It is difficult to debug your issue without knowing things like:
1. Which web-browser you are using. (brand, version, 32/64bit)
2. Which Operating System you are running it on. (brand, version, edition, 32/64bit)
3. [Mobile Devices] If your device supports accessing local media files.
But the most common causes for the types of issues you are having are:
1. "Blank screen" - This game requires JavaScript to be enabled for local files. Some versions of Internet Explorer disable this by default (this may also be true for some of the lesser known web-browsers) so you will need to enable it.
2. "No Images" - The media related folders & files within the archive need to be extracted on to your local hard-drive correctly.
Some File Manager have the ability to view the contents of an archive file and to open HTML files while doing so, this is not the same as extracting an archive.
3. "No valid storage warning" - Twine based games use your web-browser's Local Storage feature to track your progress, and this feature doesn't exist on older web-browsers. You can also receive this warning in some modern web-browsers (like IE & Edge) if they have disabled access to Local Storage for locally opened HTML files.
