VN Ren'Py The Missing Part [Ch.3] [jPk vns]

[Dessolos]

Come on, Sarah, this is just an easy level. She's desperate to get a good guy. But she's not as pushy and clingy as you're making her out to be. She's open and sincere with what she wants, and she'll accept your decision and leave if you don't want to be with her.

How are you going to handle Lisa with that attitude? I'm not even talking about the expert level you need to take on Hailey. And I don't even understand that monk playthrough, it's the broken psycho MC path; jPk should have gave an option to finish it at the bridge!

maybe monk route = killed by the axe murder but I agree she isn't really pushy or clingy at all expect when she is acting like a friend but that is normal

 

[rodneyeatme]

maybe monk route = killed by the axe murder but I agree she isn't really pushy or clingy at all expect when she is acting like a friend but that is normal

Sarah does have that fairly dramatic "I will not be ignored" moment in the hospital lobby when MC breaks his phone after getting called in by Dr. Whatscongentialmean.

The monk route is so silly I almost admire it. At least he won't have to watch MC go catatonic after learning the only reason he even met Sarah is because Maddie died. Gonna be a heavy one for Sarah bros.

 

[Dessolos]

. At least he won't have to watch MC go catatonic after learning the only reason he even met Sarah is because Maddie died. Gonna be a heavy one for Sarah bros.

Nah I been waiting for this since the prologue so I can't wait even if it's heavy for the MC won't be for me cause something I been looking forward too

 

[Elduriel]

wouldn't be a TMP update without someone cutting onions in the room

 

[RNasc4444]

Come on, Sarah, this is just an easy level. She's desperate to get a good guy. But she's not as pushy and clingy as you're making her out to be. She's open and sincere with what she wants, and she'll accept your decision and leave if you don't want to be with her.

Good! To the farm with her! I've grown wary of readheaded nurses that seem a little "off"

How are you going to handle Lisa with that attitude? I'm not even talking about the expert level you need to take on Hailey. And I don't even understand that monk playthrough, it's the broken psycho MC path; jPk should have gave an option to finish it at the bridge!

I'm not going to handle Lisa or Hailey. I like the monk + bad ending route for this story. I genuinely think it is the more fitting one. I even consider it the happy ending. MC going out when he's ready and on his own terms. Nothing psycho about that imo. I do hope the "bad ending" path gets developed and eventually happens but not before we find out more about the MC's dad, Ella's secrets or Tracy's....mystery?

I'll maybe stray off the monk path when I like Linda enough to not be extremely bothered by her Edna Mode hairstyle

 

[Krytax123]

Good! To the farm with her! I've grown wary of readheaded nurses that seem a little "off"

I'm not going to handle Lisa or Hailey. I like the monk + bad ending route for this story. I genuinely think it is the more fitting one. I even consider it the happy ending. MC going out when he's ready and on his own terms. Nothing psycho about that imo. I do hope the "bad ending" path gets developed and eventually happens but not before we find out more about the MC's dad, Ella's secrets or Tracy's....mystery?

I'll maybe stray off the monk path when I like Linda enough to not be extremely bothered by her Edna Mode hairstyle

Yeeeeez maaaaan bro, i dont know about all of this its like whenever i have a slight problem with a LI its the same for you but x100000

Sarah is rather over the top clingy and seemed like an crazy ex (her words) but man, shes no leah

I think Lisa and Charlotte are fine, Charlotte is a bit of a merciless fucker but she doesnt mind if she gets flak back and doesnt hold a grudge over stuff like that so im inclined to think we can work with her

Sometimes having somewhat of a clash with someone can lead to more respect between each other afterwards lol

 

[RNasc4444]

Yeeeeez maaaaan bro, i dont know about all of this its like whenever i have a slight problem with a LI its the same for you but x100000

Sarah is rather over the top clingy and seemed like an crazy ex (her words) but man, shes no leah

I think Lisa and Charlotte are fine, Charlotte is a bit of a merciless fucker but she doesnt mind if she gets flak back and doesnt hold a grudge over stuff like that so im inclined to think we can work with her

Sometimes having somewhat of a clash with someone can lead to more respect between each other afterwards lol

Agree on everything but Charlotte. Lisa is great but Charlotte...there are no redeeming qualities there.

After the bridge meeting she investigates the MC and finds out who he is. Naturally she finds out what he lost and why he took a step back from the company. Yet despite knowing this she still brings it up during the meeting. She uses that knowledge to trigger a reaction from him. And why? For her own demonic selfish interests. Because she wants to know if he is someone she can use against his father. Fuck that! Fuck her!

That is straight up evil shit right there. That woman is the Devil.

 

[Rammstein1]

Agree on everything but Charlotte. Lisa is great but Charlotte...there are no redeeming qualities there.

After the bridge meeting she investigates the MC and finds out who he is. Naturally she finds out what he lost and why he took a step back from the company. Yet despite knowing this she still brings it up during the meeting. She uses that knowledge to trigger a reaction from him. And why? For her own demonic selfish interests. Because she wants to know if he is someone she can use against his father. Fuck that! Fuck her!

That is straight up evil shit right there. That woman is the Devil.

If she did it for any other reason than to fuck over daddy dearest, I'd agree. But I kinda want to see how much she wants to fuck the guy over, so I'll be lending her a helping hand.

 

[RNasc4444]

If she did it for any other reason than to fuck over daddy dearest, I'd agree. But I kinda want to see how much she wants to fuck the guy over, so I'll be lending her a helping hand.

Fair I guess but I'm on the other side. If given a chance I'll tear her and mommy dearest apart. I'm doing everything in my power to sabotage both of 'em. She seems like a woman that is used to having things go her way through lies, threats, deception and manipulation. I'm not giving her the tiniest chance to use the MC against anyone no matter how poorly they are portrayed. I don't care how much of a scumbag the father turns out to be, I'm not giving Charlotte or Claire the tiniest shred of help.

