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For a first version, it has a good amount of content.
Good:
- nice setting with (apparently) a long story to come
- meaningful choices that affect your character
- different paths to explore (will we be able to turn to the dark side?)
- lots of background info
- good renders with nice models and lovely skins, but...
Bad:
- why do the girls have such enormous eyes? Annie's in particular look strange to me.
- some scenes are really dark and hard to see.
- the font is horrible, and since there are literal walls of text to read, it is hard on the eyes.
- some of the dialogues and internal monologues are a bit long winded. The first scene is infuriating because of it.
- the english is good at the beginning, but less so later on.
- it would be nice to know where we are going during roaming phases. What's the point of having empty spaces to wander in? A map like the one in Ataegina would be nice while in the tower.
All in all this game shows a lot of promise. If the dev keeps the story interesting it could become great.
Good:
- nice setting with (apparently) a long story to come
- meaningful choices that affect your character
- different paths to explore (will we be able to turn to the dark side?)
- lots of background info
- good renders with nice models and lovely skins, but...
Bad:
- why do the girls have such enormous eyes? Annie's in particular look strange to me.
- some scenes are really dark and hard to see.
- the font is horrible, and since there are literal walls of text to read, it is hard on the eyes.
- some of the dialogues and internal monologues are a bit long winded. The first scene is infuriating because of it.
- the english is good at the beginning, but less so later on.
- it would be nice to know where we are going during roaming phases. What's the point of having empty spaces to wander in? A map like the one in Ataegina would be nice while in the tower.
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All in all this game shows a lot of promise. If the dev keeps the story interesting it could become great.
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- May 8, 2017
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Simply excellent. Except for a font (It's really hard to read) nothing huge to pick on especially since it's the very first version. Love setting, writing is decent, renders are really good, mechanically so far with all these stats etc. it's top-notch. I hope that all erotic moments will be a matter of choice and stats will actually matter. For a first version it's really nice
Is there a way to open a script file and change the text to normal text instead of hard to read writing?
After awhile I stopped trying to read the text and just started clicking.
Played a little bit of the supposed rape scene and then right clicked and hit load and went the other way because it wasn't rape it was that boring fake rape. But at least I know who she is now and that she isn't to be trusted.
The Annie/Lora scene was hot but sadly ended too fast. Hopefully there will be some nice stuff with Ayna as well.
Hopefully Lora will be able to roast all of the dickless loser's nuts that get in her way.
I changed the kings name to king Roidinator as he looks like a roid taker from a different game and then I changed his butt buddy's name to the tin reject.
After awhile I stopped trying to read the text and just started clicking.
Played a little bit of the supposed rape scene and then right clicked and hit load and went the other way because it wasn't rape it was that boring fake rape. But at least I know who she is now and that she isn't to be trusted.
The Annie/Lora scene was hot but sadly ended too fast. Hopefully there will be some nice stuff with Ayna as well.
Hopefully Lora will be able to roast all of the dickless loser's nuts that get in her way.
I changed the kings name to king Roidinator as he looks like a roid taker from a different game and then I changed his butt buddy's name to the tin reject.
Thank you for your answer. I'll fix the renders, map and the font and also review sex dialogues.For a first version, it has a good amount of content.
Good:
- nice setting with (apparently) a long story to come
- meaningful choices that affect your character
- different paths to explore (will we be able to turn to the dark side?)
- lots of background info
- good renders with nice models and lovely skins, but...
Bad:
- why do the girls have such enormous eyes? Annie's in particular look strange to me.
- some scenes are really dark and hard to see.
- the font is horrible, and since there are literal walls of text to read, it is hard on the eyes.
- some of the dialogues and internal monologues are a bit long winded. The first scene is infuriating because of it.
- the english is good at the beginning, but less so later on.
- it would be nice to know where we are going during roaming phases. What's the point of having empty spaces to wander in? A map like the one in Ataegina would be nice while in the tower.
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All in all this game shows a lot of promise. If the dev keeps the story interesting it could become great.
If you want to change it by yourself, it's in the gui.rpy script.
## The font used for in-game text.
define gui.text_font = "gui/fonts/16880.otf"
## The font used for character names.
define gui.name_text_font = "gui/fonts/16880.otf"
## The font used for out-of-game text.
define gui.interface_text_font = "gui/fonts/16881.otf"
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You do know you can edit your posts right? You could of hit edit on your last post and added the or is that ok response to it.
To quote multiple times just go to a post and highlight the text and a qoute/reply will appear then click quote. Go to next thing you want to quote and highlight it and click quote.
This way you can use it to respond to multiple people without having to post to everyone and it'll all be in one post and will be less spammy. Once you have everything quoted that you want then start typing and then when needed click the insert quotes then drag the icon to rearrange the messages.
Once done the hit quotes messages and the messages will be pasted into your post then you can type out a reply for each quote if needed.
To me the text looks fine and is easy to read.
You do know you can edit your posts right? You could of hit edit on your last post and added the or is that ok response to it.
To quote multiple times just go to a post and highlight the text and a qoute/reply will appear then click quote. Go to next thing you want to quote and highlight it and click quote.
This way you can use it to respond to multiple people without having to post to everyone and it'll all be in one post and will be less spammy. Once you have everything quoted that you want then start typing and then when needed click the insert quotes then drag the icon to rearrange the messages.
Once done the hit quotes messages and the messages will be pasted into your post then you can type out a reply for each quote if needed.
To me the text looks fine and is easy to read.
- Aug 19, 2018
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since this has a dragon age thing going on does that mean the reason why MC is pretty innocent is because like in DA sexual relationships arent really allowed in the mage tower? also is there any plans to give the MC a custom name? because its a female protag game its not a big deal For me but others may want to have that option, but either way it's always a nice addition.
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It's not only DA in this game
I just love DA and it influenced me a lot, but the game will contain many different games and books and many things special from myself.Yes, a really good addition. I'll think about it.
- Aug 22, 2018
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Fuck the women that want to play or those that want to make a character their own, it's only a female MC, it doesn't matter.
You came across like the douchiest douche that ever douched.
P.S. Come on mods, get your stuff working properly. I just noticed this guy is on my ignore list yet I still saw his post. I'm reminded why I had him on ignore, posts like that, but it would help if I didn't see any posts he made ... kinda why I blocked him to start with.
- Aug 19, 2018
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apologies. i meant because it was a female character its not a big deal for me if i cant or can change the name because well in the end it'll likely be a name i think is nice. where as if i play an male MC i'll likely use my own name to help with immersion. but yeah kinda hard to fully immerse myself into a game with a female MC if im a dude. BUT if the option is there its still nice
P.S. fixed my previous post hoping to get my point across more accurately. i gotta agree with you it came across a bit as if it didnt matter for female players.
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- Aug 19, 2018
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