VN Ren'Py The Last Embrace [v0.2] [NoX Productions]

[Ragnar]

Yes, it is up to the player if they want to interact in such a way with either male or female. There is also a solo route, which will have its own benefits but to know what those are i guess you will have to play the game


no, only one protagonist. No, you can avoid sexual encounters with girls if you want. There will be a guy for you down the line, just not in prologue, or you can go solo route


IDK about you, but that's one mighty enticing garbage can




I mean, you don't have to make it optional in your playthrough, the game gives you choices you can take. No harem just wouldn't fit the story i have in mind here, maybe in the next game if there is ever to be one. Sandbox, again it would be optional and im still contemplating if i will do it at all. But thanx for your feedback



check the dev note, there could be something there for you down the line, if not already. Not everything is set in stone yet. Im more than open to feedback, if it fits my story i will see what i can do if you got any particular kink in mind

From the dev notes I'm fine with almost everything, not a fan of management and sandbox but you do you.
That being said don't try to appeal to everyone because that rarely works.

 

[Saerwen]

You had me at romance and dating sim!

 

[NoX Productions]

From the dev notes I'm fine with almost everything, not a fan of management and sandbox but you do you.
That being said don't try to appeal to everyone because that rarely works.

Management really only refers to her hunger meter, its mostly there for story purposes so it will kind of manage itself naturally as you play the game. It's not something a player will have to think about much. As for sandbox, yea im really on the fence about that one still. It was an idea that popped into my head but it may not even come to pass, it may be out if my coding capabilities anyway haha. But you are right, trying to appeal to everyone wont work. I already have a rough first draft of all 12 chapters about where the story will go and how it will all end so my stance on it if a kink would fit my story then i may consider it but if it doesn't then i will not force something in just for the sake of pleasing someone. That ain't me

 

[FatGiant]

I mean, you don't have to make it optional in your playthrough, the game gives you choices you can take. No harem just wouldn't fit the story i have in mind here, maybe in the next game if there is ever to be one. Sandbox, again it would be optional and im still contemplating if i will do it at all. But thanx for your feedback

Clearly you and I aren't on the same wavelength.

- The problem with the Lesbian path being optional, is that it isn't a dedicated one. This means that it is only a fetish and not a relationship. So, it is, for people like me that enjoy it, a let down. Sure, we may get some sex scenes between the girls, but, that is just a 10% of what we are looking for. No, I do understand why, I just had hopes that being a female protag story with a Lesbain tag, we would get something more than just a fetish.

- The problem with No Harem, is that it is clearly meant to be a multiple LI's game. Without being in an Harem, you either follow a Single LI path, or, you are a fucking cheater to everyone. The Harem proposition solves that issue. No cheating, ever. You apparently are building a cheaters dream scenario.

- Sandbox is the equivalent of dumping your story in the trash and going, oh there you have it, play with it however you want, I couldn't be bothered to maintain coherence and a story anymore. I know that most people don't see it that way, but, that's what it means to me.

My feedback is, do whatever you want, you had a chance to make something unique, but you prefer to do something forgettable. Your choice, obviously.

Peace

 

[jadepaladin]

Management really only refers to her hunger meter, its mostly there for story purposes so it will kind of manage itself naturally as you play the game. It's not something a player will have to think about much. As for sandbox, yea im really on the fence about that one still. It was an idea that popped into my head but it may not even come to pass, it may be out if my coding capabilities anyway haha. But you are right, trying to appeal to everyone wont work. I already have a rough first draft of all 12 chapters about where the story will go and how it will all end so my stance on it if a kink would fit my story then i may consider it but if it doesn't then i will not force something in just for the sake of pleasing someone. That ain't me

Since everyone else is telling you what to do, I'll toss my hat in the ring. No sandbox, please.

 

[NoX Productions]

Since everyone else is telling you what to do, I'll toss my hat in the ring. No sandbox, please.

It is one of the things that im not much keen on either, its just something i threw out there to see what people think. Honestly, it not very likely to happen so you are good

 

[NoX Productions]

Clearly you and I aren't on the same wavelength.

- The problem with the Lesbian path being optional, is that it isn't a dedicated one. This means that it is only a fetish and not a relationship. So, it is, for people like me that enjoy it, a let down. Sure, we may get some sex scenes between the girls, but, that is just a 10% of what we are looking for. No, I do understand why, I just had hopes that being a female protag story with a Lesbain tag, we would get something more than just a fetish.

- The problem with No Harem, is that it is clearly meant to be a multiple LI's game. Without being in an Harem, you either follow a Single LI path, or, you are a fucking cheater to everyone. The Harem proposition solves that issue. No cheating, ever. You apparently are building a cheaters dream scenario.

- Sandbox is the equivalent of dumping your story in the trash and going, oh there you have it, play with it however you want, I couldn't be bothered to maintain coherence and a story anymore. I know that most people don't see it that way, but, that's what it means to me.

My feedback is, do whatever you want, you had a chance to make something unique, but you prefer to do something forgettable. Your choice, obviously.

