As someone who utterly hates the Noblewoman model (specifically the face), I can sort of relate but I like all the other original arts myself too. It's the shading and the coloring on the bodies that really sells it for me with this game.Because I love the game, but the original human body is a little bit natural, and the characters look not quite to my taste. So I'm going to redraw the image to my liking. But when I talked to others yesterday, most of them thought the original image was better, so I was wondering if I should share it after revising it or just use it for my own gratification.
That seems like a lot of work for personal tastes! Haha. Dude there's no harm besides some more criticisms to sharing your edits. Mandalore's advice on angles is spot on with different poses being attractive as opposed to Forward-Facing all the time and Laz_jag too with the style maybe fitting younger characters. I'd want to see what the teen girl looks like from you.