VN HTML Abandoned The Guinea Pig [v0.30a] [theGP]

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phupdup

phupdup

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0.10a and the 0.10c html only hotfix have been over on
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Changelog from there:

Version 0.10c


- Fixed a bug where the blocked option of some pink hair styles showed the picture of the blue hairstyle instead
- Fixed a occasional bug where the player got stuck in a infinite loop after getting breasts


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Version - 0.10b


- Fixed a bug where you couldn't keep dating Kate after a certain point if you used the "Disable Hair" cheat
- Fixed minor typos


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Version - 0.10a


- Added Jobs search on the Jobber app in the cellphone
- Added scene were Kate gives the MC a dildo
- Removed job search on downtown


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Version - 0.10: Alpha Release


Warning: Save files from older versions wil not work in this version.


- Added a right sidebar
- Added cellphone functionalities to the side bar
- Added three shoes to Foot Town
- Added one outfit to New World
- Added one pair of socks to New World
- Added Journal to the cellphone
- Added Tips session to the cellphone
- Added Camera session to the cellphone (just to take selfies)
- Added a mobile app for Maartplaz on the cellphone
- Added emergency exit button to the cellphone
- Added changelog button so you can see the Changelog ingame
- Added a "save updater" to update your saves from one version to another (it will be workable at 0.11)
- Added one more chapter for Kate's history
- Added one more chapter for Lilly's history
- Added first chapter of restaurant side history
- Added cheats session:


  • Added cheat for getting rich
  • Added cheat for getting poor
  • Added cheat for removing body hair permanently
  • Added cheat for disabling hunger
  • Added cheat for disabling hygiene
  • Added cheat for disabling arousal

- Added alternative night images for Downtown, Beach and Park
- Returned "Current Version" and "Days Passed" to the left sidebar
- Now you must buy a cellphone before starting de history
- Changed placement of some stats to the right sidebar
- Changed Maartplaz icon
- Optimized some gifs
- Fixed undefined variables during the game's intro
- Fixed Ladiez last outfit for flat body
- Fixed bras appearing over swimsuits and nightwear
- Fixed bug where maid outfit wasn't being removed in some cases
- Fixed other diverse bugs
- Fixed some typos
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phupdup

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My first comment about 0.10 is that the restaurant job has an owner change where mc has to wear a female cosplay outfit. At this point in the playthrough I'm only 10 days in. MC avatar is still in masculine clothing without even panties and has the five oclock shadow on the face. They've only had the first hypnosis session where mc wakes up throwing up into the toilet. They have 0 submission and femininity on their stats.

This part of the arc should involve a lot of conflict, and the mc should look very much like a male and not a female. Yet mc slides right into the concept of pretending to be a girl, and the new boss doesn't even think twice about thinking they are one.

Methinks this part of the arc is going to need a shitload of work in order to become convincing.

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We are basically in "The Good Son" scenario where the mc doesn't have a gun to their fathers head. Dev needs to add some sort of compulsion to force this. The new boss needs to quickly spot that mc is a guy and needs some sort of threat of work action or just "sports challenge" hanging over their head in order to work with feminizing the mc much the way the boss in The Good Son does it.
 
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The meeting of Lilly is bugged in 0.10c. The playthrough is on day 32 with journal suggesting to hold off on therapy and dates with Kate and just working "until something happens". That's been going on for probably more than a week, so I jumped into the javascript console to inspect the variables and threw the html into Emacs. Here's the only place I found that would enable the link to meet Lilly:

Code: 
    <<if $restaurantXP eq 8 and $metLilly eq 0>>
        [[Go home ->MeetLilly][$inHistory = false]]
This will never fire because I already had $restaurantXP up at 70. In my previous playthrough in 0.9 or earlier, mc had already met Lilly before they could even afford a phone and/or laptop sometime around week 2. So the meeting of Lilly probably triggered too early in that version, and I never managed to do the followup with her there because the journal was bugged about emailing her versus using the phone or whatever. This version, I'm just going to guess that the conversion of the restaurant to a cosplay cafe somehow bumped the XP counter past 8 without ever triggering the conditional. The question now becomes does this test get changed from "eq 8" to "gte 8" or something closer to "gte 60" or "gte 70" to flow the story arcs with therapy and Kate properly with Lilly?
 
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Raistln

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I like the potential that this game has, but it is so linear with no real choices other than which set of clothing you buy and wear.
Everything is forced and if you don't do exactly what it wants, then you are just stuck in an endless loop of goofing off.
The therapy sessions force you into it too quick, anyone would have bolted after the first hypno, moved, and never returned.
The forced "dates" which are nothing more than femdom sessions would have ended on the first one.
1 job available, although it has several in the code, guessing just not setup yet.
Working out, meditating, sunbathing, jogging, eating a snack, and perfume are there yet doing them does nothing except to your imagination.
You can buy another chastity cage and then remove it. You can then masturbate normally, yet in every scene with the 2 girls it's still on.
Met Lily a few days in, and even though I had a phone and laptop, the option to contact her never appeared until day 43, and yes I looked ever single evening as I've went through 3 entire playthroughs (and a few short ones).
Earrings can be bought, but trying to wear them results in an error because there is no changing video for them.

It would make more sense if it actually gave you choices and consequences to going along with them or defying them and being punished than to say "Ok destroy my life and use me how you want because I have no free will".
I know this is fairly early on in development stage so I hope the dev will implement some changes that make it more interesting instead of just click what I want you to do when I want you to do it, because in it's present state it can't even be considered a CYOA story.
 