Peace

Ok, so let me aleviate some of your concerns because i see the optional lesbian thing is really throwing you of. By it being optional i meant that player will have a choice to either pursue the main LI Clara, whom you meet in the prologue and this path can bloom into a full blown relationship, if you made the right choices even here in prologue there are signs of it already happening. So yes, this is a full romantic path, but option is there for players to avoid it if they want to, this is what i meant by optional lesbian path. IDK how else to put it. Or you can chose to pursue a male Li instead, who has not yet been introduced.

For harem not being there, im not sure how you came to a conclusion that it's clearly meant to be a multiple LI's game. Yes, there is more than one option. There are two, one female and one male. So its a choice you have to make on who to be in a eventual romantic relationship with. There will be side characters ofc, but they won't be LI's. There will only ever be those two i mentioned. I wouldn't call that a harem. And no, there will be no cheating in the game at all. I absolutelly hate cheating, NTR and everything to do with it so you won't find that in my games ever. Harem yes im down for, but it just doesn't fit here, at all, considering how few characters will there actually be in this game. Most are relegated to either a support role like some friends she will make down the line or just one offs that she will meet once or twice. I can't say too much without spoiling.

Sandbox, yes i agree on that. It was just something i threw out there to see what people think, like most of those future tags honestly. Most of that is still up in the air. Sandbox is not very likely honestly, im not sure if i would even be able to code something like that as im still fairly new to Ren'py. So to aleviate your concern on that, it is unlikely to happen, just an idea i tossed into the wind to see people's take on it, and clearly most would not like it so its unlikely to happen.

Anyhow, hopefully i clarified some of what im trying to do with my game

 

[CboyC95]

Can you play this lesbian only?

 

[NoX Productions]

Can you play this lesbian only?

yes, the choice is up to you

 

[FatGiant]

Ok, so let me aleviate some of your concerns because i see the optional lesbian thing is really throwing you of. By it being optional i meant that player will have a choice to either pursue the main LI Clara, whom you meet in the prologue and this path can bloom into a full blown relationship, if you made the right choices even here in prologue there are signs of it already happening. So yes, this is a full romantic path, but option is there for players to avoid it if they want to, this is what i meant by optional lesbian path. IDK how else to put it. Or you can chose to pursue a male Li instead, who has not yet been introduced.

For harem not being there, im not sure how you came to a conclusion that it's clearly meant to be a multiple LI's game. Yes, there is more than one option. There are two, one female and one male. So its a choice you have to make on who to be in a eventual romantic relationship with. There will be side characters ofc, but they won't be LI's. There will only ever be those two i mentioned. I wouldn't call that a harem. And no, there will be no cheating in the game at all. I absolutelly hate cheating, NTR and everything to do with it so you won't find that in my games ever. Harem yes im down for, but it just doesn't fit here, at all, considering how few characters will there actually be in this game. Most are relegated to either a support role like some friends she will make down the line or just one offs that she will meet once or twice. I can't say too much without spoiling.

Sandbox, yes i agree on that. It was just something i threw out there to see what people think, like most of those future tags honestly. Most of that is still up in the air. Sandbox is not very likely honestly, im not sure if i would even be able to code something like that as im still fairly new to Ren'py. So to aleviate your concern on that, it is unlikely to happen, just an idea i tossed into the wind to see people's take on it, and clearly most would not like it so its unlikely to happen.

Anyhow, hopefully i clarified some of what im trying to do with my game

Now that makes more sense.

Thank you for the clarification. The way the tags and possible things were planned in the Dev Notes, painted a completely different scenario.

Maybe this is what you should put there. Instead of a list of kinks that look like it is a game centered in a multiple guys fucking the MC, with an optional girl on the side.

This is a nightmare: Male domination, Vaginal sex, Anal, Multiple Endings, Creampie, Group Sex, Handjob, Blowjob, Interracial, Oral Sex, Multiple Penetration, Prostitution, Dating Sim, Management, Optional Sandbox

What you described now, is NOT what those kinks paint.

Peace

 

[jadepaladin]

Couple of things, one's a personal gripe and the other I'm not sure about.

a) Not a big fan of single choices. Context matters but generally they just slow down reading, because you have to stop and click on something instead of just clicking ahead.

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b) Cemetery and cemetary are being used interchangeably and I think the proper spelling is cemetery. Backed up by spell check throwing a fit for the "a" version when I typed it just now.

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[mrgubby]

What kind of tf content can we expect? Will it just be people turning into vampires?

 

[smarty101]

I'm glad to read that you hate NTR, I also hate that crap. It's a Japanese culture thing mainly for men and has already had a negative impact on Western society since its introduction to us. just like cheating, another huge Japanese culture thing for men.
Not much I can really say about your novel so far, the prologue was a little short if I'm being honest, but I do like Clara, she is actually really cute, so that's a positive, as for the main FMC I'm not too sure, could be a bit sexier I guess, but she's ok. The storyline seems ok, sleep for a thousand years, then wake up in the modern world and needs to find a way to survive, pretty good. im no expert when it comes to rendering and animations, but they seem pretty good so far, so you're doing ok there, to be honest, i cant really say much more until a few more updates.
Someone mentioned in an earlier post about there being a lot of FMC around lately, there are more and more showing up, but honestly, most Dev's/Creators try to push them into becoming sluts just to keep the so called masses happy and i hate that crap, the problem is there are also plenty of people who dont want that crap but there to scared to say anything about it, i dont mind some sexual fun but turning into a slut is not for me, so i hope you dont listen to those kinds of people and produce an FMC that can fight that kind of utter sexual blackmail/corruption slut play crap.