 

[Krytax123]

Agree on everything but Charlotte. Lisa is great but Charlotte...there are no redeeming qualities there.

After the bridge meeting she investigates the MC and finds out who he is. Naturally she finds out what he lost and why he took a step back from the company. Yet despite knowing this she still brings it up during the meeting. She uses that knowledge to trigger a reaction from him. And why? For her own demonic selfish interests. Because she wants to know if he is someone she can use against his father. Fuck that! Fuck her!

That is straight up evil shit right there. That woman is the Devil.

I see it slightly less evil, imo she did that to figure out if he is (still) ready to fight, a confrontation with his dad will possibly involve all kinds of nasty shit so if she would have realized that the MC cant take it (being pushed about ella and maddie), she would have hold back from involving him in her plans in the future.

Instead it seemed to give him some kind of energy/passion/will to fight back/determination which was the reaction she was hoping for.

And "using him" is relative, i would consider it more like checking out possibilitys/opporunitys, i feel like if she intends to make a move (involving the mc), she banks on the mc being willing to cooperate and it serving the MC's own interest too in some way.

It doesnt seem too unlikey that the MC would like to fuck his dad over more than he already did

 

[Dr.TSoni]

And "using him" is relative, if would consider it more like checking out possibilitys/opporunitys, i feel like if she intends to make a move (involving the mc), she banks on the mc being willing to cooperate and it serving the MC's own interest too in some way.

I strongly doubt it given the course of her conversation with the MC's mother

 

[Krytax123]

I strongly doubt it given the course of her conversation with the MC's mother

Huh why? She made a point about not intending to harm MC and involved Lily which somehow convinced Claire that shes genuine about it (i dont know why tho) so what gave you a different impression?

And im 100% convinced her love and concern for Lisa is genuine and i doubt she intends to set up Lisa's possibly life partner for failure. And her only concern about a Lisa/MC relationship seemed to be that it maybe would be hurtful for her daughter.

I kinda see it like MC owed one to Charlotte as she imo saved his life and she used that for this opportunity to see how he ticks lol

 

[Quetzzz]

Really? She doesn't seem too pushy for you? I think she's the one that creeps me out the most. She is forceful, goes wayyy too hard with someone she knows for only a couple of days. Her outburst at the hospital is a monumental red flag. She is way too much for me.

I agree. Certainly if you haven't taken her to "the special place", then her ultimatum of demanding physical intimacy is really too much.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Huh why? She made a point about not intending to harm MC and involved Lily which somehow convinced Claire that shes genuine about it (i dont know why tho) so what gave you a different impression?

She basically told her "if you help me well maybe nothing will happen to him otherwise I don't give a shit"

 

[jPk vns]

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She basically told her "if you help me well maybe nothing will happen to him otherwise I don't give a shit"

So you're saying that she made her an offer that she can't refuse?

 

[Dr.TSoni]

So you're saying that she made her an offer that she can't refuse?

XD

 

[Zorro#34]

Let's all just speed run getting married to an axe murderer, dying when she throws a jealous fit and reuniting with the fam in the afterlife

Also, happy one year anniversary! And hopefully many more to come, cheers!

Did you see that murderous look she gave Lisa? I think Lisa will be the first to die after... After those who have already died.

Lisa and The Missing (Body) Part(s)

Damn you guys, now I'm really worried what might happen on my canon run, where I'm on each of the three MGs' paths but only giving attention to Sarah. Hailey's gonna cut me into pieces which Lisa will then feed to kids in her care centre...

Really? She doesn't seem too pushy for you? I think she's the one that creeps me out the most. She is forceful, goes wayyy too hard with someone she knows for only a couple of days. Her outburst at the hospital is a monumental red flag. She is way too much for me.

All three MGs are highly competitive, but I take Sarah's demands the least seriously because she is in the weakest position to harm the MC, unlike the wealthy Lisa or his immediate work assistant Hailey. So, they all say the same things basically, but to me Sarah comes across as just being insecure, while Lisa thinks the other girls beneath her, can boss MC around if she wants, and is an overall influential foe. The young Hailey, meanwhile, can just lose her head in emotion and destroy his current project. Her ties to the MC have already started affecting work environment, as she's picking fights with a high-level employee in Linda (despite my MC having zero intimate encounters with either!) and staring down business partners.

Come on, Sarah, this is just an easy level. She's desperate to get a good guy. But she's not as pushy and clingy as you're making her out to be. She's open and sincere with what she wants, and she'll accept your decision and leave if you don't want to be with her.

How are you going to handle Lisa with that attitude? I'm not even talking about the expert level you need to take on Hailey. And I don't even understand that monk playthrough, it's the broken psycho MC path; jPk should have gave an option to finish it at the bridge!

Agreed.

 

[Maviarab]

So you're saying that she made her an offer that she can't refuse?

 

[MagicShoppe]

At least he won't have to watch MC go catatonic after learning the only reason he even met Sarah is because Maddie died. Gonna be a heavy one for Sarah bros.

This is one the most beautiful setups in this story that still looms large in the future. I'm far more interested in Sarah's reaction though, compared to MC's reaction. (And I'm mostly a Sarah bro, I guess. Hailey is too young. And Lisa is far too much like her mother than even she thinks.)

 

[MiltonPowers]

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I'll keep it short this week since nothing exciting happened, nor is it likely to happen over the next two months. Render production is going according to plan and has now exceeded 1,100 static renders for Chapter 4.

There will be a special post next Wednesday, October 15, which marks the one-year anniversary of launching the Patreon page and publishing the prologue release post.

That's it for this time. Until next week.