VN Ren'Py The Last Embrace [v0.2] [NoX Productions]

[smarty101]

You are good on this front here. the FMC won't become some mindless slut or a bimbo. This is first and foremost a story focused game, with occasional sexual scenes here and there, but only when the story calls for it. It is a romance story if you follow the main LI paths. There won't be any fcking around or anything like that, i hate that crap. Let me just say that the choices will matter a lot on the future of some characters, people WILL die, and very violently at that. That may not be everyone's cup of tea, but this is a horror game. It's just what's going to happen one way or another. Bottom line, no sluts. Yes, if you played you may have picked up on that the main LI was going to be a prostitute, but depending on your interactions with her this won't happen and even if you didn't take that route she won't have a change to become a slut or a whore or whatever. But i won't spoil it, its something for a future chapter. People are free to speculate on it, in fact i encourage people to speculate on where they think the story is going, i love reading that stuff haha.

Good, i prefer an AVN which is more story-focused rather than an all-out sex fest, I'm like you and hate that crap of fucking nearly everyone the main character meets, if I wanted that kind of thing I'd be better off watching a porn movie. I will be honest with you here, even though it's a romance novel, I would try not to skimp too much on sex scenes if you can help it. They don't have to be hardcore like the majority of AVN's, but adding a few extra romantic or horny sex scenes will entice those extra players for you. I'm definitely going to be doing two playthroughs, one on the Clara path and one staying single. When I play FMC characters, i like to go lesbian or single route depending on the story or the way the dev set up the novel, yes, I know, typical MAN hahaha. to early to speculate whats going to happen, but at the end of the prologue maybe the man knows of her exsistence and plans to use her as a pawn in some twisted war on humans, cant wait to see the next few updates.

 

[Raul12344345]

a question and I won't fuck with you anymore then you can revive the dead turn others into vampires will you have super strength speed mind control will you have any as they say to train how to raise your abilities like level 1 to 100 or something like that will have a map you can go to different areas you can see like a half dark vampire with blood feeding on the mafia if you go for good or bad grab anyone half dark or sinister I don't know how to say a vampirism as God commands I'm not asking for a massacre but I have played some vampire games that in the end have the name of vampire which is a walk in the park anyway I shut up by the way I liked the game

 

[youraccount69]

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[rlduck]

Thanks for the share and good luck

 

[EyeWish1]

Not sure what you mean on English needing an overhaul. You mean the spelling or the font choice? I can maybe add more fonts to chose from if that's what you meant. Personally i haven't had trouble reading it, even on a phone everything is clearly visible. Can you elaborate?

I'm not referring to the visuals of the text I'm referring to the actual writing. Was the game tranlated into English from another language? Is it a machine translation?

 

[NoX Productions]

a question and I won't fuck with you anymore then you can revive the dead turn others into vampires will you have super strength speed mind control will you have any as they say to train how to raise your abilities like level 1 to 100 or something like that will have a map you can go to different areas you can see like a half dark vampire with blood feeding on the mafia if you go for good or bad grab anyone half dark or sinister I don't know how to say a vampirism as God commands I'm not asking for a massacre but I have played some vampire games that in the end have the name of vampire which is a walk in the park anyway I shut up by the way I liked the game

Glad you liked it. Im still thinking if i should give her powers or not and/or stats. If google translated right you are asking if there will be a bad/evil route? The anwser is yes. But first a series of events in fufure chapters will have to happen before that route will become available. Yes there will be killing, there will be blood. Let's just say that certain heads will litterally fly haha. But as i said, it will take a series of dramatic events to happen for her to have that shift in personallity, but even then the final outcome can still be avoided. Its all about choices in my game, some will be easy, some difficult

Good, i prefer an AVN which is more story-focused rather than an all-out sex fest, I'm like you and hate that crap of fucking nearly everyone the main character meets, if I wanted that kind of thing I'd be better off watching a porn movie. I will be honest with you here, even though it's a romance novel, I would try not to skimp too much on sex scenes if you can help it. They don't have to be hardcore like the majority of AVN's, but adding a few extra romantic or horny sex scenes will entice those extra players for you. I'm definitely going to be doing two playthroughs, one on the Clara path and one staying single. When I play FMC characters, i like to go lesbian or single route depending on the story or the way the dev set up the novel, yes, I know, typical MAN hahaha. to early to speculate whats going to happen, but at the end of the prologue maybe the man knows of her exsistence and plans to use her as a pawn in some twisted war on humans, cant wait to see the next few updates.

