the writing.

Will you also be adding more images to depict certain scenes?

A couple of examples:

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[Neon777]

I'm about to crack into The Goblin's Pet 1.1, which is essentially going to be an enhancement of existing content, with new branches, lore and stuff. Also the writing at the beginning is a bit rough. I'm getting feedback from subscribers on endings / branches etc they'd like to see, and will use that as a guide for going through the game. It's not going to turn the linear story into a huge massive branching web, but I do want to add like 10 more bad ends ideally, and some realistic choices at key points, as well as generally improving the writing.

will you go into sequel content anytime soon? like chapter 21 or later?

 

[l1lym]

will you go into sequel content anytime soon? like chapter 21 or later?

Yes, there will be an Easter Egg with the beginning of the next book baked in! I was thinking it would be more fun to put it into the game rather than just post it online somewhere

 

[Great730]

Yes, there will be an Easter Egg with the beginning of the next book baked in! I was thinking it would be more fun to put it into the game rather than just post it online somewhere

Easter begins on April 20th. The answer to the question of whether an update is coming soon is yes, the next update will be in the Easter egg. Tell me honestly, am I the only one who sees the subtext and hints here?

 

[l1lym]

Easter begins on April 20th. The answer to the question of whether an update is coming soon is yes, the next update will be in the Easter egg. Tell me honestly, am I the only one who sees the subtext and hints here?

I'm sorry, I wish I was smart enough to drop hints that good! I'm still in the pre-work phase for this update

 

[Great730]

I'm sorry, I wish I was smart enough to drop hints that good! I'm still in the pre-work phase for this update

Don't worry, you've already raised our spirits and we'll be looking forward to your work in this thread

 

[Kingofgibkun]

I hope u make more elara and snib content. or near future she falls for snib again making elise cuckold.

 

[Kingofgibkun]

 

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[l1lym]

LOL OMG, now these pics are living rent free in my head; what have you done???

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[Kingofgibkun]

through chatgpt

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

Well this was somewhat fun read, tho i almost got buried under all the text walls.
Got tentacle wife and 'goblin slayers' ending lol, not bad!

Oh and the sound effects you yoinked from Sacred Gold? That was a great use of them aye.
The goblins in Sacred Gold are definitely hard to forget.

 

[remplazo]

Well this was somewhat fun read, tho i almost got buried under all the text walls.
Got tentacle wife and 'goblin slayers' ending lol, not bad!

Oh and the sound effects you yoinked from Sacred Gold? That was a great use of them aye.
The goblins in Sacred Gold are definitely hard to forget.

How do you get the tentacle wife ending?

 

[Great730]

LOL OMG, now these pics are living rent free in my head; what have you done???

by the way I wanted to ask since you are going to make additional content I wanted to ask if a gallery or something similar has appeared in the game since there are a lot of branches and choices ?

 

[l1lym]

by the way I wanted to ask since you are going to make additional content I wanted to ask if a gallery or something similar has appeared in the game since there are a lot of branches and choices ?

Not really a gallery as such yet. Might try to figure out how to make one when I do the remaster DLC! I think I’ll charge twice the price of the original

 

[somguy]

I'm about to crack into The Goblin's Pet 1.1, which is essentially going to be an enhancement of existing content, with new branches, lore and stuff. Also the writing at the beginning is a bit rough. I'm getting feedback from subscribers on endings / branches etc they'd like to see, and will use that as a guide for going through the game. It's not going to turn the linear story into a huge massive branching web, but I do want to add like 10 more bad ends ideally, and some realistic choices at key points, as well as generally improving the writing.

Nice, can't wait!
One bad end idea, if you don't already have it in mind.

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