VN Ren'Py Completed The List [v0.13] [Uncle Loco]

[e6mill]

3 different LIs who think it's ok to not tell the man they are preg? that's *real* fucked up, IMO a dealbreaker against their character, and should be illegal. really turned me off this series

Kinda has to be that way. Bc the player can choose to cut some of them off so which of them is having kid(s) can change. It hasn't been very long yet either. I'm kinda surprised they even realize already TBH.

 

[Quetzzz]

Kinda has to be that way. Bc the player can choose to cut some of them off so which of them is having kid(s) can change. It hasn't been very long yet either. I'm kinda surprised they even realize already TBH.

Two out of three of them are mandatory.

I kinda get the Kelly & Madison interplay, where Madison doesn't want to add to Kelly's pain.
But, I wish Madison would only keep it a secret from Rob because he appeared doubtful about having wanted children before he turned. I think it would make sense for Madison to wait a month or two before telling him, to be certain the pregnancy took, and to get to know Rob better in the meantime. She might also consider not wanting to add more worry to Rob's already stressed un-life in the short term. The whole Kelly thing just didn't work for me.

 

[Uncle Loco]

3 different LIs who think it's ok to not tell the man they are preg? that's *real* fucked up, IMO a dealbreaker against their character, and should be illegal. really turned me off this series

There is an actual reason for all of this. It will play out in the story as we move forward. I will say what happened to Kelly will be addressed first though.

Madison is the tricky one for sure as she was initially just trying to look out for Kelly. With her staying in town and the others leaving it will give her some time to work things out. There also might be other factors at play as well. Does Eve have something to do with it, maybe Lilith or what's with the owl and cat?

Now the saddest one is if Gabi is in your harem. Now, I won't get into this in the actual story but Nathan is preventing Gabi from telling Rob with the mind trick. I might add something later in the story to go into some details but it is not in the cards at the moment.

I won't speak on the Kelly part here but that will come out in the story.

 

[AkaQ]

Just finished this and... meh.
I don't mean to be mean but I regret playing this. It's not bad, it's just incredibly mediocre.
The girls aren't ugly, they're just okay. Narrative is dragged out and often monotonous. Sex animations are a bit laggy.
Frustrating and open-ended ending - A huge "To be Continued (Maybe?)". And MC's wife, the main LI, dies lol.

 

[FatGiant]

Just finished this and... meh.
I don't mean to be mean but I regret playing this. It's not bad, it's just incredibly mediocre.
The girls aren't ugly, they're just okay. Narrative is dragged out and often monotonous. Sex animations are a bit laggy.
Frustrating and open-ended ending - A huge "To be Continued (Maybe?)". And MC's wife, the main LI, dies lol.

Clearly, you don't mean to be mean... Very clearly...

Subjective points apart... the "To Be Continued" is not a maybe, it is already on the way, on the game "The Perfect Town".

One other bit of information: This is Game #1 of a 5 games series. So, get down of that horse, get back into the Saloon and keep going, you cowboy you...

Also, I don't mean to be mean, but I also regret reading your incredibly uninformed comment.

 

[AkaQ]

Clearly, you don't mean to be mean... Very clearly...

Subjective points apart... the "To Be Continued" is not a maybe, it is already on the way, on the game "The Perfect Town".

One other bit of information: This is Game #1 of a 5 games series. So, get down of that horse, get back into the Saloon and keep going, you cowboy you...

Also, I don't mean to be mean, but I also regret reading your incredibly uninformed comment.

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You seem to be really hurt by my comment lol. Are you the dev on another account?

And there's nothing uninformed about my comment... as a "forum fanatic" that you are, you should know that this type of game never has a certain future, and at any moment a dev can disappear and the project can be dropped. "Maybe" means exactly this possibility and/or uncertainty.

I can see the dev's passion for the story he created, but all aspects of the game from renders and animations to writing are highly average, a just okay game, a 3/5. And this first game was enough to make me lose interest in the rest.

 

[FatGiant]

You seem to be really hurt by my comment lol. Are you the dev on another account?

And there's nothing uninformed about my comment... as a "forum fanatic" that you are, you should know that this type of game never has a certain future, and at any moment a dev can disappear and the project can be dropped. "Maybe" means exactly this possibility and/or uncertainty.

I can see the dev's passion for the story he created, but all aspects of the game from renders and animations to writing are highly average, a just okay game, a 3/5. And this first game was enough to make me lose interest in the rest.

Awww, how sweet of you to think I'm a Dev. Thank you.

The point is, the To Be Continued part... is already continued... so, yeah, it was very, very ignorant.

Lose all the interest you want.

Okay Game? Nice! In a world filled with mediocrity, like this Forum, Okay is really, really above average. The average, if you include the sandbox inutilities, is about 1,5 / 5. If you include all the non Ren'Py, it drops even lower... so, Okay, is a very high compliment indeed. It is also a first attempt from a rather inexperienced Dev, the whole thing improved over time, and you know it did.

What really matters, is that from a first attempt at doing something like this, learning DAZ3D, learning to write for a visual medium (it is completely different than for a blind medium), learning to code, learning to deal with a bevy of critics that never tried to do any of it, but feel entitled to have a say as if they are masters, it is truly a GREAT JOB that Uncle Loco did, if he merits a 3 out of 5 rating from your very experienced and capable person.

Peace

 

[AkaQ]

Awww, how sweet of you to think I'm a Dev. Thank you.

The point is, the To Be Continued part... is already continued... so, yeah, it was very, very ignorant.

Lose all the interest you want.

