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I understand where they are coming from and I did try to make it as clear as possible they are off-limits.
However, the twins and TKA are very important to the journey of the MC from going from a push-over nobody to someone important. Yes right now the women in this story take initiative for most things, but that will slowly change. I know not everyone reads all the dialog so it is easy to miss how the MC is changing. He is struggling with memory loss, and a fear of being left alone again. His family all turned their backs on him and he does not know why. He wants to please people and fears that his actions may push people away. Maybe my writing is not as good as I hoped, but this is the struggle of the MC. Events in future chapters will show his growth as he is willing to take on a more dominate role and not be pushed around.
However, the twins and TKA are very important to the journey of the MC from going from a push-over nobody to someone important. Yes right now the women in this story take initiative for most things, but that will slowly change. I know not everyone reads all the dialog so it is easy to miss how the MC is changing. He is struggling with memory loss, and a fear of being left alone again. His family all turned their backs on him and he does not know why. He wants to please people and fears that his actions may push people away. Maybe my writing is not as good as I hoped, but this is the struggle of the MC. Events in future chapters will show his growth as he is willing to take on a more dominate role and not be pushed around.
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As the story progresses you will understand why things happen the way they do. Alexis does fear and respects TKA, and you will learn why in future chapters. She also is struggling with her own issues too. I think Chapter 5 will start to explain things better when the MC sits down with Alexis and has that well-needed detailed conversation.
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Yes - the whine is strong in here lately. You do you UncleLoco - stay true to your story and carry on. It's great as it is, and like all books/movies we have to wait to see 'what happens next'. Looking forward to more!!
I had to replay it from the start because I had forgotten the story and plot.
And I mean the MC is recovering from bad things.
I think he is doing fine. And will evolve. But still recovering.
I didn't think that the twins were any Li at all. And that's fine.
I mean the MC can build his own harem if he likes.
But the story is good and the plot is interesting.
For a moment I thought there were some
supernatural stuff going on.
From an angle it looked like Charlotte had fangs,
and at an other scene it looked like Alexis put up a force wall.
But I think maybe I should check my eyes
But so far it's a great game.
Thanks for creating it !
And I mean the MC is recovering from bad things.
I think he is doing fine. And will evolve. But still recovering.
I didn't think that the twins were any Li at all. And that's fine.
I mean the MC can build his own harem if he likes.
But the story is good and the plot is interesting.
For a moment I thought there were some
supernatural stuff going on.
From an angle it looked like Charlotte had fangs,
and at an other scene it looked like Alexis put up a force wall.
But I think maybe I should check my eyes
But so far it's a great game.
Thanks for creating it !
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There is.
One of the siblings during the job called the MC mortal and wanted to have a taste. She also mentioned something about Alexis being his creator but MC corrected her and said mother and didn't know what a creator was.
Sounds suspiciously like Vampires.
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Yes, you are right. Think I kind of missed that.
I read it but didn't think much of it.
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About the Twins, sorry I need to say this:
It is explained on the after credits why and who they are. That they are the "girls" of a deceased friend of the Dev.
BUT
Even if the Dev hadn't put that disclaimer/warning/explanation, it really wasn't needed. Many Harem games HAVE married women that aren't and never will be part of the harem, whether they are attractive or not is even MORE irrelevant. That they refer to their SO as "Daddy" or "Master" or whatever is absolutely none of our business.
Just imagine they are 2 ugly gremlins (not the cute female versions with plump bottoms and generous tits) and move on.
Peace
It is explained on the after credits why and who they are. That they are the "girls" of a deceased friend of the Dev.
BUT
Even if the Dev hadn't put that disclaimer/warning/explanation, it really wasn't needed. Many Harem games HAVE married women that aren't and never will be part of the harem, whether they are attractive or not is even MORE irrelevant. That they refer to their SO as "Daddy" or "Master" or whatever is absolutely none of our business.
Just imagine they are 2 ugly gremlins (not the cute female versions with plump bottoms and generous tits) and move on.
Peace
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not bad game so far but kinda makes me sad if you dont take the harem route it comes to a abrupt end. instead of the story continuing on with lily. Well i can't really say a completely comes to a abrupt end their are a couple scene after you pick that route (don't want spoil any of it). But other then that not bad keep it up.
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MC: Now this is a harem game, right there. THE QUINTESSENTIAL FAMILY FRIENDLY AWESOME HAREM GAME.
There is a happy end we owe it to MC to go for at least once.
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Yes, she does fear them but it is also a respect thing as well. You will learn more about this in the future.
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You're doing fine. Some folks are just a bit mental on these forums.
I didn't realize all the commotion was over BB and SB!
God I remember them from the WVM thread and the funny conversations Krypt Angel used to post. Sad to hear he passed
Weren't they styled on Bailey from WVM?
God I remember them from the WVM thread and the funny conversations Krypt Angel used to post. Sad to hear he passed
Weren't they styled on Bailey from WVM?
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I didn't realize all the commotion was over BB and SB!
God I remember them from the WVM thread and the funny conversations Krypt Angel used to post. Sad to hear he passed
Weren't they styled on Bailey from WVM?
Yes, they are, and I am happy to hear you remember them and TKA.
Oh man who could forget his posts, they were so entertaining. Bailey was one of my favorites as well, so I could dig his Cult of Bailey
Oh and just to say as well, digging your VN so far. Keep up the good work
P.S. I noticed your Alexis has a very uncanny similarity to Stacy....
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Oh geez, I wonder whyP.S. I noticed your Alexis has a very uncanny similarity to Stacy....