 

[NoX Productions]

Couple of things, one's a personal gripe and the other I'm not sure about.

a) Not a big fan of single choices. Context matters but generally they just slow down reading, because you have to stop and click on something instead of just clicking ahead.

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b) Cemetery and cemetary are being used interchangeably and I think the proper spelling is cemetery. Backed up by spell check throwing a fit for the "a" version when I typed it just now.

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Thanx for pointing the spelling issue there, i will correct it. As for single button choices, i honestly thought it would bring more immersion. Its something is saw in some other games and it made me feel more immersed into the world, but i can consider doing away with it if it bothers more people. Its an easy enough change to make. Thanx for the feedback!

What kind of tf content can we expect? Will it just be people turning into vampires?

No, only one person will be turned into a vampire, if you played the prologue you know who. Or just look at my sig haha. And even that can be avoided. In my world, the MC is the only vampire left, all others got exterminated about a 1000 years prior. As for what you can expect, there will be shadowy cult like organization, a misterious figure trying to manipulate you (if you played and saw the teaser at the end, you may have a clue). There will be killing going on here and there, but not all the time. I can't say much without spoiling the future story, but two at least that i know for certain, maybe some more one of side characters, we will see.

 

[smarty101]

Couple of things, one's a personal gripe and the other I'm not sure about.

a) Not a big fan of single choices. Context matters but generally they just slow down reading, because you have to stop and click on something instead of just clicking ahead.

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b) Cemetery and cemetary are being used interchangeably and I think the proper spelling is cemetery. Backed up by spell check throwing a fit for the "a" version when I typed it just now.

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Good job i looked at the pictures you posted. I was about to say if you don't like choices, then you would be better off playing kinetic novels, but i see what you mean now about single choice, i didn't really take any notice of it when i played the prologue, but i think you might be right, single choices would slow it down and are not really needed if there is no impact on the story.

 

[NoX Productions]

I'm glad to read that you hate NTR, I also hate that crap. It's a Japanese culture thing mainly for men and has already had a negative impact on Western society since its introduction to us. just like cheating, another huge Japanese culture thing for men.
Not much I can really say about your novel so far, the prologue was a little short if I'm being honest, but I do like Clara, she is actually really cute, so that's a positive, as for the main FMC I'm not too sure, could be a bit sexier I guess, but she's ok. The storyline seems ok, sleep for a thousand years, then wake up in the modern world and needs to find a way to survive, pretty good. im no expert when it comes to rendering and animations, but they seem pretty good so far, so you're doing ok there, to be honest, i cant really say much more until a few more updates.
Someone mentioned in an earlier post about there being a lot of FMC around lately, there are more and more showing up, but honestly, most Dev's/Creators try to push them into becoming sluts just to keep the so called masses happy and i hate that crap, the problem is there are also plenty of people who dont want that crap but there to scared to say anything about it, i dont mind some sexual fun but turning into a slut is not for me, so i hope you dont listen to those kinds of people and produce an FMC that can fight that kind of utter sexual blackmail/corruption slut play crap.

You are good on this front here. the FMC won't become some mindless slut or a bimbo. This is first and foremost a story focused game, with occasional sexual scenes here and there, but only when the story calls for it. It is a romance story if you follow the main LI paths. There won't be any fcking around or anything like that, i hate that crap. Let me just say that the choices will matter a lot on the future of some characters, people WILL die, and very violently at that. That may not be everyone's cup of tea, but this is a horror game. It's just what's going to happen one way or another. Bottom line, no sluts. Yes, if you played you may have picked up on that the main LI was going to be a prostitute, but depending on your interactions with her this won't happen and even if you didn't take that route she won't have a change to become a slut or a whore or whatever. But i won't spoil it, its something for a future chapter. People are free to speculate on it, in fact i encourage people to speculate on where they think the story is going, i love reading that stuff haha.

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[EyeWish1]

Visually very impressive but the English needs a complete overhaul. Too hard to read in it's present state.

Good luck to the dev. Definitely shows promise.

 

[NoX Productions]

metroe gusto mucho el juego voy a esperar la nueva vercion

Hopefully google did a good job at translating. Im glad you liked it. Hopefully not too long a wait for the next episode, im thinking 2-3 months is most likely, maybe less

 

[NoX Productions]

Visually very impressive but the English needs a complete overhaul. Too hard to read in it's present state.

Good luck to the dev. Definitely shows promise.

Not sure what you mean on English needing an overhaul. You mean the spelling or the font choice? I can maybe add more fonts to chose from if that's what you meant. Personally i haven't had trouble reading it, even on a phone everything is clearly visible. Can you elaborate?