Okay Game? Nice! In a world filled with mediocrity, like this Forum, Okay is really, really above average. The average, if you include the sandbox inutilities, is about 1,5 / 5. If you include all the non Ren'Py, it drops even lower... so, Okay, is a very high compliment indeed. It is also a first attempt from a rather inexperienced Dev, the whole thing improved over time, and you know it did.

What really matters, is that from a first attempt at doing something like this, learning DAZ3D, learning to write for a visual medium (it is completely different than for a blind medium), learning to code, learning to deal with a bevy of critics that never tried to do any of it, but feel entitled to have a say as if they are masters, it is truly a GREAT JOB that Uncle Loco did, if he merits a 3 out of 5 rating from your very experienced and capable person.

Peace

k ✌

 

[John Podi]

Cute shout out to WVM

 

[DaFinker]

You seem to be really hurt by my comment lol. Are you the dev on another account?

And there's nothing uninformed about my comment... as a "forum fanatic" that you are, you should know that this type of game never has a certain future, and at any moment a dev can disappear and the project can be dropped. "Maybe" means exactly this possibility and/or uncertainty.

I can see the dev's passion for the story he created, but all aspects of the game from renders and animations to writing are highly average, a just okay game, a 3/5. And this first game was enough to make me lose interest in the rest.

You won't be missed. We realize that someone into... whatever that thing is you're into... just doesn't have the cerebral horsepower for VNs with a story. Ta!

 

[Deathcon1000]

Honestly just decided to try this since it had the completed tag and really glad I did. With a lot of harem games you get the sex scenes and very little actual "story" to go with it. This game seems to be different as it was the story itself that kept me invested and the scenes were just a bonus. Even though renders/animations were choppy at the beginning, near the end you could definitely see the dev's progression. Will definitely check out the next game in the series after a few more updates drop. Best of luck!!!

 

[Uncle Loco]

Honestly just decided to try this since it had the completed tag and really glad I did. With a lot of harem games you get the sex scenes and very little actual "story" to go with it. This game seems to be different as it was the story itself that kept me invested and the scenes were just a bonus. Even though renders/animations were choppy at the beginning, near the end you could definitely see the dev's progression. Will definitely check out the next game in the series after a few more updates drop. Best of luck!!!

Thank you very much for the positive feedback. I am glad to hear you enjoyed the story. This game was always supposed to be story focused with the lewd content sprinkled in to make it fun.

I know my animations are still not that great. But I just can't figure them quite out yet. Maybe one day, but I do feel I improved them quite a bit since the early chapters.

The Perfect Town is the next game in the saga. It will be a short side story but it will really open up the world of darkness even more. I know you get a small taste in chapter 13, but there is so much more to come.

 

[Uncle Loco]

Cute shout out to WVM

I really enjoy adding a small shout out to a lot of my favorite developers and games. Some work right into the story and others are shown on a TV or laptop. There is at least one in every chapter.

 

[Uncle Loco]

Just finished this and... meh.
I don't mean to be mean but I regret playing this. It's not bad, it's just incredibly mediocre.
The girls aren't ugly, they're just okay. Narrative is dragged out and often monotonous. Sex animations are a bit laggy.
Frustrating and open-ended ending - A huge "To be Continued (Maybe?)". And MC's wife, the main LI, dies lol.

Sorry the game wasn't enjoyable for you, but thank you for giving it a shot and playing the whole game. I appreciate all feedback even when it is not positive. I will say the saga will continue as this was just the first game in the planned 5 game saga.

I know my story is not for everyone, but I appreciate everyone that plays it.

 

[John Podi]

I really enjoy adding a small shout out to a lot of my favorite developers and games. Some work right into the story and others are shown on a TV or laptop. There is at least one in every chapter.

What would be even cooler is if you got permission to actually slip one of their characters into a cameo in your story.

 

[Uncle Loco]

I forgot to post this here earlier, but the March Madness Queen of the List bracket challenge is back this year. Round 1 voting is open with 32 lovely ladies (well 34 if you count both twins) who will come out on top as The Queen of The List Saga 2025. Will Kelly hold onto her crown or will someone else come to knock her off the top spot? Get your votes in before round 1 ends.

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[FatGiant]

I forgot to post this here earlier, but the March Madness Queen of the List bracket challenge is back this year. Round 1 voting is open with 32 lovely ladies (well 34 if you count both twins) who will come out on top as The Queen of The List Saga 2025. Will Kelly hold onto her crown or will someone else come to knock her off the top spot? Get your votes in before round 1 ends.

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Voted.

 

[Bomber86]

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done (i hope, Gabi win)

 

[Uncle Loco]

Just about anyone could win, and I will always post the results for each round. I know when I checked the other day most of the votes where 1 sided, but there are a few very very close matches.

 

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Replay Gallery
you need to start a new run to unlock the replays !!
the gallery using persistent variables


i took the liberty to make a gallery for this great game

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extract attached .zip into the gamefolder (where the .exe is)
overwrite if asked - make backup first if needed
affected files : screens.rpy // script.rpy
(the quickmenu is altered to my personal preference)

the gallery is available through this button

(Uncle Loco may add a button for the mainmenu)

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this is a massive overhaul of the script Uncle Loco
it will not work with the namechanger mod until KoGa3 updates his version

(i did not fixed the gabriela "bug" about pregnancy at the end - thats the dev's job )

disclaimer :
i hereby grant Uncle Loco permission to use this scripts as he fits - for this game or future ones

if any moderator would add this to the OP please
monroe

Using this, the compressed version 0.13 and incest patch but it doesn't seem to work
(temporarily cannot add picture due to forum update)