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Johny217

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Oct 17, 2021
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Best game in terms of story telling. I mean I'm not into that whole sissy crap play but the story was interesting. Wish you could decide as what to become in terms of what kind of slave to become.
 
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Michael1957

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I got version 10c from tfgames site. And I locked myself out of visiting Kate. My current dates at day 105
Feminity: 16
Submisiveness: 9
Perversion: 4
Fitness: 11
Guitar Skill: 47
I tried the wardrobe replacing panties with shorts and removing buttplug.
Then I received the line: you could visit Kate on days xyz if you would wear panties....
Changing to panties and the message or link was not shown.

In reference to some post before this I'll assume that there is another code asking with "eq" where "gte" would be better.
BTW Lily is off too. I did NOT get a dildo.

I'm not going to create accounts everywhere. Thus I hope this "error" message can get passed on.
I try the version 11 from tfgames now.

PS While trying version 11 the reported error is solved / okay. Current dates at day 80
Feminity: 40
Submisiveness: 43
Perversion: 21
Fitness: 25
Guitar Skill: 26
The "continue working and workout, maybe something will happen" was solved as well. Ashley visited me.
 
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f96zonetrooper

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Changelog :

Version 0.11

- Added one new outfit for Ladiez
- Added one new nightwear for Ladiez
- Added one new nightwear for New World
- Added arousal decrease for watching TV and playing videogames
- Added new colors for the Villainess hairstyle
- Added new colors for the Stilysh hairstyle
- Added a few backend logging functionalities
- Added a new chapter of Kates history
- Fully remade the tattoo system of the game
- Updated the disclaimer message on the stores pages
- Decreased the size of hairstyles images on the shopping mall
- Decreased the number of days per week that you can go visit Kate
- Blocked the stores items if you haven't bought a cellphone
- Removed object transformation from the game tags
- Fixed bug where you can get promoted before talking to Lilly, therefore, locking the event
- Fixed bug where if you go to work while aroused, the event for meeting Lilly was not triggered
- Fixed some conditional errors in the first therapy sessions
- Fixed row breaking issue between "Watch TV" and "Play Pollystation 5"
- Fixed genitals appearing through underwear
- Fixed some typos
 
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Michael1957

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error message in version 11 "the earring animation does not exist" when changing the earrings via the wardrobe.

Finished the version 11 according to a pop-up message on day 95 with the stats:
Feminity: 45
Submisiveness: 46
Perversion: 25
Fitness: 25
Guitar Skill: 27

Nice game. The error I encountered in this version was not game-breaking, but I had to use a few times the emergency exit. I don't remember the circumstances, or else I would explain. I think it had to do with the button to buy resources (the return send you to the stats page when you started there and the stats page return send you to the special shopping - creating a merry-go-round).

Cannot wait to get the next "extension".
 
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88Michele88

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Forced chastity cage. Just sad :cry: :cry: In each game like chastity cage is force no matter the choice the player make he will get chastity in a way or another. He didin't agreed to be a slave without free will, didn't he? It clear like sky that The MC had no choise here no free will to say no to chastity. andif he say no they force him to put it anyway.

By the way ther no dominant state for mc. even with dome action. Oh wait it all forced. :cry:
 
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Jarspe

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started fresh new game in 0.11 and the whole screen is filled with red error messages, in the second or third therapy session with ashley, where she talks about getting some pills for MC's discomfort during hypnosis.
 
HammerU89

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Not sure what to do at start other than the typical generic household areas. Images are a mess. Washing dishes and it's a chick when I'm more obvious a dude at the start? Seen this several other times and is just being lazy on the devs part.
 
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f96zonetrooper

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This game has a long way to go :

Technically it looks ok, although the GUI could be improved, e.g.
- allow to go to work from bedroom,
- hide the Define Morning Routine somewhere (you just do it once, no need to waste space for it)
- add a qol function to later automatically refill all the stuff needed for routine
- display all relevant stats, don't hide them
- allow to directly switch between rooms in the apartment without having to go through living room
- ...

I keep mc at zero arousal. Still mc has weird erotic dreams almost every night right from start.

Some of the images are ok ... however often there are too many images/gifs per page, eg several sissy hypno videos on the same page ...

Overall the game feels like a bad written kinetic novel (even written in the wrong tense) combined with an almost empty sandbox. (Sandbox decisions are present tense, so writing all the story events in past tense breaks the tense.) All story events (Ashley, Kate, Lily, ...) seem to appear in a fixed linear order, they include no choices , the player can only delay events and finally accept their outcome. There are no decisions, no alternative options, only one path to go storywise, so it's a kinetic novel. Sandbox decisions in game are negligible like to buy more coffee today or tomorrow.

The psychological sessions without player choice feel very strange and boring. The mc obviously has huge psychological problems which the player not necessarily shares ... this makes it difficult to somehow identify with mc ... There is no way to affect the dialogs, even porn fetishes are prescribed and not part of player decisions.
Some events like meeting Lily are automatic, no player choice if you want to join / romance her or not. You later have to continue the relationship to not break the chain of events and stall the game.
The usage of hypnosis makes it easy to force mc into any fetish the dev wants to include without explanation ... however hypnosis / mind control / blackmail and no choices is a weak concept and only necessary if the dev fails to persuade the player with his writing to make certain choices on his own. There are games where the player has more options and still chooses certain fetishes and disadvantages because either the player is curious or all options are balanced with advantages and disadvantages.

In current state of writing I would suggest to play the other tf games on tfgamessite first before spending time with this one ...
 
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