Yeah my issue is mainly that nothing was at all realistic in the opening. Nothing. Complete and utter fantasy from his age (to how old he looks), his dress, style, what is said about it...the way he acts....
However, as you say and I said in my previous, after the first couple of time skips.....it does become a seriously good VN, well written mostly and definitely now has me hooked. I would say my only complaint from a plot perspective is that this is yet another dev following the latest trend of having everything interconnected and intertwinnied. It's already an old trope and done to death, not just here but in mainstream media also. I just can't wait (/s) until we find out that Hailey is also somehow interrelated to us/Ella too.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Yeah i feel the same, there is a very sudden and huge gap in quality, everything got kinda out of nowhere so much better, even the MC's looks lolAgree with many of your points.
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The way he talked about his mom wanting to "show him off" and is only competing about status with her "friends" all kinda sounded very far-fetched too, like a clownish evil/dumb potrayal of the upper class. And i struggle to imagine how such a shitty and insecure guy ("i dont want people to talk bad about me when they see us together" buhuuu) into such a cool dude.
But i guess that was Ella magic
I was close to quitting this avn in the prologue (im very glad i kept going) too
But how do you get the impression of him being lead around by a dog collar? I just see a guy going with the flow, trying to distract himself as good as possible. Care to show some examples? Im curious