VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Home [v0.9] [Yihman1]

[Narzes]

Not sure if someone mentioned it but it would be better for you to change the version to 0.1 so people don missunderstand things if this is the initial release.

 

[Exu]

I love petite girls and I was going to disregard that potato-face of yours but girl, transphobia is such a turn off for me... Also, that racist play came out of nowhere. No, I'm not buying there's a mutual thing between you and your best friend. Cause ya know, best friends usually have proper names, not just 'maid'. Hell, even a maid working for a long time for your family should be adressed by her name. And you think your moms are weird? That's it, I'm quitting my job as your imaginary friend. Hope you do well though, you're young. Take care.

No, srsly, good luck with your game, dev. This one looks interesting even if it's not my thing.

 

[yihman1]

I love petite girls and I was going to disregard that potato-face of yours but girl, transphobia is such a turn off for me... Also, that racist play came out of nowhere. No, I'm not buying there's a mutual thing between you and your best friend. Cause ya know, best friends usually have proper names, not just 'maid'. Hell, even a maid working for a long time for your family should be adressed by her name. And you think your moms are weird? That's it, I'm quitting my job as your imaginary friend. Hope you do well though, you're young. Take care.

No, srsly, good luck with your game, dev. This one looks interesting even if it's not my thing.

Any sort of writing on any sensitive controversial issue will ultimately bring critics. I welcome them.

1) Lura is not a neurotypical girl. She thinks differently than most people do. Have you seen Lura address any other individual in the story by any given name? Not a single one of the other 3 current characters, not even the Imaginary friend. People are named based on their utility to her. So, for instance, if she met a lifeguard they would be named lifeguard to her. If she went to eat and met a waiter it would be waiter. That's how she names people. If she met a puppy girl she would call her pup. If she goes to the doctor it would be doctor, if she goes to school it would be teacher or classmate. She is a person without many friends. Lura assigns people as a "role" not a "name". That's just how her brain works. In future interactions, other characters will address one another by name. Lura won't do that though.

2) Have you considered the possibility that the way the maid acts in her initial interaction with Lura is an inside joke between friends? Let me lob this possible history of the two at you like a softball. Imagine for a minute that the maid (Whose name readers will learn later is Melinda) is a good person. However, she does have some financial difficulties. Can't find a job very down on her luck. She then applies for the job of Maid with Lura's family. Her parents... Both left-wing progressives leap at the chance to hire an unrepresented minority as their laborer in the home to boost their diversity for virtue-signaling points to show off to their friends. She does not like them because they treat her with kid gloves and are super sensitive and overbearing and it kinda creeps her out how "nice" they are to her. Have you EVER met someone that likes their boss? Most people don't I'm afraid... Lura is a rebellious girl. The 1960s had a generation of left-wing children that rebelled against their right-wing parents. Lura is a right-wing girl rebelling against her left-wing parents. Lura initially had some prejudices against Melinda the Maid. She acted in a racist fashion against Melinda the Maid treating her like some sort of hood rat. Melinda played along with this a little bit, but due to the rule of "My enemies enemy is my friend", and Melinda really hating how the girl's parents pander to her... A friendship was eventually formed. Maybe Lura had a little bit of personal growth their as well and she became less prejudice on terms of "race", although she retains her prejudice on terms of "gender". And perhaps the maid Melinda likes to bust her friends balls about it.

3) As for your dislike of transphobia. That is perfectly understandable, and reasonable, and respectable. However, ignoring an issue does not make it disappear, and it does fester. Personally, I am against slavery. Does that mean I would avoid a movie like Django Unchained, Roots, Gone with the wind? Not really a big fan of a bunch of people dying either, but Titanic is a good movie... Not an advocate for kidnapping, but Taken was a good movie... Food for thought, can't make everyone happy.

 

[Kubrows]

ok... I used to be on Second Life awhile back and these screenshots highly look like screencaps from second life haha

 

[yihman1]

ok... I used to be on Second Life awhile back and these screenshots highly look like screencaps from second life haha

Oh they are... It will be made clear in the next update which I'm making now

 

[yihman1]

Update coming in a few minutes. Just gotta upload it.

 

[yihman1]

You must be registered to see the links

Version 0.2 right here.

 

[DrDougDoesDOS]

I got an idea. I want to see if people think this is a good way of doing things or a bad way of doing things.

