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VN Ren'Py The Missing Part [Ch. 2] [jPk vns]

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Maviarab

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Raynare69 said:
I agree with you, I even began skimming through some of the first parts of the game. For one reason or another, most of the earlier parts of the prologue didn't sit well with me, and as you can see but what I wrote, I almost gave up on it early as well, but I'm glad I didn't.

Honestly my first thoughts went something like:
Why is the MC being dragged around like this? Oh here we go, we (the readers) are getting forced into a relationship that's going to end badly one way or another, aren't we? Is she going to die in a car accident? Is she going to fall into a coma and the MC moves on in life, finds a new partner, only for her to wake up from the coma after he's started a new relationship? What forced cliché "tear jerker" intro are we being dragged through with this narrative?

...And I didn't really feel anything. At all. Not until one specific moment, and it hit me hard. The part where the MC is on the street and a car is about to hit the MC, and the scene flashes. I guess you could say his life flashed before his eyes. He sees his wife and kid and gets to talk to them, though it was all in his head, when they said their final goodbyes and helped him move forward with one final push, in a literal and figurative sense, out of the way of the car. That's where it all started for me and I was hooked. I wanted to find out where the MC would go for here, how his journey through life would begin again, if ever.
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Yeah my issue is mainly that nothing was at all realistic in the opening. Nothing. Complete and utter fantasy from his age (to how old he looks), his dress, style, what is said about it...the way he acts....
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However, as you say and I said in my previous, after the first couple of time skips.....it does become a seriously good VN, well written mostly and definitely now has me hooked. I would say my only complaint from a plot perspective is that this is yet another dev following the latest trend of having everything interconnected and intertwinnied. It's already an old trope and done to death, not just here but in mainstream media also. I just can't wait (/s) until we find out that Hailey is also somehow interrelated to us/Ella too.
 
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Short chapter but good release rythm, I hope dev can keep up. So far so good.

There's something I might not understand in the timeline, or i've missed...a part. Hum sorry :cool:. how long did MC took for grieving, out of his office? I understood a month passed since his daughter's death (which seems very short for me, but anyway, it's not me), but some phrases made me think it was way longer (the "rusty" boss, the office changes, etc.).Or has he stopped working eight years earlier to take care of his daughter? But that would be weird to even consider that possibility. Or he has a really cool and understanding business partner.

Beside that, I would be quite disapointed if "Lily" in the prologue was in fact Lisa, but MC and her don't recognize each other 10/15 years later (or so). And I also hope that you don't have to pursue every LI to get the "good" ending (or let's say "hopeful"): I have no interest for the nurse nor the trainee. And for the sister neither ^^
 
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Nice_Rabbit said:
Short chapter but good release rythm, I hope dev can keep up. So far so good.

There's something I might not understand in the timeline, or i've missed...a part. Hum sorry :cool:. how long did MC took for grieving, out of his office? I understood a month passed since his daughter's death (which seems very short for me, but anyway, it's not me), but some phrases made me think it was way longer (the "rusty" boss, the office changes, etc.).Or has he stopped working eight years earlier to take care of his daughter? But that would be weird to even consider that possibility. Or he has a really cool and understanding business partner.

Beside that, I would be quite disapointed if "Lily" in the prologue was in fact Lisa, but MC and her don't recognize each other 10/15 years later (or so). And I also hope that you don't have to pursue every LI to get the "good" ending (or let's say "hopeful"): I have no interest for the nurse nor the trainee. And for the sister neither ^^
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It is never stated but he obviously took a considerable amount of time away from the office to raise Maddie. Whether he did a lot of work from home instead also isn't stated but would make sense, he could do his side of projects from the comfort of his home with Maddie around rather than leaving her in the hands of housekeepers/babysitters etc.
 
