I like the game. I like it's mechanics in general, fighting mechanics is cool too, though it's hard to win against more skilled NPCs, like for example at the start, or in the gym.
Though, the 1st fight is a bit of a waste, if it's a bug, then ok.
It's a coincidence, but I played the game at night with headphones, and DID I have a fucking goosebumps during some scenes, especially when the nightmare with Jess happened, damn, that was creepy... and amazing, I can tell ya, it was the 1st time i felt like this while playing a VN.
I really hope there will be more scenes like this. It could have been even better with a proper music (more dread), cause music helps to create an atmosphere a lot.
I am surprised the game doesn't have horror tag, it definitely deserves it much more than some other games that already have it.
The LIs are ok in my opinion, there are girls for every taste - shy one, slutty one, milf, ex etc.
Hard to judge their personalities cause there is little content so far. The models are very beautiful though.
The story (the premise) is very cool, I really want to know what happens next in the mean plot. The writing though could be polished, too bald if you ask me.
UI is good as well, pretty simple and intuitive.
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Now, some moments that were a bit off or just poor (only my perspective of course, maybe it will help you in some way):
1) The 1st fight, it took me some time to win))), it should be rewarded in the end not with the same scene), we discussed it already.
2) When at the start MC, Luna, Doc and Lanxin were discussing the disease, Doc said smth that it's serious and Luna with a smile on her face said smth like "exactly like news said", I assume you didn't want to waste time on one more render, but smiling Luna looked really weird at that serious moment.
3) The 1st event with Lanxin (pics guessing), it happened that I played this event almost in the end (after I went shopping with her and met her at the Doc etc), to this moment I knew already what's her disease, but she says "Hello Alex, I have special condition that prevents me from speaking".
Yeah, well, it looked a bit off, like it's the 1st time we meet. I get it - it's a sandbox, but maybe it would be a good idea to block some events until previous one are played (make it - so I can't go shopping with Lanxin until I finished her 1st event at home etc), or just write neutral text.
I mean you already did well with Jane, we can't get on the yacht until we massage her at home. The same should be with all other LIs, - consistency.
Such messy/chaotic moments break immersion immediately personally for me.
4) Titty fuck from Luna was just out of nowhere, maybe I am just a picky prick who likes solid logical story, but damn, that was very unexpected. Oh, and no one mentions it in a game later (even in Codex it is not mentioned), unlike after the night with Jess.
5) The last but not least, writing, I am not a native as you can judge from my text, but reading some dialogues did hurt even me, a lot.
I made some notes while playing the game, maybe it will be useful for you (I'll send it in DM).