Thanx for the feedback. Don't worry, there will be enough sexual content to wet people's apetites. My goal is to have them when appropriate for the story so there won't ever be just some random fcking going on just for the sake of it. It will be romantic, but it will be (hopefully) spicy enough for people

I'm not referring to the visuals of the text I'm referring to the actual writing. Was the game tranlated into English from another language? Is it a machine translation?

No, i wrote it myself. It wasn't translated from anything. But i am not a native English speaker. Pretty much what you see here is what you get. IDK what to tell you, to me it looks and sounds like English. Then again, i learned English from watching movies and playing games, so gramatically it may not be always correct that much i can say.

 

[EyeWish1]

No, i wrote it myself. It wasn't translated from anything. But i am not a native English speaker. Pretty much what you see here is what you get. IDK what to tell you, to me it looks and sounds like English. Then again, i learned English from watching movies and playing games, so gramatically it may not be always correct that much i can say.

Gotcha. My only suggestion is to get someone to proof read / edit it. You put a lot of work into the game, you might as well go the extra mile to polish it up.

 

[jadepaladin]

As a native English speaker, it can sound off sometimes. I tend to be very forgiving about it though.

 

[Raul12344345]

ok espero con ansias la nueva vercion

 

[NoX Productions]

Its the way i have been speaking and writing English all my life, im not about to change. Can't rewire my brain lol. People can always mod it if they don't understand it. Like i said, to me, it sounds and reads like English. I did put the script through the spellcheck to see if there are any errors and it didn't catch anything so idk

 

[smarty101]

Its the way i have been speaking and writing English all my life, im not about to change. Can't rewire my brain lol. People can always mod it if they don't understand it. Like i said, to me, it sounds and reads like English. I did put the script through the spellcheck to see if there are any errors and it didn't catch anything so idk

The problem with some spellcheckers is that they do not always use English as in proper UK English; most use American English, for example, like this, in the UK we say "Colour" but in America they say "color". I found that some spellcheckers don't pick up on the different spelling when it comes to English.

 

[MixQQ]

lesbo crap fully avoidable? any straight scenes?

about future tags I see multiple penetration - any chances for MMF/DP/Gangbangs?

 

[Cabin]

So there is a fem dom tag , is the mc the dom or her possible gf is ??

 

[JoeTheMC84]

Ok, so let me aleviate some of your concerns because i see the optional lesbian thing is really throwing you of. By it being optional i meant that player will have a choice to either pursue the main LI Clara, whom you meet in the prologue and this path can bloom into a full blown relationship, if you made the right choices even here in prologue there are signs of it already happening. So yes, this is a full romantic path, but option is there for players to avoid it if they want to, this is what i meant by optional lesbian path. IDK how else to put it. Or you can chose to pursue a male Li instead, who has not yet been introduced.

For harem not being there, im not sure how you came to a conclusion that it's clearly meant to be a multiple LI's game. Yes, there is more than one option. There are two, one female and one male. So its a choice you have to make on who to be in a eventual romantic relationship with. There will be side characters ofc, but they won't be LI's. There will only ever be those two i mentioned. I wouldn't call that a harem. And no, there will be no cheating in the game at all. I absolutelly hate cheating, NTR and everything to do with it so you won't find that in my games ever. Harem yes im down for, but it just doesn't fit here, at all, considering how few characters will there actually be in this game. Most are relegated to either a support role like some friends she will make down the line or just one offs that she will meet once or twice. I can't say too much without spoiling.

Sandbox, yes i agree on that. It was just something i threw out there to see what people think, like most of those future tags honestly. Most of that is still up in the air. Sandbox is not very likely honestly, im not sure if i would even be able to code something like that as im still fairly new to Ren'py. So to aleviate your concern on that, it is unlikely to happen, just an idea i tossed into the wind to see people's take on it, and clearly most would not like it so its unlikely to happen.

Anyhow, hopefully i clarified some of what im trying to do with my game

Just a few thoughts, I'll put them in a spoiler tab to not bog down the thread with the wall of text, if you want to read it:

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So, those are my thoughts on it. And other than the "throuple," question on if we can least peruse both of the "main" love interests then I don't have any direct questions, just some thoughts and comments. Whatever happens I wish you the best and good luck and will be keeping an eye on the game. I almost never play new release until they get a few updates anyway. Best if luck, and wish you success,

 

[NoX Productions]

lesbo crap fully avoidable? any straight scenes?

about future tags I see multiple penetration - any chances for MMF/DP/Gangbangs?

It is fully avoidable yes, you can just be friends, up to you. No straight scenes in the prologue, but there will be in future chapters. Future tags are still up in the air, multiple penetrations will likely happen with toys since this game is not about sharing but like i said, pretty much most future tags are still up in the air.

