VN Ren'Py The Missing Part [Ch. 1] [jPk vns]

[Fun Shaundi]

I'm a sucker for more serious stories, and damn.
At first I was slightly confused as to way the first bits of the story were going so fast, and then it all made sense.
Solid start. The only things I personally have issues are:

- Mc's clothes at the beginning of the story.
- Some of the music sound too cliche and cheap for a story with such tone.

The rest of it? Great.

 

[TheExorcist-]

Dude, I almost cried, what an entrance.

 

[SARBASST]

It's a very bad idea to introduce pretty chicks

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[Aurora. Johnson]

will check this out seems interesting

Are you fighting with dad again?

 

[Sir_Lancelot71]

Sad beginning but a very good start. Looks like an emotional rollercoaster. It won't be easy to continue the story at this level. Good luck and I’m looking forward to seeing how it goes.

 

[HELIO CESAR]

 

[FatGiant]

I thought about writing a review, but, there's not enough to review yet.

However, there's more than enough to feel. Damn...

 

[MrBenny]

... Thx 4 the share ...

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Such a GD true statement.

 

[spanner52]

Wow, what a story such a sad start, looking forward to the next chapter.

 

[rogokin]

Holy shit talk about a sad but good first release. Good job dev.

 

[godscoper]

It's a very bad idea to introduce pretty chicks

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[Blue5591]

That hit very hard. Writing had amazing tempo. I'm very interested because I can't predict how this will go. It's very hard to create anticipation like this did, especially when relying mostly on writing.

 

[robrize2169]

oh man, i haven't been hit in the feels like that since Dreams of Reality and the death of the daughter.

 

[fidgetspinner]

Holy shit that's one way to make sure your game has no incest in it.

 

[Waifuhunter666]

right poor MC daughter. Hope wife and daughter at least comes back even as spirts

Use spoiler tag

 

[Rodrigoofb]

Well... that escalated quickly. What happened to the MC and his family is something many people never recover from, i know i wouldn't. Overall it was a great prologue, i just don't know how we're gonna get a harem game out of this story. At this point i don't trust the dev to not start killing more LIs and family members.

 

[robrize2169]

will be interested to know what happened to Ella's parents. perhaps the illness that killed Ella and Maddy was something that runs in her family. the dev should have touched on this a bit in the prologue.

 

[Bill Temple]

damn this is a first game that i dont even have a chace to extract before my nortons deleted it before i could even open it

really, this is the first time? Norton often WS.Reputation's my downloads for new releases. Maybe I've been acting as the test machine for you, so your downloads don't get nixed.

 

[LinXuan67]

It's a sad story

 

[Miyavibz]

Dude what a "Horrible" start for a story

I cried a little (makes me think about all the family member i lost this past few years + my kitty lovely)
Promising game and good way to tell a story but maybe it's gona be a good idea to put a trigger or a warning for ''difficult content''