VN Ren'Py The Harem Garage [v0.18] [CyberTurul]

[rKnight]

There's one thing you're damn good at: driving cars.
All you need is a chance to make a name for yourself, to be a winner for the first time in your life.

THX for sharing...

 

[waldo404]

hey, pretty good so far, thanks CyberTurul !

notes:
- render 349/1189 / line 1506 of released version of script.rpy (just bought the house, moving in) : "I'm so proud of you MC." litteral MC to be replaced by [povname].
- render 588/1189 / line 2473 of script.rpy, the text is mislabelled Tommy instead of vicky (t->v).

not so much notes as opinions:
- little dialogue to be reviewed I think (very little as there are good bones on that AVN, but for example when gabi comes to visit MC 1st night in new home, MC says no then without transition, "not in public" which is not quite the same no. it would make more sense to have no, hug, then ok but not in public for example.). For the small english mistakes and typos, why not put the text in an online spreadsheet with your identifiers (line number of script.rpy for example, you could output it on *nix systems with a simple cat -n script.rpy | sed -n 's/^ *\([0-9]*\)[^a-z]*\([a-z][a-z]*\) \"\(.*\)\".*$/\1;\2;\3/ip' > textWithLinenumbers.csv though I'm sure python has something similar easily available) and post the link with the OP so we can contribute corrections?
- MC's full-orange dick looks like a playmobil's. it would look better/less distracting if the head was more purplish no?
- textbox opacity (though mods for that are easy to find/do) + text outline thickness in settings pretty please?
- careful with the textboxes filled to the brim. Some users use accessibility settings (shift+A) to increase the text size, and in such a case it overflows... (I do that when playing on the projector )

 

[dza777]

cars and harem lets gooo

 

[walkerjonny]

No 'vaginal sex' tag?

 

[MrBenny]

Adjustment Mod

Hi...here's a small compilation of mods that adjust how this decent title looks and plays. These are the following adjustments included with my compilation...

• Changed out the default textbox, to a custom bottom dark shading version (it compliments the dialog text, without affecting the background images).
• Changed the default black game_menu image, with a dark textured image.
• Included the Universal Choice Descriptor mod (this utility mod can display on screen some hidden content data behind story choices...if any are added in future updates.) < NOTE: This utility mod is NOT a walk through mod, but it can sort of work like one if and when choices are added to this project. >
• Included the Universal 0x52_URM tool, (which can be used to edit or display some info behind story choices, consisting of money, affection, and or love points, as well display requirement checks as they happen through out the story if added later on. Note: Using the ALT m keys together will bring up the tool's search function.)
• Included a Quick Menu mod that can be used to hide's or display's the quick menu by pressing your Q key. (This mod cleans up the dialog area of the screen.)
• Included a textbox opacity and font slider mod, (which is used to adjust the shading intensity of the dialog textbox, and increase or decrease the dialog font size.)
• Included a custom dialog text outline mod that places a dark shadow outline around the dialog font (makes it easier to see the characters name and dialog text).

Install:
Just extract and merge the mod's game folder with this titles game folder (over write if prompted). Then run your game.exe, and enjoy this title's minor UI changes and added utility mod features.

Note: This mod compilation shouldn't require regular updates, (provided no major coding changes are done to the original script of this title)…so this mod compilation should continue to work for future game releases.

Regards


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[osanaiko]

.... problem is .... most renpy defs only think, they had a story to tell ... at least this one is the sports car category - sometimes there's even sex scenes and most likely the girls look hot in such category. But the best is: nobody thinks street racing and night doesn't fit together .... while yesterday we had 2 or god only knows how many vampire renpys. Somehow vampire defs think day and vampires fit together lol... The one I tried (no vampire tags, but hot girls previews) ... "... vampires are real ... for decades these live among us .... " 1GB, no sex, one blowjob by the servant with the ugly hair ... well I realize competion is
....

Hey man I was feeling sorry for you, seeing how you are suffering from losing all of your line breaks.

So here's a few you can use next time you make a post, okay? Peace out...

 

[Nimbus Commando]

Looks like a fun ride, let's go.

 

[Gojii]

MC is obviously a drag racer since its a kinetic novel.

 

[Aaron Dragneel]

Animations?

 

[CinderFall201]

liking it so far, big fan of racing in general. Keep up the good work!!

 

[millyvanilly84]

Shouldn't this have an incest tag because.... Family

 

[Rockero_69]

İs there any negative genres gonna be added in the future ? ( exhibiionism , swinging , NTR/NTS )

If you add it, it cannot be avoided in any way, in fact, any fetish cannot be avoided, since it is a Kinetic Novel, that is, avoiding the game directly, unless the DEV changes that.

 

[CinderFall201]

If you add it, it cannot be avoided in any way, in fact, any fetish cannot be avoided, since it is a Kinetic Novel, that is, avoiding the game directly, unless the DEV changes that.

Well I'm excited to see what will happen next

PS nice profile pic btw

 

[Bingoogus]

I feel like an incest patch would be easy to make for this, have Gabi be his half sister, different dads, that'd explain why only the MC gets an inheritance and not Gabi... there's no incest tag but the MC says he's lived with Gabi his whole life, so i wonder if she's meant to be his sister but the dev decided to Patreon protect the game... but if he meant for her to be his sister then why no inheritance for her... unless his dad abandoned his mom not long after she fell pregnant... then it could all fit... i dunno, maybe there's more on the subject later on in the game, only up to him moving into his own place.

 

[Rockero_69]

PS nice profile pic btw

If I took it out of the game Inanna Revenge.
Same, your profile picture (I love redheads and even more if it's Ripples' redheaded mommy)

 

[AlBetGam]

there's one thing you're damn good at: driving cars