So there is a fem dom tag , is the mc the dom or her possible gf is ??

In the prologue its the possible LI only, but in the future MC will be as well as she gains more confidence, right now she's still really out of her element, plus the memory loss affects her personallity as well somewhat. As the story progresses, she will be gaining more confidence and personallity changes which will lead her to be more bold towards Clara as well.

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So, those are my thoughts on it. And other than the "throuple," question on if we can least peruse both of the "main" love interests then I don't have any direct questions, just some thoughts and comments. Whatever happens I wish you the best and good luck and will be keeping an eye on the game. I almost never play new release until they get a few updates anyway. Best if luck, and wish you success,

Damn, some of you guys really are riding on those future tags. As i said before, those are all up in the air, most likely won't even happen. I just put them there to see what people think but honestly if i still had thread ownership i would probably just remove them. I kind of jumped the gun on those to be honest. Anyhow, once and for all (hopefully), there wont be a harem or cheating, multiple penetration tag reffers to penetration with toys. There will be side characters yes, but none of them will be either side girls/guys or main LI's except for one guy who hasn't been introduced yet and who you can only have a romance path if you are not with the female LI. I never said there will be side LI's. To clarify, there will be 3 more girls introduced later down the line, 2 of witch will be only friends to the MC and one just a plot device, and 2 males, one will be the main villian and one will be the male LI. Also, this is a horror game, people will die. You can speculate on who or how, im not going to spoil it because its going to be a big deal, but lets just say that revenge plot is one of the possible paths. But thanx for the feedback, all i can say i can only hope people will like what i have in mind for the story, i understand that it won't be for everyone and that should be fine. Im not going to change my vision i have for it just because some people don't like this or that or want this or that in the game. I can take some suggestions as long as they don't conflict with the overall story too much and fit my game. Harem, cheating, gangbangs etc does not fit. My game is not your typical vampire game, i intentionally want to try and do something other people haven't done. I played a number of vampire themed vn's and most go for the same tropes so i want to avoid falling into that pitfall and instead make something of my own. My intention has never been to please everyone, but hopefully at least some will like what i have to offer.

 

[JoeTheMC84]

It is fully avoidable yes, you can just be friends, up to you. No straight scenes in the prologue, but there will be in future chapters. Future tags are still up in the air, multiple penetrations will likely happen with toys since this game is not about sharing but like i said, pretty much most future tags are still up in the air.



In the prologue its the possible LI only, but in the future MC will be as well as she gains more confidence, right now she's still really out of her element, plus the memory loss affects her personallity as well somewhat. As the story progresses, she will be gaining more confidence and personallity changes which will lead her to be more bold towards Clara as well.


Damn, some of you guys really are riding on those future tags. As i said before, those are all up in the air, most likely won't even happen. I just put them there to see what people think but honestly if i still had thread ownership i would probably just remove them. I kind of jumped the gun on those to be honest. Anyhow, once and for all (hopefully), there wont be a harem or cheating, multiple penetration tag reffers to penetration with toys. There will be side characters yes, but none of them will be either side girls/guys or main LI's except for one guy who hasn't been introduced yet and who you can only have a romance path if you are not with the female LI. I never said there will be side LI's. To clarify, there will be 3 more girls introduced later down the line, 2 of witch will be only friends to the MC and one just a plot device, and 2 males, one will be the main villian and one will be the male LI. Also, this is a horror game, people will die. You can speculate on who or how, im not going to spoil it because its going to be a big deal, but lets just say that revenge plot is one of the possible paths. But thanx for the feedback, all i can say i can only hope people will like what i have in mind for the story, i understand that it won't be for everyone and that should be fine. Im not going to change my vision i have for it just because some people don't like this or that or want this or that in the game. I can take some suggestions as long as they don't conflict with the overall story too much and fit my game. Harem, cheating, gangbangs etc does not fit. My game is not your typical vampire game, i intentionally want to try and do something other people haven't done. I played a number of vampire themed vn's and most go for the same tropes so i want to avoid falling into that pitfall and instead make something of my own. My intention has never been to please everyone, but hopefully at least some will like what i have to offer.

So, yeah, sounds like some wires had gotten crossed then. Miscommunications happen. This makes it sounds like there are only two love interests total, one male and one female, and you pick between them. Every other character is just a side character NPC, not a side love interest. That's fair. Some of the phrasing before just made it sound like you had planned side love interests which is why some people where confused (I think) as to what you were planning. No one's fault, it just happens some times, especially in purely text based communications.