A lot of games out there are made in a way such as follows:

You play through a game. You come to a choice. You now have Path A and Path B.
Path A continues & So does Path B.
Path A branches yet again and now we have a 3rd path which we will call C.
Path B branches out too and we will call that branch D.

Paths = Width of the Game. More paths = more width.

With greater width, you will inevitably have a shorter length.

If I work on A B C and D over X time Path A gets less far than just Path A by itself. If I gave equal time to each Path it would get about 25% as far assuming there are only 4 paths.

Lets say a game is targeted for 10 chapters long. Does it not make more sense to make to make it like this:

A1 A2 A3 A4 A5 A6 A7 A8 A9 A10, B1 B2 B3 B4 B5 B6 B7 B8 B9 B10, C1 C2 C3 C4 C5 C6 C7 C8 C9 C10, D1 D2 D3 D4 D5 D6 D7 D8 D9 D10. All Paths completed one at a time one after the other... The game completely completed at 4 points. With different branching chains.

A lot of creators almost all I see make it like this...

A1 B1 C1 D1... A2 B2 C2 D2... A3 B3 C3 D3... ect ect ect... and so on building the branches and not the trunk...

So imagine a sort of static novel that you go back and create branches off at certain points to continue forward on eventually getting more choices.

Is that a better sort of production method you guys think?

Congrats Dude I think you just described how the Multi-Verse works Some guys at Harvard spent months trying to write that into a Thesis and you bombed it in 5 mins

Seriously though this is precisely how a Choice game should work. I'm writing my own game as you know and my head is full of Characters and Choices and Routes that need to be organised into a structure to create all events in DAZ or else my head will melt into a steaming pile of goo. Hats off too other Dev's who've kept their Sanity making a Game with Multi-choice

 

[Dhylec]

I see that you are open to quite a few fetishes, ok gonna give my recommendation:

-First we need to get a concept, who is the MC? what is his situation? challenges? will give a simple example: "In this game you are a 3rd year of economics studying in Axholf University, you were currently living alone but now that your little sister has 18 she is going to your university too and because of money issues she will be living together with the MC, manage your relationship with your sister, university friends and fight off bad situations, get a girlfriend and be aware that no ones tries to get her away from you, what will you do? achieve a difficult harem, get into an incestuous situation, or perhaps you will fall and lose what you love?"

-Second the main choice you should have is what fetishes do you want to add?, some fetishes can give place to interesting combinations, for example take NTR, it isn't the same to be done by a male, female or shemale just to say a few examples.

I would personally find interesting NTR done by female, shemale or futa. The black male one is a bit overused in my opinnion.

But well the fetishes will determine how the game develops. Basically choose the ones you like the most. I'm one of those that love to always have the opposites, basically if femdom I like maledom too, if netorare I like netori...

Following the example "femdom, maledom, lesbian, male protagonist, NTR (netori and netorare), foot fetish, BDSM, anal, trap, pregnancy, sissification, oral, blackmail, futanaris" would be the tags

-Third you start to think about how to implement it on the game: Let's talk about femdom for example, you imagine the situations that you like and think about how to accomplish it. Let's say that you decide to add two stats that influence the femdom, like respect and dominance. It would help you to make two types quite easily, high respect and high dominance means a dominant relationship, low respect and high dominance means a slave/servant relationship.

You want something else? then for example you could add fetishes that a girl may unlock, like BDSM, sissyfication... to make that part more complex.

Then you think about what increases or decreases those stats. Will they be affected by random chance? player's choices? interactions? events?.

This is truly extensive and requires a lot of writing and thinking before working on the game, following what I said before will give you a tiny part of the document you should design:

Stats:

-Respect: You will start the game as respected, the different respect levels are:
*No respect: 0 to 20
*Little respect: 21 to 40
*Respected: 41 to 60
*Very respected: 61 to 80
*Idolized: 81 to 100

Depending on how respected you are, your sister will treat you better or worse and it will affect that she is more obedient or won’t care about you.
For example if your sister has no respect from you she may steal money, insult you, taunt you with the fetishes she discovered you had or making you remember embarrassing or bad situations that happened in the past.
Even more she won’t obey you or hear your opinion about her issues, she may take a boyfriend or girlfriend home to have sex, get interested in bad things…

On the other hand, being idolized will make her ask you about many situations and obey what you say, it will give the player quite a lot of control over how she acts.

