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honestly, that was the extent of my rhetorical capacities after seeing the redhead in the previews...Enchantment?
I get it. Thank you. Everything will be fixed in the next update.it looks like an interesting premise and could, potentialy, be a good game - but -
The font is atrocious, it is almost unreadable in places,
Navigation is bad, some sort of pop-up text for the navigation hot-spots would make life much easier,
Renders are too dark, i had to twiddle with the gamma settings to see what was going on.
Is this crash repeat again?Tried it and liked a lot of it before getting such a bad crash I actually had to restart my computer. It happened during the cloth changing scene.
I appreciate the attempt of giving the world a larger sense. Also thought it was neat that there were a lot of references to rules and events without instantly spelling out why that is. It added a sense intrigue and opportunities to expand on it later, allowing for a more organic story progression. Also interested in seeing how the skill system works out, although a couple of choices more would have been beneficial. Especially if you introduce the skill point system earlier.
Echoing on the map criticism from earlier. It was really weird to have this 'Go somewhere' point when you have no idea where you are supposed or how to get there.
Yes, I was inspired by DA:O one of my favorite gamesI have my doubts about the character stats.... telling Annie the truth should count as honesty.
the game gives me DA:O vibes, and feels like story mod. Hopefully it won't end the same way as Tranquil Sofia...
I only wish there was an option to save more girls.
Gave it another shot, didn't crash this. Just never had that bad of a crash with Ren'Py before.Is this crash repeat again?
Skill system will improve. Just wanted to show what I intend to do. And about 'Go somewhere' point, I understood my mistake. Thank you! I'll fix it all.
Thank you. I am very pleased. I'll fix my font and renders. I'll look at them on the other Pc next time cuz on mine renders doesn't seem too dark.This is very good. Great potential. My only criticisms are the font and the renders being a bit dark. Light and dark are great mood setters, but there needs to be good contrast - use the light to focus the viewer on what you want them to see.
There was a good amount of content fo a 0.01 too. Nice cliffhanger ending.
Thanks. I did not understand you before. I will try to find a balance between the choices in the next update and make some corrections.Gave it another shot, didn't crash this. Just never had that bad of a crash with Ren'Py before.
As for the skills, I didn't intend as a criticsm as I think the system has a lot of potential, it just difficult to really contextualize the impact of them yet. Another aspect because there are so few choices related to them, some of the consequences feel weirdly unbalanced. So for example it really easy to lose a lot of points with the other girl in this part, especially since the second part requires taking a corruption hit which sounds bad. Although it is impossible to know because there's no indication of the context yet. Again, this isn't a negative as I assume the skills will become more functional later.
Although, if I may, the corruption hit you take in that situation felt so weird as the game was all about their warm feelings towards each other before it. Considering the other corruption choice was to willingly watch someone get sexually assaulted, equating those two situations felt weird as hell. I want to stress none of this meant as a slam as I'm really intrigued by where this game goes.
Also on the Dragon Age reference, Dragon Age 2 all the way. Still one of my favorite games of all time.
And absolutely agree with you about DA. Amazing game. Especially 1 and 2 partsGave it another shot, didn't crash this. Just never had that bad of a crash with Ren'Py before.
As for the skills, I didn't intend as a criticsm as I think the system has a lot of potential, it just difficult to really contextualize the impact of them yet. Another aspect because there are so few choices related to them, some of the consequences feel weirdly unbalanced. So for example it really easy to lose a lot of points with the other girl in this part, especially since the second part requires taking a corruption hit which sounds bad. Although it is impossible to know because there's no indication of the context yet. Again, this isn't a negative as I assume the skills will become more functional later.
Although, if I may, the corruption hit you take in that situation felt so weird as the game was all about their warm feelings towards each other before it. Considering the other corruption choice was to willingly watch someone get sexually assaulted, equating those two situations felt weird as hell. I want to stress none of this meant as a slam as I'm really intrigued by where this game goes.
Also on the Dragon Age reference, Dragon Age 2 all the way. Still one of my favorite games of all time.
Yes, it will be possible. I'll try to create many storylines. And you will decide which one you want to choice.Will it be possible to go for a lesbian route only? Asking for a friend
I know that it sounds like a bullshit, but I'll really try to do itYes, it will be possible. I'll try to create many storylines. And you will decide which one you want to choice.
And yes about Annie. I considered Lora gave her word to Archmage and when she told the truth of the Trial to Annie she broke it. But... it's too difficult choice what is the honesty in this situation. Kept the word or told the truth to the closest friend.I have my doubts about the character stats.... telling Annie the truth should count as honesty.
the game gives me DA:O vibes, and feels like story mod. Hopefully it won't end the same way as Tranquil Sofia...
I only wish there was an option to save more girls.