So obviously if the Mc isn't even able to have sex scenes with more than one characters depending on path (male or female) then you wouldn't have a harem, there aren't any other love interests, main or side. It does still sound like when you hear harem you think of it as a type of cheating or something, but it isn't. Just as an aside, if you plan on making more games or being around the hobby and stuff, it could be a good idea to look into what a harem actually is, again, not a big deal now since you've clarified some stuff. That this is more of a solo love interest game were you pick between two options.

One of the reason people care so much about future tags is because there have been devs who have actually just lied about it. Devs who promise one thing and then do another. And devs who refuse to answer so they can bait in people and then surprise them with tags. Which is lame because those tactics only work on new releases and before the game is done. Once it is done all the tags will be out, and all they did was show they aren't trustworthy when it comes to future projects (EDIT: Not that you have done this, it has just happened before, so it makes people cautious of new devs). And tags are mostly just a genre thing. Players knowing a tag isn't a spoiler because they is still the who, how, when, where, and why, of how the tag gets implemented. Saying, "My game will (or might) have 'X' tag," is no more a spoiler than saying "My sci-fi game will have aliens and space ships." Using something you already said, a character will die, and apparently an important one. That's incredible helpful, but doesn't spoil anything really. All it does is interest and entice people who like stories with that kind of stuff, gritty scenes and revenge plots, but it also lets players who hate any character death know the story isn't for them. It sounds like you're telling a gothic horror story, so fans of the genre now know that and people who don't like it can avoid it more easily, it's a win-win (if it isn't gothic horror the point still applies, more information is almost never a bad thing). Players will still have to learn the context and executions of those things. So sometimes people get nervous when devs don't share or make clear what tags they want to add.

Anyway, I have a tendance to be long winded, sorry about that. Thanks for replying before and best of luck again,

 

[Cabin]

It is fully avoidable yes, you can just be friends, up to you. No straight scenes in the prologue, but there will be in future chapters. Future tags are still up in the air, multiple penetrations will likely happen with toys since this game is not about sharing but like i said, pretty much most future tags are still up in the air.



In the prologue its the possible LI only, but in the future MC will be as well as she gains more confidence, right now she's still really out of her element, plus the memory loss affects her personallity as well somewhat. As the story progresses, she will be gaining more confidence and personallity changes which will lead her to be more bold towards Clara as well.


Damn, some of you guys really are riding on those future tags. As i said before, those are all up in the air, most likely won't even happen. I just put them there to see what people think but honestly if i still had thread ownership i would probably just remove them. I kind of jumped the gun on those to be honest. Anyhow, once and for all (hopefully), there wont be a harem or cheating, multiple penetration tag reffers to penetration with toys. There will be side characters yes, but none of them will be either side girls/guys or main LI's except for one guy who hasn't been introduced yet and who you can only have a romance path if you are not with the female LI. I never said there will be side LI's. To clarify, there will be 3 more girls introduced later down the line, 2 of witch will be only friends to the MC and one just a plot device, and 2 males, one will be the main villian and one will be the male LI. Also, this is a horror game, people will die. You can speculate on who or how, im not going to spoil it because its going to be a big deal, but lets just say that revenge plot is one of the possible paths. But thanx for the feedback, all i can say i can only hope people will like what i have in mind for the story, i understand that it won't be for everyone and that should be fine. Im not going to change my vision i have for it just because some people don't like this or that or want this or that in the game. I can take some suggestions as long as they don't conflict with the overall story too much and fit my game. Harem, cheating, gangbangs etc does not fit. My game is not your typical vampire game, i intentionally want to try and do something other people haven't done. I played a number of vampire themed vn's and most go for the same tropes so i want to avoid falling into that pitfall and instead make something of my own. My intention has never been to please everyone, but hopefully at least some will like what i have to offer.

Thanks dude . Looking forward to future updates and really glad the mc is dynamic about being a dom so we can decided if she is a dom or sub based on our choices

 

[goodwaffle]

Liking what I'm seeing so far! My only complaint at the moment is requesting that you add another less-stylized font option for those of us that have trouble reading display type, something like open dyslexic would probably cover all the bases.

 

[Buletti]

Cheerio!

Thank you very much for starting a new VN! I very much appreciate everyone that is crazy enough to go on this wild ride today.

Hats off for being so active and willing to answer in great Detail!

So I join in with the weird detail questions:

As the story progresses, she will be gaining more confidence and personallity changes which will lead her to be more bold towards Clara as well.

Does this mean the dynamic will change permanently or will we be able to make the MC stay a sub? Also possible BDSM as future tag?

Have a good week!

 

[indio68]

damn i love vampire games , if only this had a male MC...uff