-Dominant/submissive: This will have an effect mainly on sexual interactions, if the sister is dominant she will tend to tease you, be more aggressive on sex or perhaps even force you to have sex (if she has an incest fetish).

Submissive on the other hand will tend to get you to show your “hidden wolf”, basically she may make a mistake to be reprimanded, taunt with your fetishes so that you are sexually aggressive or even service you to get you in the mood.

-Fetishes: The sister will develop fetishes gradually during the game, those are divided on first, second and third levels. Basically certain combinations of fetishes or stats will generate new fetishes.



1º level fetishes:
ºNeutral ones:

• Anal
• Oral (giving or receiving)
• Cum addict
• Incest
• Futa lover
• Masturbation
• Voyeurism
• Exhibitionism
• Porn addict

ºDominant ones:

• Foot domination
• Light Sadism
• Strap-on
• Non-consent
• Orgasm denier
• Sissy lover

ºSubmissive ones:

• Light masochist
• Bondage
• Servicing
• Gangbang lover
• Being forced/raped

2º level fetishes:

• Masturbation + Exhibitionism + medium sluttery = Public masturbation
• Anal + cum addict = Anal slut
• Oral + cum addict = Oral slut
• No to little respect + Foot domination + Incest + A little dominant = Foot master
• Light sadism + strap-on + non-consent + orgasm denier = Dominatrix
• Light masochist + bondage + servicing + being forced = Slave

3º level fetishes:

• Public masturbation + anal slut + oral slut + high sluttery = Public slut
• Foot master + High domination = Foot queen
• Dominatrix + sissy lover: Sissy dominatrix
• Slave + anal slut + oral slut + high respect + high submissiveness = Ultimate slave

Effects:

1º level fetishes just add a certain inclination to the character, basically likes and dislikes.

2º level fetishes start to heavily influence the character, for example if she becomes a foot master you won’t be able to get enough respect to be over little respect. You will have to pay a high cost so that she forgets her fetish to be able to solve the situation.

Even more level 2 fetishes have positive and negative effects:

• Public masturbation:
• The sister will walk in the nude and even openly masturbate in the house
• It will increase her sluttery stat
• She may masturbate outside the house and may be caught by other characters in the game (increasing their desire for her)
• Anal slut:
• She will prefer anal sex over vaginal sex
• She will always prefer that people cum inside her ass rather than outside
• If other characters have sex with her in the ass it will increase more her love for them
• Oral slut:
• She will prefer oral sex before penetration
• She will prefer people cumming within her mouth
• Other acts before penetration such as titjob, footjob, handjob won’t be used as much
• Foot master:
• Respect won’t increase anymore from the max amount of little respect
• She won’t lose dominant points that would make her fall to neutral attitude
• She will use her feet to humiliate the MC or to taunt him.
• She will prefer to use her foot before penetration acts
• She may expect foot worship in sex acts
• Dominatrix:
• It will increase the chance that she gets interested into sissy’s
• She will enjoy giving pain to her lover
• Only on special situations will she let others penetrate her
• She will prefer fucking people with a strap-on
• She may not let you cum until you beg
• She will scare all male characters that may be interested in her
• Slave
• She will enjoy pain
• She will enjoy being tied
• She will enjoy getting forced or raped
• She will enjoy servicing others
• Other characters will have it more easy to force her to have sex
• She may end up getting a hidden fetish (cheating fetish)
• She will fall in love easier with other characters

Level 3 fetishes are really intrusive and their effects are so expansive that only one of those may get the sister in each walkthrough:

• Public slut:
• The sister will enjoy public sex
• She will become more slutty
• She will have sex with anyone that wants to
• She will easily develop a love for gangbangs
• She won’t enter a relationship with anyone anymore and will break her current relationship
• It is really possible to end up pregnant without knowing the father

• Foot queen:
• Dominant points can’t fall from the high dominant level
• She won’t be interested in having sex with you
• She will make you worship her feet and obey her
• She won’t be interested in having any relationship with anyone other than you
• She will be free to do whatever she wants related to you
• She may humilliate you with her friends

• Sissy dominatrix:
• She will force you to be into chastity
• She will force you to dress girly
• She will fuck you in the ass with a strap-on
• She will make you service the strap-on
• She won’t be interested in having a relationship with any other character

