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Boudicart

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Nov 14, 2018
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Wow, that was fucking short. Not much passion put into this one, you can clearly see that.
He started hiring people to write for him. It's clear this is not his writing and it shows. That's why the passion is missing. Literally who is ErikaWinters and why does she have her own logo in the start screen?
 
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Admiral Wanker

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Personally I would like him to add new stuff to the Adelaide Inn like Mira joining an Orc tribe. And redo one of the routes of the knight ending. Because whether or not Gunter chooses to be voluntarily imprisoned or not, it leads to the same ending. I think one of the routes should be a self loathing ending where Gunther is filled with resentment at seeing Mira pregnant with the Knight's baby.
I would want more stuff around the merchant, he can give you some other items which you can play different scenarios with each unique ending like duplicating your wife for more "profit", turning her into a lizard type succubus that just fucks to death all the man and destroys the city, turning yourself female and having sex with her or get corrupted too(god knows how that would turn out to be) or mind control her into being an obedient deadpan sex doll that still has sex with all the men for money but she would always be loyal to you, pretty much because your control her mind but the trade off is that she wouldnt never go back to recover her original personality but at least since she has not sense of self that means she can fuck really hardcore without getting tired.

Since i watched Taka84's videos about Sakuya being brainwashed i developed a mindcontrol, brainwashing, hypnosis fetish. :FacePalm:
Hmm i hope one day Ntrman makes one game focused on those concepts.
 
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Admiral Wanker

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He started hiring people to write for him. It's clear this is not his writing and it shows. Literally who is ErikaWinters and why does she have her own logo?
Indepent writter by commission probably, tho the general direction, music in combination with the characters personalities gives the whole game a aura of satire for lack of better word, like the intro feels exactly like that, and the whole angry mob doesnt feel dangerous enough.
 

SGod

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Aug 26, 2021
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I dont know who's this ErikaWinters, is she famous? did she write all NTRMAN previous game?
 
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fair enough but then about the ending:

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I just skipped through for the porn so I'm curious what you are talking about, are you talking about when mc was gonna swing his sword? if so, you need to go back for a different dialog option, I think it was you need to fix the hat.

with that said, how do you guys spoiler tag?
 

Seujiro

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Mar 4, 2018
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Kind of boring, to be honest...it's tedious that all decisions don't have any real effect on the plot, since they simply define if a scene is seen or not. There is a single path where all decisions converge (like the Rural Homecoming style). I expected it to be more similar to the structure of Adelaide Inn, his best game in my opinion, where your choices can change the story and the scenes you get (I'm not talking about avoiding NTR, btw)
 
Oct 18, 2021
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Rushed, Incredibly Short, No build at all. Probably one of his worst works if not of all time.
But who am I to complain it's his work, Also expected a bit of shota over here but looks like he is not going back to that genre.
Anyways only good thing about this is the art, Just view the cgs is not worth a download and playtime.
 

randomguy6516265165

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Rushed, Incredibly Short, No build at all. Probably one of his worst works if not of all time.
But who am I to complain it's his work, Also expected a bit of shota over here but looks like he is not going back to that genre.
Anyways only good thing about this is the art, Just view the cgs is not worth a download and playtime.
he will probably make shota again only that the game wont be uploaded here
 

Admiral Wanker

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I just skipped through for the porn so I'm curious what you are talking about, are you talking about when mc was gonna swing his sword? if so, you need to go back for a different dialog option, I think it was you need to fix the hat.

with that said, how do you guys spoiler tag?
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Also there is an icon with a flag, that is the spoiler option.
 

LordFrz

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Loved it,m sure its short, but I dont need every game to be a long epic. Its just a short quick piece of smut. Hes also got a bunch of other stuff in the pipe coming soon.

Lookin at some of the review complaints and it seems some people never played a visual novel before, lol. Like you mad the gallery has too much text before the sex? Bro, switch it to clips and your at porn instantly with no text. lol

I get people were hopin for a longer more complete game, and the corruption is pretty much instant. All valid complaints since NTRMAN gets so hyped up. But I like having a nice short something every now and then, and this is way more quality than just about everything I've seen released recently.

Personally, Id would love to see somethin like this every now and then from him. But knowing NTRMAN, this will be worked on a lot more in the future because people will bitch about it. I mean, looking at what we have, its pretty much set up for future routes. If we get more coo, if he leaves it as is, cool as well. If all he ever released from now on was 1hr VNs, then id be happy too. I love his art, and animation style.
 

Admiral Wanker

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Jul 1, 2019
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i dont mind the rush but also i wonder if Ntrman is aware of this complain? its seems to be done on porpurse: the heroine gets convinced/forced to cheat offscreen for the first time, then proceeds with MC being oblivious to the fact she is blushing along side another man(not option to discover her getting tempted/forced to cheat) and then next you discover her falling hard for that guy.
 
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