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Maviarab said:
Yeah my issue is mainly that nothing was at all realistic in the opening. Nothing. Complete and utter fantasy from his age (to how old he looks), his dress, style, what is said about it...the way he acts....
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However, as you say and I said in my previous, after the first couple of time skips.....it does become a seriously good VN, well written mostly and definitely now has me hooked. I would say my only complaint from a plot perspective is that this is yet another dev following the latest trend of having everything interconnected and intertwinnied. It's already an old trope and done to death, not just here but in mainstream media also. I just can't wait (/s) until we find out that Hailey is also somehow interreated to us/Ella too.
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Points 1, 4, and 6 were all things that gave me pause as well. The best stories are the ones that are the most believable.

About interconnected characters... In some stories having intertwined characters feels acceptable, but there comes a point where it becomes too coincidental and it feels unrealistic like some magic red strings of fate tying people together and bringing them together or such nonsense. Those kind of fairy tales can make for some good stories, but to a point. There's a limit for everything and some of the best stories I feel are the ones that feel plausible. Realistic. Believable. Relatable. Regardless of the setting.
 
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Maviarab said:
It is never stated but he obviously took a considerable amount of time away from the office to raise Maddie. Whether he did a lot of work from home instead also isn't stated but would make sense, he could do his side of projects from the comfort of his home with Maddie around rather than leaving her in the hands of housekeepers/babysitters etc.
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Thanks for your input. I hope it will be explained later.

By the way, I also disagree with MC and his friends about hiding his losses to his LIs, as it's a huge part of who he is now. For a one night stand, of course you shouldn't talk about it. But to restart a life, it seems like a source of future problems (or lazy writing with easily avoidables dramas). I hope it's not the easy path chosen by dev.
 
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Nice_Rabbit said:
By the way, I also disagree with MC and his friends about hiding his losses to his LIs, as it's a huge part of who he is now. For a one night stand, of course you shouldn't talk about it. But to restart a life, it seems like a source of future problems (or lazy writing with easily avoidables dramas). I hope it's not the easy path chosen by dev.
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there is only something serious with Sarah so far where the topic really came up, and yeah, it felt a bit dishonest how he was bending the truth about his losses. He didn't actually lie about it but I think it'd be better if he came clear sooner than later if he considers starting an actual relationship. I can understand some of it is fresh, and honestly can't really tell how someone would act in his place, but going forward it's not going to work being so cagey about it.
 
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Overview:
You are a man who has lost what was most important to him. In the prologue, learn all about the events that led you to the current point in your life,
Then decide for yourself how to deal with your grief. Will you find a way out of your pain, or will you trade one emptiness for another?
Meet your potential love interests who can accompany you on your way out or watch you as you continue your descent.​


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Release Date: 2025-03-14
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The start off this game like actually broke me bro like wtf
 
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Gorse said:
Made some Fan Sigs for "THE MISSING PART" for all of you to use and enjoy:

HAILEY - Fan Signature
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And jPk vns : thanks for your story & good fortune with the future development! All the best & fingers crossed!
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please make one with Ella.
 
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there is only something serious with Sarah so far where the topic really came up, and yeah, it felt a bit dishonest how he was bending the truth about his losses. He didn't actually lie about it but I think it'd be better if he came clear sooner than later if he considers starting an actual relationship. I can understand some of it is fresh, and honestly can't really tell how someone would act in his place, but going forward it's not going to work being so cagey about it.
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I think his behavior is fine, you simply dont trauma dump all this heavy stuff during a first or second date. Im not even sure the MC sees what hes doing as actively dating and more like trying to fill a void.

With Hailey and Lisa he isnt there yet and with Sarah it would just have ruined the date to drop all this heavy baggage on her.

And i agree with Vicky that its good for him to be involved with people who dont know (yet) about it and dont look at him with pity in their eyes all the time and walk on eggshells. He was 6 weeks in his head alone, he needs distraction and some fun if possible to get any motivation to keep going first imo.

If things will turn towards a serious relationship with one of the LI's, his past obviously has to be revealed to them and if only for the reason for them to make a informed decision if they can stomach a relationship like that. Its not easy to date someone who lost the love of his life i imagine.

Well, lets just date Madelyn and pretend shes Ella, sounds healthy right? :BootyTime:
 
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I like your game.

But why give us the option of driving the car instead of Sarah if you're just gonna use the same render of her sitting in the driver's seat in either case? I don't like continuity errors!!
 
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