• Ultimate slave:
• She will obey all your orders
• She will enjoy being used in any possible way
• She will live to serve
• She will be easily raped or conquered by other characters
• She will enjoy NTR be it her being taken away or having a girl have sex with you
• Very deviant

About attitude levels: They go from -100 to 100 being -100 totally submissive and 100 totally dominant, the levels are the following:

• -100 to -76: Totally submissive
• -75 to -50: Very submissive
• -50 to -25: Submissive
• -25 to -10: A little submissive
• -9 to 9: Neutral
• 10 to 25: A little dominant
• 26 to 50: Dominant
• 51 to 75: Very dominant
• 76 to 100: Totally dominant

About Sluttery: It goes from 0 to 100, the higher the more the girl wants to have sex, not having enough sex for her sluttery level will make the girl frustrated which will make it easier for others characters to fuck her and it will damage her current relationship. The levels are the following:

• 0 to 20: Normal
• 21 to 40: A little slutty
• 41 to 60: Slutty
• 61 to 80: Very slutty
• 81 to 100: Totally slutty

At very slutty and totally slutty the girl will cheat without being forced, she won’t be a loyal partner

Slutty will tend to cheat when frustrated.

Normal and a little slutty won’t cheat willingly.

Sluttery level increases by:
1º Having a lot of sex
2º Being a porn addict
3º Getting certain fetishes
4º Friends and relationships
5º Certain events or situations


P.D: This is quite complex, it's just to show a bit how to work over it.

-Fourth: Here is where you think about the events that you want to implement, storylines and making the characters that will be part of the game. Basically you make the characters, give them settings, objectives and how they act.

To not extend anymore will leave it at that.

-Fifth: Finally it's time to start making the game, first of all you need to make the system you wrote about, prepare the mechanics and stats and basically design the structure of what you want.

It is important to give it quite a bit of personalization so that it gives people a pleasant feeling while playing.

-Sixth: Incorporating the events, storylines and everything you wrote about, if you did all the points that I have said, you will have a really good structured game that won't require system chances or new mechanics. Everything you need already exists and you have to work upon that.

Here is where you can be more open in the sense of hearing your patrons or anyone that supports you. Do not concede a point of all the other points and explain clearly your idea to the people that want to support you. If you change the plans on points 1 to 5 the game will possibly be a failure because it may end up as a mess.

YA NEED JJJEEEEIIIISSSUUUUSSSS IN YOUR LIFE! MAUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUHA
Just kidding bro, was impressed by your suggestions, if you have nothing against it I will use this as a template for future changes on my upcoming game.

 

[DawnCry]

YA NEED JJJEEEEIIIISSSUUUUSSSS IN YOUR LIFE! MAUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUHA
Just kidding bro, was impressed by your suggestions, if you have nothing against it I will use this as a template for future changes on my upcoming game.

You can use everything you want, the most important part is that you feel the system flexible enough so that if you want to add something in the future you don't have to modify it.

Most of the bugs that are generated in a game are when the developers touch the system. Suddenly everything breaks and you have so many bugs that you can't even count them.

 

[sarashi]

maybe add a dog as their pet which follows her from time to time and possibly can have sex with her

 

[yihman1]

maybe add a dog as their pet which follows her from time to time and possibly can have sex with her

That's a definite possibility.

 

[Leafy]

Futa/Trans, you say? *smash-clicks*

 

[Badboll]

Seems interesting, the black maid is annoying though.

 

[HunterSeeker]

Judging by screenshots, shouldn't this have the futa tag?

 

[yihman1]

I have made a new update. Version 0.3
Added a new path 18 more pictures fixed some spelling errors too.

You must be registered to see the links

 

[Jimbog]

Version 3, that was awesome!

 

[yihman1]

Version 3, that was awesome!

There is a bug where one of the branches did not get a "return" in the script so it just keeps going on to the 2nd path it will be fixed by next update.

 

[Jimbog]

There is a bug where one of the branches did not get a "return" in the script so it just keeps going on to the 2nd path it will be fixed by next update./QUOTE]

oops, I thought that it was on purpose, I loved the way you treated the second path

Spoiler

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

 

[yihman1]

I assume that Lura's mental illness means that what we are seeing through her eyes doesn't reflect reality

Reality is one's perception of reality.