VN Ren'Py The List [v0.10] [Uncle Loco]

[FatGiant]

Thank you for the feedback, and I am glad you are enjoying the story.

First off everyone is entitled to their opinions as to what they like and don't like so don't feel bad telling me you didn't like something.

The narrator and Kelly stuff will be skippable going forward you will never need to see what they talk about. I like to use it to express my bad humor and to give people a recap incase they forget what happened in the last update. I also wanted to toss in the nudity for Kelly as she does not come into the story until chapter 5. There will be no more surpise nudity in there going forward either.

As for your question yes the MC does stop and give the homeless girl money it was not a one time thing. She will be back next chapter.

Great. I found the MC extremely likable, I hope he stays that way.

Do you have a schedule for releases, or is it "as is ready"? This is not an attempt to pressure, it is just me being curious of when we can expect to return to this story. When it's ready is fine, just hoping for better news ::wink::

Peace

 

[mijati]

we need a gofile upload.. not this shitty mixdropp stuff

 

[≋T≋h≋e≋H≋u≋n≋t≋e≋r≋]

Great game looking forward to next update!!!

 

[Leelaverse]

Alexis is a vampire right? Is that supposed to be obvious or am I stupid for even thinking it.

Eyes change color, unnaturally cold, had blood on her randomly, and is super strong enough to lift a guy up stairs?

I am so glad I am not the only one, I thought that the minute I saw how bright her eyes were, and then the color change? The more I think about, the more I want vampires better be a thing in this game lol

 

[Uncle Loco]

Great. I found the MC extremely likable, I hope he stays that way.

Do you have a schedule for releases, or is it "as is ready"? This is not an attempt to pressure, it is just me being curious of when we can expect to return to this story. When it's ready is fine, just hoping for better news ::wink::

Peace

I do not have a schedule for updates but I do want to get them out as quickly as I can. I would say every 1-2 months for an update should be a safe bet (chapter 1 was December 11th and chapter 2 was January 29th). Only because I do have a day job that gets in the way of renders as well as my learning curve to Daz and Renpy. The nice part is I have the story, dialogue, and all endings written out already for all 13 chapters. Writing will not cause any delays, it will just fall on how quickly I can get the renders done. I will post a preview render every week just to show you all progress. However, new locations and new characters take time to make as well.

 

[Kitchentable]

There are more supernatural beings than just vampires.

But seriously, bad Unlce Loco, bad. Time-out for you! Go into the corner and think about what you did!!!!
You can't just add and remove a cutie like Lily in the same chapter/episode!!!!


Interesting update to the previous chapter. Didn't see the coma, memory loss and the introduction
of a total new set of character coming with the cliffhanger of the previous chapter. Really great surprise!

Godspeed with your AVN and I am looking forward to more.

 

[Uncle Loco]

There are more supernatural beings than just vampires.

But seriously, bad Unlce Loco, bad. Time-out for you! Go into the corner and think about what you did!!!!
You can't just add and remove a cutie like Lily in the same chapter/episode!!!!


Interesting update to the previous chapter. Didn't see the coma, memory loss and the introduction
of a total new set of character coming with the cliffhanger of the previous chapter. Really great surprise!

Godspeed with your AVN and I am looking forward to more.

Thank you for the feedback, and I am glad you are enjoying the story.

Don't worry Lily is back in Chapter 3.

We have several more key harem members to introduce to the story in upcoming chapters too. Kelly is a main character even though currently she is only in the recap and closing comments.

 

[Leelaverse]

There are more supernatural beings than just vampires.

While that is true, if you add the coldness and everything else, it points to vampires, which I love most of all supernatural beings, personally lol

 

[Old Man Al]

I liked the first release. But as I am not a big fan of all the females wanting the MCs dick without any visible reason - harem or not -, that cooled my first enthusiasm down a bit. It's a just boring if I don't need to "work" for women to want the MC - imo of course.
I will check again with later updates, though and hopefully it becomes a bit more than "porn logic" story-wise again.

 

[Uncle Loco]

I liked the first release. But as I am not a big fan of all the females wanting the MCs dick without any visible reason - harem or not -, that cooled my first enthusiasm down a bit. It's a just boring if I don't need to "work" for women to want the MC - imo of course.
I will check again with later updates, though and hopefully it becomes a bit more than "porn logic" story-wise again.

Thank you for the feedback and for giving my VN a try.

I do understand what you are getting at with not working hard to get the girls.

At some point, it will make more sense as to why they basically throw themselves at the MC. There are some characters that take longer to get with than others. Some are interested right away and others are but won't act on it until they are ready or the MC is ready first. It is still a lewd game too and I have to give the players a way to get action quickly too. Again I appreciate the feedback.

 

[IDjeeper]

okay so far the only little annoyance i see is that when the girls stretch out the first night of pt is that the fade to next render is to fast, some barely even clear up before fading out to the next. You put the work into making the renders give us a little time to enjoy them.

 

[Uncle Loco]

okay so far the only little annoyance i see is that when the girls stretch out the first night of pt is that the fade to next render is to fast, some barely even clear up before fading out to the next. You put the work into making the renders give us a little time to enjoy them.

Thanks for the feedback I will slow this down more in the future when I decide to use that montage/slideshow feature again or just make it click at your own pace.

 

[goulet1995]

so it seems you are willing to kill off LI's will something like that be only if you make the wrong choice or will it be cannon that 1 or more will die?

Also you have said once a LI is in your harem she wont be touched by anyone else does that mean before that they will abd it will be shown/talked about?

 

[Uncle Loco]

Also you have said once a LI is in your harem she wont be touched by anyone else does that mean before that they will abd it will be shown/talked about?

You will never see a LI or potential LI with any other male. There will be a scene where 2 LI are together with the MC though, they will mess around with each other, but only when the MC is around and never without him. Diamonds talked about her past with the MC in chapter one, but I never showed anything to back up her story, nor do I plan too for her or any other LI.

 

[Pinsel]

where is the first page gone?

 

[Uncle Loco]

where is the first page gone?

I assume you mean chapter 1. Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 are combined and currently, I plan to keep all updates like that going forward until the size gets too big.

 

[HentaiKami]

Like the characters so far, though still don't really care for the 4th wall breaking stuff at the end of chapter 2. Pity that nurse Veronica isn't part of the harem, damn she was fine looking nurse.

 

[Uncle Loco]

Like the characters so far, though still don't really care for the 4th wall breaking stuff at the end of chapter 2. Pity that nurse Veronica isn't part of the harem, damn she was fine looking nurse.

Who knows she might come back later.

 

[boobsrcool]

I liked the first release. But as I am not a big fan of all the females wanting the MCs dick without any visible reason - harem or not -, that cooled my first enthusiasm down a bit. It's a just boring if I don't need to "work" for women to want the MC - imo of course.
I will check again with later updates, though and hopefully it becomes a bit more than "porn logic" story-wise again.

i think well get an explanation in game for the peepeelust from the ladies

 

[markel1000]

I do not have a schedule for updates but I do want to get them out as quickly as I can. I would say every 1-2 months for an update should be a safe bet (chapter 1 was December 11th and chapter 2 was January 29th). Only because I do have a day job that gets in the way of renders as well as my learning curve to Daz and Renpy. The nice part is I have the story, dialogue, and all endings written out already for all 13 chapters. Writing will not cause any delays, it will just fall on how quickly I can get the renders done. I will post a preview render every week just to show you all progress. However, new locations and new characters take time to make as well.

Nice so just renders than so game most likely finished by December or January